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程门立雪

我想D的错误是否在于a high self-esteem不能接在TO后面呢?

soloenti

D E as an adolescent   跟前面复数不吻合

yaomao

B还有错误：that指代children

cattsky

1. Authoritative parents are more likely than permissive parents to have children who as adolescents are self-confident, high in self-esteem, and responsibly independent.

是不是改成以下更好一些?

1. Authoritative parents are more likely than permissive parents to have  self-confident, high in self-esteem, and responsibly independent adolescence childern.

记得XDF老师说过N+who/which+be+adj是明显的冗赘.

另外,想问问是不是非中心词的比较肯定是错的?

例如 She is a friend of Susan rather than John.--这样有语病吗?

[此贴子已经被作者于2006-10-1 23:24:38编辑过]

ptr07

I agree on ethyl except "they are an adolescent",

罗马青年

 "ethyl "每次的解释都能让人豁然开朗，太感谢了！

不知道"ethyl "目前在哪所TOP B-SCHOOL就读？（也许已经毕业了，呵呵！）

shopgirl

以下是引用罗马青年在2007-5-28 18:19:00的发言：

 "ethyl "每次的解释都能让人豁然开朗，太感谢了！

不知道"ethyl "目前在哪所TOP B-SCHOOL就读？（也许已经毕业了，呵呵！）

我也有同感，ethyl 是一个默默无闻的大牛啊！！

GRASPDREAM

以下是引用gigiga0118在2005-8-5 13:01:00的发言：

還是不懂

B

Authoritative parents who are more likely than permissive parents to have adolescent children that are self-confident, high in self-esteem, and responsibly independent.

出了什麼問題????

没有谓语~

нандин

靠，你看A 多好啊 为什么我还选C 郁闷

latinjazz

1. Authoritative parents are more likely than permissive parents to have children who as adolescents are self-confident, high in self-esteem, and responsibly independent.

2. Authoritative parents who are more likely than permissive parents to have adolescent children
                       that are self-confident, high in self-esteem, and responsibly independent.

C, D, E明显改变句义, 主辞都变成children

但还是搞不清楚A, B差在哪

我选B是因为B的adolescent children比A的children who as adolescents简洁

但解答写A, 看了还是搞不清楚...

或许是B用单数that指复数的adolescent children错误吧