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helenzane

请问，B里的adolescent children有问题么？我为什么总觉得怪？

wwzzxx

以下是引用latinjazz在2008-6-10 17:38:00的发言：

1. Authoritative parents are more likely than permissive parents to have children who as adolescents are self-confident, high in self-esteem, and responsibly independent.

2. Authoritative parents who are more likely than permissive parents to have adolescent children
        that are self-confident, high in self-esteem, and responsibly independent.

C, D, E明显改变句义, 主辞都变成children

但还是搞不清楚A, B差在哪

我选B是因为B的adolescent children比A的children who as adolescents简洁

但解答写A, 看了还是搞不清楚...

或许是B用单数that指复数的adolescent children错误吧

b选项是一个结构性错误。

你可以试试简化起来读，parents who are more ........to have...........然后句子结束了。这是一个词组，不是句子。

amypig

明白了，呵呵，终于明白了，非常非常感谢

elizabeth007

以下是引用latinjazz在2008-6-10 17:38:00的发言：

1. Authoritative parents are more likely than permissive parents to have children who as adolescents are self-confident, high in self-esteem, and responsibly independent.

2. Authoritative parents who are more likely than permissive parents to have adolescent children
        that are self-confident, high in self-esteem, and responsibly independent.

C, D, E明显改变句义, 主辞都变成children

但还是搞不清楚A, B差在哪

我选B是因为B的adolescent children比A的children who as adolescents简洁

但解答写A, 看了还是搞不清楚...

或许是B用单数that指复数的adolescent children错误吧

B最大最明显的错误在于句子没有谓语，换个表达叫做谓语迷失在从句丛中了。错的丧心病狂。。。