A:简洁,平行 B:sentence fragment C:focus改变;Children of authoritative parents, rather than permissive parents,比较对象错;the more likely,the多余;to be self-confident, have a high self-esteem, and to be responsibly independent 不平行; D:being多余; have self-confidence, a high self-esteem, and be responsibly independent 不平行;when they are an adolescent,主谓不一致;focus改变 E:Rather than permissive parents, the children 比较对象错;the多余;have self-confidence, a high self-esteem, and to be responsibly independent as an adolescent,错误同D |