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The past to people is what water is to fish. All of the three parts, past, present and future, are mutually inexclusive to each other. As an integral in people’s life, there exists certain connection among them. People can hear the words from the old, cheerful or sad, they are looking back into the past to some extent every day. The saying like what if I did not do that is not rare. Arrogant people do nothing but picture their wonderful future in vain. For the destination to solve problems, personally, I do not deny that it should be based on the reviewing of the past.
To begin with, pastmeans experience no matter it is success or failure. It is where the precious of life buried. By reviewing the past(enable people to 这样的表达是不是会简练一点), people are enabled to find the resemblances between problems people are facing and those has encountered. (加个连接词什么的?)With the flowing of time, memory comes to be vague. Only by digging into the past, can people discover the useful information to solve problems. If it was still a mystery in the past, this time even greater courage and care is needed. If it was solved in the past, people can figure out the question at present in no time by referring to the past experience. Besides, it can be called as study, merely studying from people themselves past, the achievement is great. Not only can people identify the current problem, but also the same mistakes will not occur again. In this way, it is of great needed to review the past.
In addition, people can find themselves when they are lost on their way to success (with the help of…..联系下主题?). There are always myriad of dangerous and attractive things on people's way to their goal. When we are tired or terrified or want to give up, it is time for us to look back into the past. To find the courage at the beginning and feel the strong determination we used to have. Again, filled with confidence and braveness as well as the propulsion of dream from the very start, people are ready to see the problems directly in their eyes and to fight with them until they are beaten. Indeed, people have to review to set up again in solving all the problems.
Admittedly, some people may against my point by saying that people necessitate to imagine the future. What they need is the eager for better life in the future to push them to work and to answer the problems. However, I insist that the imagination is barely dream like a giant building without strong foundation. The outcome is nothing but collapse. (According what has been discussd above),It is needless to stress the importance in viewing the past. 包子亲,这个例子证明下了额,难道是是时间不够了
In conclusion, in order to find courage, confidence and essential information to face the current questions, people need to look back into the past. For it is also an approach for a brighter future.
包子亲,你句子很优美的说,以后你每篇作文我都改下吧,今天我要晚上写两篇吧,晚些让你改额。
看TPO的时候觉得那个广告的独立作文真难写,就下些资料搞些背景看看。
综合改
Both of the writer and the lecturer explore the issue about private fossil collectors. The author insists that only negative influence to public and scientists can be found. The lecturer, on the contrary, believes that the writer is exaggerating the situation. In all, the positive side of private collector overweighs its negative side.
First, the professor claims that private collector can bring greater exposure to the fossils rather thatn the statement in the reading,- public cannot see them unless they are donated to the museum. She adds that while selling, the commercial market enable low level public buyers, public schools, to buy the fossils and display them to the public. Therefore, this directly disproves its counterpart in the reading material.
Moreover, the speaker declares that scientists will not lose chance to get access to fossils instead thereeir approaches are assured. Collectors necessitate scientists to identify the fossils such as test for detail information, stresses the professor. In this way, no fossil can go into private collector without the examination of scientists. Also no important information can be missed out by the scientific communities. Accordingly, this is another place where experiences the contradicted theory.
At last, the professor asserts that the damages of fossils cannot be considered in the way raised in the passage. Sometimes there are damages to the fossils. However, it is better to let more fossils be found without location and other detail information or let a great number of them buried underground? Apparently, the former one is the best solution. Consequently, the last point is rebutted.
To sum up, the professor clearly identifies the weakness in the passage and clearly shows that the central argument in the reading, private collectors only produce negative influence to the public, is incorrect.
看看下了。
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