我看了那篇买房子还是买股票的那篇没有例文，我很快写了一篇， 大家参考下多给个意见。 While the stock price is declining, the house price has been soaring over the last 5 years. According to the author, it is the high time we buy the house rather than invest in the stock market. To further substantiate his advice, the author also points out that a house can help generate a life of higher quality than a stock does. Unfortunately, the reasoning behind the suggestion suffers from several critical problems. In the first place, the argument is based on a unfounded assumption that owning a stock can not contribute to a high-level life quality as owning a home can. Even if, as the author says, a home can in some way contribute to a happier and better life for someone, there are possibilities that investing money in the stock market can be a better lifestyle for others. Perhaps, the ups-and-down experience or the pay-first experiences are the understanding of better life for those people. Not all men love peaceful and even bland life. Without considering the general conception of better life, the author can hardly convince us of the suggestion based on the problematic assumption. Furthermore, the argument is ill-founded due to the lack of enough samples to support his opinion. The author suggests the house purchase simply because the house prices during the last 5 years have nearly doubled whereas the stock prices have fallen. The only evidence used is the statistic from the past five years, a statistic not necessarily acting as a good indicator of the general trend. It might be the case that a policy which supported the property market was introduced five years ago, but it will not be effect from the end of this year. If it were the case, the evidence cited by the author is an atypical and exceptional one. Unless providing enough information to prove that the statistic from the past 5 years is representative of the following several years, the suggestion is unwarranted and fallacious. To better back up the suggestion, the author should clearly point out the general understanding of high-quality life, and try to indicate that the price trend for both property and stock market would continue. -- by 会员 chingchan123 (2012/5/9 15:16:17)
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