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Vance1991

To improve the quality of education，universities should spendmore money on professors' salaries.
1. 加强老师的教学技能　2.激发学生的兴趣      3.学校的设备
It is undeniable that the quality of education is closely linked with the development of students, universities and even the society as a whole, and it is a topic of endless discussion. When it comes to the question whether universities should spend more money on professors' salaries, some people strongly support it, thinking it is an effective way to raise professors' enthusiasm on teaching. However, from my perspective, i think the amount of salaries is not equal to the quality of teaching, and universities should invest the money in some more meaningful areas.

First and foremost, though increasing salaries might motivate professors' enthusiasm to some extent, it cannot improve their teaching qualities noticeably. To improve the quality of education, universities should provide professors more opportunities to develop their teaching skills. Since 1980s, when the teaching quality came under increased scrutiny, Studies, such as Wingspreads Report, have outlines(outlined) the shortcomings of educational quality.  Some professors have been devoting themselves to investigate the failures and have developed some new approaches to revitalizing teaching effectiveness, such as placing an emphasis on individual needs of students and paying more attention to experiment. Universities should spend more money on teaching training projects, and help professors to learn about these achievements in education and apply these effective methods into their own teaching. In this case, spending more money to develop professors' teaching skills is more meaningful than increasing their salaries.(你这段的中心句是To improve the quality of education, universities should provide professors more opportunities to develop their teaching skills.吧,可是你后面只有在最后一句的时候提到了这个内容.前面都在讲教育的弊端啊,然后有人发现了去改善,跟这个中心句貌似木有关系啊...你可以写之前老师没有develop他们的skill怎么样,之后develop以后怎么样...)

In addition, it is also worthwhile to equip universities with some sophisticated facilities. Students and professor should not confine their study in textbook. By contrast, they should broaden their mind by keep(keeping) track of the current development in their field. So it's necessary for them to have an easy access to a vast resource of information. Universities should be responsible to create such an opportunity by building up modernized libraries and providing a fast-speed internet service in campus. Besides, universities should also set up some laboratories to assist professors and students to do research.  With these useful facilities, it would(will) be convenient for the improvement of education quality.

Last but not least, the initiative of students also plays a significant role in improving the quality of education, so universities should invest more money on financial aid for needy students. Nowadays, many college students have part-time jobs because of (the)high price of tuition.  In order to improve the quality of education, Students should concentrate more on their school work without worries about college cost and tuition. With the help of financial aid, students can concentrate more on their studies and then they will demand higher education to improve their study levels. Eventually, the quality of education is improved by the effort of students studying very hard. (by the very hadr effort of students)

In a nutshell, to improve the quality of education, it is not a sagacious method to spend more money on professors' salaries. More importantly, universities should develop professors' teaching skills, offer more necessary facilities and provide financial aid for needy students.


楼主写的很不错啊,错误很少.很棒的!