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pp_honey

欧明白了，组长是想说我们要像小新同学一样，即天真活泼，又搞怪好学。

pp_honey

讨论一道很 的CR:

7.     The postal service is badly mismanaged. Forty years ago, first-class letter delivery cost only three cents. Since then, the price has increased nearly tenfold, with an actual decrease in the speed and reliability of service.

Each of the following statements, if true, would tend to weaken the argument above EXCEPT:

(A) The volume of mail handled by the postal service has increased dramatically over the last forty years.

(B) Unprecedented increases in the cost of fuel for trucks and planes have put severe upward pressures on postal delivery costs.

(C) Private delivery services usually charge more than does the postal service for comparable delivery charges.

(D) The average delivery time for a first-class letter four decades ago was actually slightly longer than it is today.（E）

(E) The average level of consumer prices overall has increased more than 300 percent over the last forty years.

为虾米答案是e???? 怎么看我还是觉得是d.

pp_honey

只有不怕丢人才会不断进取：

继续总结偶得像一样的CR.

	Test B
No.	Type	Correction	Total rate	65%
5	Assumption		Assuption	100%
12	Assumption
16	completion		Completion	100%
2	Infer	X
14	Infer	X
18	Infer	X
6	Infer
8	Infer
9	Infer
17	Infer		infer	66%
4	Logical Weakness	X
15	Logical Weakness	X	Logical Weakness	0%
3	Strengthen
10	Strengthen
19	Strengthen		Strengthen	100%
7	Weaken	X
13	Weaken	X
1	Weaken
11	Weaken
20	Weaken		Weaken	60%

最烂就是逻辑错误描述，怎么办？

xiebinustc

以下是引用kate_kite在2004-11-25 20:22:00的发言：


是呀，要保持这里纯净美好的气氛，大家又开始讨论学习了～～～棒～～～

嘿嘿,解释一下,思路有些奇怪.

如果kkmm用的是非限定从,表明"大家又开始讨论学习了"是用来解释前面的"纯净美好的气氛",

即 纯净美好的气氛->大家又开始讨论学习了 逻辑上做一个取非就是

     不纯净美好的气氛 ->大家不讨论学习,这个我是不同意的.

如果逗号表示并列,前后两句就没有相关性了.

xiebinustc

以下是引用pp_honey在2004-11-25 23:39:00的发言：
欧明白了，组长是想说我们要像小新同学一样，即天真活泼，又搞怪好学。

,被你认出来了

xiebinustc

以下是引用pp_honey在2004-11-25 23:41:00的发言：

讨论一道很 的CR:

7.     The postal service is badly mismanaged. Forty years ago, first-class letter delivery cost only three cents. Since then, the price has increased nearly tenfold, with an actual decrease in the speed and reliability of service.

Each of the following statements, if true, would tend to weaken the argument above EXCEPT:

(A) The volume of mail handled by the postal service has increased dramatically over the last forty years.

(B) Unprecedented increases in the cost of fuel for trucks and planes have put severe upward pressures on postal delivery costs.

(C) Private delivery services usually charge more than does the postal service for comparable delivery charges.

(D) The average delivery time for a first-class letter four decades ago was actually slightly longer than it is today.（E）

(E) The average level of consumer prices overall has increased more than 300 percent over the last forty years.

为虾米答案是e???? 怎么看我还是觉得是d.

本题提干主题是邮寄服务管理不善,理由是first-class letter 价格四十年来翻了十倍,速度和可靠性却下降了,问下面哪条不会削弱作者观点:

A.信件增长过快  削弱

B油价增涨         削弱

C相同的服务,私人速递还要贵  削弱

D 四十年前first-class letter 更慢 (推翻了作者的论据,严重削弱)

E 四十年物价上涨3倍 (比邮费上涨慢,不削弱)  所以选E,pp,got it?

wshyee

恩，这道题组长解释的很清楚，thanks：）突然发现组长逻辑很强的嘛，佩服佩服

今天语法继续低迷，6/20，对于全划线的句子还是把握的不好：（

大全503.   Margaret Courtney-Clarke has traveled to remote dwellings in the Transvaal to photograph the art of Ndebele women, whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography and in a style that varies from woman to woman and house to house.   

(A) whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography and in a style that varies from woman to woman and house to house

(B) whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries are embellished with old and new iconography, and their style is varying among women and houses

(C) whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries are embellished with old and new iconography, and they are in styles that vary from woman to woman and house to house

(D) with murals brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography, and their style varies among women and houses（A）

(E) with murals that are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography, and their styles vary among women and houses

这道题看的我很晕，B为什么不对？还有解释说A中their geometrical symmetries embellished …是独立主格，对于独立主格偶一直没弄明白，谁能讲解一下这个语法点啊？谢！！

wshyee

以下是引用xiebinustc在2004-11-26 0:21:00的发言：

嘿嘿,解释一下,思路有些奇怪.

如果kkmm用的是非限定从,表明"大家又开始讨论学习了"是用来解释前面的"纯净美好的气氛",

即 纯净美好的气氛->大家又开始讨论学习了 逻辑上做一个取非就是

     不纯净美好的气氛 ->大家不讨论学习,这个我是不同意的.

如果逗号表示并列,前后两句就没有相关性了.

“如果逗号表示并列,前后两句就没有相关性了.”？？？？？

看来偶也要补补中文语法了

pp_honey

以下是引用wshyee在2004-11-26 1:34:00的发言：

恩，这道题组长解释的很清楚，thanks：）突然发现组长逻辑很强的嘛，佩服佩服

今天语法继续低迷，6/20，对于全划线的句子还是把握的不好：（

大全503.   Margaret Courtney-Clarke has traveled to remote dwellings in the Transvaal to photograph the art of Ndebele women, whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography and in a style that varies from woman to woman and house to house.   

(A) whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography and in a style that varies from woman to woman and house to house

(B) whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries are embellished with old and new iconography, and their style is varying among women and houses

(C) whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries are embellished with old and new iconography, and they are in styles that vary from woman to woman and house to house

(D) with murals brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography, and their style varies among women and houses（A）

(E) with murals that are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography, and their styles vary among women and houses

这道题看的我很晕，B为什么不对？还有解释说A中their geometrical symmetries embellished …是独立主格，对于独立主格偶一直没弄明白，谁能讲解一下这个语法点啊？谢！！

吉祥物mm，A选项的前半部分是非限制性定语从句，后半部分是"悬垂结构"(dangling modifier), 这种结构不可一世完整的句子，否则就变成了run-on得错误了,B就是犯了这样的错。bingo

wshyee

JJ再解释一下，什么是"悬垂结构"(dangling modifier)？什么又是run-on呢？

哦，"悬垂结构"(dangling modifier)是不是指修饰清啊，既可修饰A又可修饰B？A既然是悬垂结构"(dangling modifier），为什么还对呢？

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