GWD07-20

tracyding

请问NN们：A与E 不同于 E比 A 更简洁吗？另外“ have yielded strong evidence for 。。。。societies”这种表达错吗？

fannyyudan

以下是引用tracyding在2006-2-16 9:23:00的发言：

请问NN们：A与E 不同于 E比 A 更简洁吗？另外“ have yielded strong evidence for 。。。。societies”这种表达错吗？

A错在evidence for，用that从句来限定是最好的，一般后面这个evidence的具体内容是这么长的就直接可以判断用that了，短的话可以用of，当然也要看of之后是不是phrase

bigmachine

 首先排除C having ,然后排出 but also B D ,最后排出A 过去进行时，时态不对。答案为E
    

罗马青年

bigmachine 提出了一个新点：but also 可以排除B，D；很好！谢谢！

нандин

以下是引用罗马青年在2007-6-1 21:47:00的发言：
bigmachine 提出了一个新点：but also 可以排除B，D；很好！谢谢！

呵呵 我也是这么排出的

tangzimo

哦，明……

smilingalone

以下是引用longyear在2004-11-19 7:57:00的发言：

A有两个不足。

1、that were，是可要可不要的，E选项里出现了不要that were的形式，那就这点而言，E更佳。

2、evidence后面用that从句修饰是最好的。A的方式显然不好。还是E更佳。

很有道理！！

bmwedward

The first trenches that were cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, have yielded strong evidence for centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East that were arising simultaneously with but independently of the more celebrated city-states of southern Mesopotamia, in what is now southern Iraq.

A.      that were cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, have yielded strong evidence for centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East that were arising simultaneously with but

      evidence 後接that較為貼切      

B.       that were cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, yields strong evidence that centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East were arising simultaneously with but also

      the first trenches 應用複數動詞yield, also 多餘

C.      having been cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, have yielded strong evidence that centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East were arising simultaneously but

      having been錯誤 simultaneously後少with與 independently of對稱

D.      cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, yields strong evidence of centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East arising simultaneously but also
            

      the first trenches 應用複數動詞yield, evidence 後接that較為貼切, also 多餘, simultaneously 後少with      

E.       cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, have yielded strong evidence that centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East arose simultaneously with but

     正確

huyannancy

The first trenches that were cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, have yielded strong evidence for centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East that were arising simultaneously with but independently of the more celebrated city-states of southern Mesopotamia, in what is now southern Iraq.

 

A.    that were cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, have yielded strong evidence for centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East that were arising simultaneously with but  1. That were多余，可以去掉；2.evidience 后面的修饰语太多，
        表达不清，应该改为用同位语从句来清楚地表达意思，同时用evidence for的逻辑意思错误；

B.    that were cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, yields strong evidence that centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East were arising simultaneously with but also . 1.That were多余，可以去掉; 2. Trenches 与yields不搭；3. 时态不对,后面为now，则前面的yield已经完成，应该用完成时态；4. Also 多余

C.    having been cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, have yielded strong evidence that centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East were arising simultaneously but  1.having been 多余，应该去掉；2. Were arising 的时态不对，应该为过去时；3. But 作为连词，
        连接的两个词应该在结构上类似，则后面为independently of ，前面就应该为simultaneously +介词

D.    cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, yields strong evidence of centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East arising simultaneously but also  1. Yields 与前面的trenches不搭；2.evidience 后面的修饰语太多，
        表达不清，应该改为用同位语从句来清楚地表达意思，同时用evidence of的逻辑意思错误；3. 时态不对,后面为now，则前面的yield已经完成，应该用完成时态；4. Also 多余

E.     cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, have yielded strong evidence that centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East arose simultaneously with but
        正确，时态对，but 作为连词的用法正确，
        evidence后面用同位语从句正确清楚地表达意思。

注意：当看到but, and 等连词时，一定要注意，连词连接的两个部分要在结构上一定要平衡，
        这个可以作为一定错误的点

johnbelieve

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