暂时停止更新~suri的gmat之旅，加油加油~~~~

Suri在奋斗

昨天下午背的单词，晚上把它们输入有道，今天再记，忘了大半呀，反复记忆也很重要~~~

Suri在奋斗

下午开始做og数学的ps部分
坐着坐着就停电了
所以就出去吃完晚饭然后去了家咖啡厅
继续做，碰到学院一个同学，也要考gmat了，交流了下
做完做DS，到九点半的时候笔芯写完了
回来电也来了

题目如果读懂就做对一大半了
但也些题目太长理不清了
做这些题目突然就回忆起来小学初中的事情
待会听下逻辑的录音

phoebe0624

我的数学og题目还没做完，汗！！
看到你的进度，提醒我了！

babybearmm

哇~~suri总结得真好
这个点醒我了：
13.The phrase 55 percent more delay is not as clear as phrase a 55 percent increase in delays  og94
 Mahattan:In many cases, when we have one noun modified by a prepositional phrase, we can turn the phrase into a Noun-Adjective and put it in front of the first noun,  thus shortening the whole expression.
This process works the best when the preposition is of ,the simplest and most common preposition in English.

我想起看到一道题目，当时在讨论as well as，发到饭饭的贴子里的
http://forum.chasedream.com/GMAT_Preparation/thread-651408-20-1.html     #196，197，206

我后来说：
然后就是A/B之间看谁最好。读这个句子，最先发现的差异是：
A: the tulip craze of the seventeenth-century in the Netherlands
B: the seventeenth-century tulip craze in the Netherlands
A感觉awkward，"noun + prep phrase + prep phrase"
B非常棒。将其中一个作为形容词。B这种表达在英语里很普遍，而且OG里面遇到过，......

当时我想不起例子了，现突然在你这里发现了！你总结的都是精华啊~

总结了20道语法题记下一些小点
2.explaine和because of重复og83
5.after having done something是不可能对的
8.Omitting the subject they requires that the comma be omitted as well（即comma+and+v是错误的） og87
13.The prhase 55percent more delay is not as clear as phrase a 55 percent increase in delays  og94
 Mahattan:In many cases, when we have one noun modified by a prepositional phrase, we can turn the phrase into a Noun-Adjective and put it in front of the first noun,  thus shortening the whole expression.
This process works the best when the preposition is of ,the simplest and most common preposition in English. However, if the preposition is not of, then you should avoid collapsing the prepositional phrase.
Notice that places or locations rarely work well as Noun-Adjectives, unless the original prepositional phrase begins with of
14关于although的用法  og95
Although 引导的是一个dependent clause，也就是说它引导的是一种不能脱离主句的从句

有道背了400个单词，真的很好，有些反复记忆印象很深刻~~

-- by 会员 Suri在奋斗 (2012/2/15 18:04:29)

谢谢suri总结分享哇~~~400单词0-0~，，好高效！

-- by 会员 泾渭不凡 (2012/2/15 23:12:04)

Suri在奋斗

我的数学og题目还没做完，汗！！
看到你的进度，提醒我了！

-- by 会员 phoebe0624 (2012/2/18 23:57:46)

数学有些是简单，但有些年代久远，发现好多都忘记啦，所以点还好多，今天把Ds做完，我打算只看做错的
因为做对的，数学做对的基本都是有把握的啦
节省时间，还要抽时间做prep，jj
O(∩_∩)O哈哈~
加油咯~~~

Suri在奋斗

哇~~suri总结得真好
这个点醒我了：
13.The phrase 55 percent more delay is not as clear as phrase a 55 percent increase in delays  og94
 Mahattan:In many cases, when we have one noun modified by a prepositional phrase, we can turn the phrase into a Noun-Adjective and put it in front of the first noun,  thus shortening the whole expression.
This process works the best when the preposition is of ,the simplest and most common preposition in English.

我想起看到一道题目，当时在讨论as well as，发到饭饭的贴子里的
http://forum.chasedream.com/GMAT_Preparation/thread-651408-20-1.html     #196，197，206

我后来说：
然后就是A/B之间看谁最好。读这个句子，最先发现的差异是：
A: the tulip craze of the seventeenth-century in the Netherlands
B: the seventeenth-century tulip craze in the Netherlands
A感觉awkward，"noun + prep phrase + prep phrase"
B非常棒。将其中一个作为形容词。B这种表达在英语里很普遍，而且OG里面遇到过，......

当时我想不起例子了，现突然在你这里发现了！你总结的都是精华啊~

总结了20道语法题记下一些小点
2.explaine和because of重复og83
5.after having done something是不可能对的
8.Omitting the subject they requires that the comma be omitted as well（即comma+and+v是错误的） og87
13.The prhase 55percent more delay is not as clear as phrase a 55 percent increase in delays  og94
 Mahattan:In many cases, when we have one noun modified by a prepositional phrase, we can turn the phrase into a Noun-Adjective and put it in front of the first noun,  thus shortening the whole expression.
This process works the best when the preposition is of ,the simplest and most common preposition in English. However, if the preposition is not of, then you should avoid collapsing the prepositional phrase.
Notice that places or locations rarely work well as Noun-Adjectives, unless the original prepositional phrase begins with of
14关于although的用法  og95
Although 引导的是一个dependent clause，也就是说它引导的是一种不能脱离主句的从句

有道背了400个单词，真的很好，有些反复记忆印象很深刻~~

-- by 会员 Suri在奋斗 (2012/2/15 18:04:29)

谢谢suri总结分享哇~~~400单词0-0~，，好高效！

-- by 会员 泾渭不凡 (2012/2/15 23:12:04)

-- by 会员 babybearmm (2012/2/19 2:54:04)

og有好多小点都可以挖，虽然有些答案解释的很模糊，但如果去搜的话会搜到满意的答案
而且总结的时候把manhattan放在身边，不懂就翻
真觉得manhattan是本好书，里面的东西一个个小点，都能对应到去一个具体的题目，虽然不能是让你立马排除某道选项
但是到了具体比较选项差异的时候帮助很大咯~·~！！

在manhattan第211页，O(∩_∩)O哈哈~
1)"too short‘pattern：Keep the prepositional phrase if you need to 需要的时候保留介词短语
名词—形容词结构常常很简单，也容易出错
In many cases, when we have one noun modified by a prepositional phrase, we can turn the phrase into a Noun-Adjective and put it in front of the first noun, thus shortening the
whole expression.
This process works the best when the preposition is of ,the simplest and most common preposition in English. However, if the preposition is not of, then you should avoid collapsing the prepositional phrase.
Notice that places or locations rarely work well as Noun-Adjectives, unless the original prepositional phrase begins with of

Too short                                           Better
Aegean sea salt                                 salt from the Aegean
Ural  Mountain  ore                           ore  from the ural Moutains
Dannbe River access                         access to the Danube River
population changes of honeybees         changes in the population of honeybees
(1)当前面的名词是 时间period 数量quantity或者计量性质的词的时候一定要用of结构
Moreover, you should not collapse certain Of prepositional phrases into Noun-Adjectives.
Whenever you have a time period, quantity or other measurement as the first word, keep
the prepositional phrase with of

Suri在奋斗

写完又出现一个问题，最后面的时候manhattan说
)当前面的名词是 时间period 数量quantity或者计量性质的词的时候一定要用of结构
Moreover, you should not collapse certain Of prepositional phrases into Noun-Adjectives.
Whenever you have a time period, quantity or other measurement as the first word, keep
the prepositional phrase with of

又在manhattan后面附带的小习题找到了三个针对这个的题目
7. The woman from Miami sat on the bench of wood and ate a soup bowl.
8. The carbon emissions kilogram weight from cars is higher in summer than that of winter.
9. The press release claims the France president is older than the United States



答案贴过来，看来还是要具体情况具体分析
7. The woman from Miami sat on a wooden bench and ate a bowl of soup.
The adjective wooden is preferable to the phrase of wood, according to V-A-N pattern 4. Alternatively, you
could write a wood bench, making wood a Noun-Adjective. This change is acceptable, because the original
phrase of wood simply indicates the material out of which the bench was made, as does the word wood
placed in front of bench.
However, V-A-N pattern 4 does not require us to change woman from Miami to Miami woman. This is
because Miami, unlike wooden, is a Noun-Adjective, and therefore is governed by "Too Short" pattern 1,
which identifies woman from Miami as preferable.
Choosing between bowl of soup and soup bowl is somewhat more complicated. According to "Too Short"
pattern 1, both expressions should be equally acceptable. However, you must think about the meaning
before you apply one of the concision rules. Soup bowl refers to a kind of.bmrl, whereas bowl of soup refers
to the soup inside a bowl. It is more logical to say that she ate the soup than that she ate the bowl!


8. The weight of the carbon emissions from cars is higher in summer than in winter.
The word kilogram before weight is redundant, and should therefore be removed. On the other hand, carbon
emissions weight is too short, because weight is a quantity word that should be modified by the phrase of
carbon emissions (see "Too Short" pattern 1).
The words that of in the original sentence need to be removed because they have no clear meaning. The
intended comparison is best rendered with the parallel prepositional phrases in summer and in winter.


9. The press release claims that the president of France is older than that of the United States.
The original sentence is too short.
We need the word that to introduce a clause after the reporting verb claims (see "Too Short" pattern 3).
The president of France is clearer and more idiomatic than the France president (see "Too Short" pattern 3).
Moreover, the phrase the president of France is needed to set up the intended parallelism between of France
and of the United States. You could write the French president, but it will not be parallel to the second part of
the comparison.
Finally, we need the words that of before the United States, in order to make clear that the French president
is older than the American president, not older than the United States itsel￡ (Without that of, the sentence
means that the French president was born on or before 1776!)

Suri在奋斗

就如第七小题说的
However, you must think about the meaning
毕竟在语法里面 是grammer   meaning   concision
concision放最后
只是说在变成Noun-Adjective这个结构中，of介词结构是works best,但不是绝对错误来排除，要在grammer和meaning都无误的情况下来看

这个后面的点本来是我忽略，今天姐姐一说，我重新看到这个点，发现收获也好大

Suri在奋斗

http://open.sina.com.cn/CriticalReasoningforBeginners.html
新浪公开课，牛津大学crictical reasoning推理入门，有时间可以看看，很不错

泾渭不凡

suri这个分享太给力了哇~~！！