gwd3-34

fair_sword

Q34:

Shoppers in sporting goods stores, unlike in department stores, do very little impulse shopping, not buying a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but they leave with a basketball only.

in department stores, do very little impulse shopping, not buying a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but they leave with a basketball only

in department stores, shop impulsively very little; someone who comes in for a basketball will leave with a basketball only and not also buy a pair of skis and a boomerang as well

those in department stores, do very little impulse shopping, do not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but leave with only a basketball

those in department stores, do very little impulse shopping; someone who comes in for a basketball will leave with a basketball only and not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang as well

department stores, shop impulsively very little; someone will not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball but will leave with only a basketball

I choose c, but the answer of GWD is D, who can tell me why C is not better than D.

thanks very much!

rt316

C的问题在于两个do结构之间没有任何连词，表达错误，而且从句意上两个do结构是各自独立的部分，所以用逗号+and或分号比较号；此外，liave with only a basketball中only的修饰对象比较模糊；

fair_sword

谢谢stoneren. 呵呵， C是不对的，我觉得主要是意思不对。

不过C those in department stores, do very little impulse shopping, do not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but leave with only a basketball

Shoppers ..，like.., do very..., do not.., but leave, 我觉得是可以的。

2个do , do not,和leave 并列。leave with onley a basketball修饰leave.

请问but可以这么连接吗？ 谢谢

wanze

d改变句意了。

c不是挺好，

请教大虾

LES

偶觉得“Shoppers ..，like.., do very..., do not.., but leave, 我觉得是可以的。”这个结构是有问题的，因为but到底与哪一个动词是转折关系呢？

而在"Do1, Do2, AND Do3"结构中很明确是三个动词的并列关系。

偶觉得and 和but这里的关系就好像“+” 与“－”一样，前者有交换律，而后者有没有。

xealot

楼上LES说得没错，我补充一点，如果but，要起到终结前面一系列列举的作用，那么，but后面的结构一定是和前面的一系列来parallel的，这样有逻辑错误：实际上，but后面的结构应该是和 do not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball 来parallel。

C更好的形式是去掉but前面的comma然后在do not buy前面加and....

请大牛指正~

fair_sword

我还是觉得,偶觉得“Shoppers ..，like.., do very..., do not.., but leave, 我觉得是可以的

C,不好，关键就在于logic error,能不能请gigi答答

luoffice

do very little ... shopping和 do not buy 后者是对前者的说明,在逻辑上无法并列,C里逗号改破折号就对了

tony6

以下是引用fair_sword在2004-7-16 7:29:00的发言：

我还是觉得,偶觉得“Shoppers ..，like.., do very..., do not.., but leave, 我觉得是可以的

彻底绕晕，绕口令

8过呢，偶觉得，Shoppers ..，like.., do very..., do not.., but leave, 从词性上说应该是可以的。8过好象没见过有这样用的，还。

另外，D中的and 和as well并用，不wordy吗？

[此贴子已经被作者于2004-8-19 17:10:37编辑过]

dinofu

我开始也选了C, 但现在发现C的主要问题在于

do very little impulse shopping是描述一个现象, 而do not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but leave with only a basketball 是针对这个现象打一个比方, 所以两者不可以并列.