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81#
发表于 2005-12-19 22:25:00 | 只看该作者
偶也选C,怎么读都觉得C顺口.
82#
发表于 2006-3-8 00:20:00 | 只看该作者
so在句子开头才倒装啦,这里不好倒装了。所以C
83#
发表于 2006-3-24 12:36:00 | 只看该作者
支持选E
84#
发表于 2006-3-25 09:13:00 | 只看该作者
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85#
发表于 2006-5-7 14:20:00 | 只看该作者

So dogged were Frances Perkins’ investigations of the garment industry, and her lobbying for wage and hour reform was persistent, Alfred E. Smith and Franklin D. Roosevelt recruited Perkins to work within the government, rather than as a social worker.




  1. and her lobbying for wage and hour reform was persistent,

  2. and lobbying for wage and hour reform was persistent, so that

  3. her lobbying for wage and hour reform persistent, that

  4. lobbying for wage and hour reform was so persistent,

  5. so persistent her lobbying for wage and hour reform, that

这道题花了我三分钟,觉得哪一个都不好,最后还是选了E。看了这么多讨论,支持CE的各执一词。其实C的确没什么毛病,从语法上来说,做独立主格是说的过去的。而E,和前面未划线部分并列的话缺少并列连词连接,也省略了个大多数人认为不能省略的,和前面的WERE不一样的WAS,虽然结构上和前面的句子很平行,但仍然毛病不少。



但我仍然支持选E,理由如下:



1)改错中,逻辑为王。原句的意思是因为FB这个人对于某行业的调查研究多么坚定顽强,对于工资和改革的游说是多么的坚持不懈,所以大人物XX愿意雇佣他。很明显的,前两个句子在意思上是并列的,在结构上也是平行的,如果按照C的说法,“对于工资和改革的游说是多么的坚持不懈”是用来修饰前半个句子的,虽然语法上没有错,但极大的扭曲了句子原意,这是不允许的。



2)E是否犯了correctiveness的错误呢?



关于WAS能否省略,见前辈留下的例子:


Ok, what about this one? It's another example in 章振邦.
Correct: They live in him together and he ( ) in them.
Wrong: They live in him together and he live in them


再见前辈的例子:



个人认为助动词(动词)同形的情况下当然可以省略,如:
The police found that the house had been broken into and a lot of things stolen。
His father is a doctor,and his mother(is) a nurse.
但我没查到如果助动词不同形,一个是are,一个是is可不可以省,不过倾向还是能省。
主要依据是下面这个例子。
In informal English, the final verb is usually not omitted following a personal pronoun representing the second thing being compared.
e.g. I am as tall as he is.
      She is as good a swimmer as I am.


However, in formal English, the final verb following a personal pronoun representing the second thing being compared is sometimes omitted.
e.g. I am as tall as he.
      She is as good a swimmer as I.
上面is和am是不同形的,但可以省,并不影响意思表达。所以我认为省的可能性大些。



关于两个并列句子间能否不用并列连词连接,见薄冰语法:


有时两个分句之间可以不用连词。如Some persons like to eat radishes,others prefer cabbages.


综上所述,E没有犯correctiveness的错误,且结构完美平行,逻辑意思正确,比C要好。




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86#
发表于 2006-5-12 14:03:00 | 只看该作者
Published: November 14, 1993

ELEANOR ROOSEVELT A Life of Discovery. By Russell Freedman. Illustrated. 198 pp. New York: Clarion Books. $17.95. (Ages 10 and up) A WOMAN UNAFRAID The Achievements of Frances Perkins. By Penny Colman. Illustrated. 129 pp. New York: Atheneum. $14.95. (Ages 10 to 14)

TWO finely rendered lives of Eleanor Roosevelt (1884-1962) and Frances Perkins (1880-1965), midwives of the modern social welfare state, appear not a moment too soon for young readers who are watching as Hillary Rodham Clinton and Donna Shalala present national health-care reform on Capitol Hill, the talk-show circuit and around the nation.

The role of women in the New Deal has long been slighted, but these two biographies draw on recent scholarly reassessments. Sixty years ago, Roosevelt, the first independent First Lady, and Perkins, the Secretary of Labor and the first woman ever appointed to a Presidential Cabinet, both testified before Congress. They both took part in political strategy sessions. They both traveled the country and were celebrated as gifted public speakers who could explain complicated policy issues in concrete, human terms. They both worked on legislation. In addition, Roosevelt wrote a daily newspaper column, and both she and Perkins published successful books.

Yet neither woman sought the spotlight or ever "cavorted" -- as Perkins liked to say -- before the press. And both cautiously allowed others of the Roosevelt brain trust to take credit for the genesis of historic programs in public employment, relief and Social Security for which they were in large measure responsible -- programs that fundamentally changed the way we define government in this country.

Happily, the charade is finally over, for them and, we hope, for their counterparts in the Clinton Administration. But these books remind young and old readers alike just how hard it has been for the voices of women to be heard in public life, let alone to be granted authority.

The poignant and by now well-known story of Eleanor Roosevelt's triumph over personal tragedy to become the most influential American woman of this century is recounted in "Eleanor Roosevelt: A Life of Discovery," by Russell Freedman, the author of many books for children, including "Lincoln: A Photobiography," which won the 1988 Newbery Medal, and "Franklin Delano Roosevelt." In measured tones he shows how her early work in the progressive settlement houses and voluntary associations of New York City inspired an abiding confidence in the potential of government to do good. We observe her practical political education as her husband's agent in the Democratic Party following his bout with polio in 1921. We learn of her achievements as First Lady on behalf of the country's most needy and underrepresented citizens -- especially black Americans. We follow her through World War II as she won the hearts of American soldiers, then into the postwar period after her husband's death in 1945, when, as a delegate to the United Nations, she became a force in her own right for international peace and human rights.

The personal drama of Eleanor Roosevelt's life also unfolds with unflinching clarity in the text and in the exquisite photographs that accompany it. We are introduced to the troubled and insecure child who emerged from the tragedy of her father's alcoholism and her parents' early deaths. We meet the young wife and mother of five who, with great discipline and determination, overcame the sorrow of her husband's infidelity and in subsequent years forged deep and abiding friendships with a small circle of men and women, each of whom, in a manner Mr. Freedman does not speculate about, fulfilled the need for intimacy her marriage no longer satisfied.

Penny Colman, who has written about Dorothea Dix and Fannie Lou Hamer, is equally thorough, fair and candid in her treatment of Frances Perkins. A native of Massachusetts, Perkins graduated from Mount Holyoke College in 1902 and became a professional social worker in the New York charity world in which Eleanor Roosevelt volunteered. So dogged were her investigations of the garment industry, and so persistent her lobbying for wage and hour reform, that she was first recruited by Gov. Al Smith, and later by Gov. Franklin D. Roosevelt, to work within New York State government, rather than against it. This prepared her to be President Roosevelt's Secretary of Labor, a job which then encompassed health and welfare as well as labor. Perkins's tenure witnessed the greatest period of organization in American labor history. She unequivocally supported the right to organize and bargain collectively, and used her considerable influence with the President to prevent him from restraining strikes by longshoremen and automobile workers. Yet she always had more confidence in the Federal Government than in organized labor as an instrument of social justice, and she devoted most of her efforts to protecting workers through maximum-hour and minimum-wage regulations.

87#
发表于 2006-5-17 15:29:00 | 只看该作者
finally!!!
88#
发表于 2006-5-20 19:51:00 | 只看该作者

So dogged were her investigations of the garment industry, and so persistent her lobbying for wage and hour reform, that she was first recruited by Gov. Al Smith, and later by Gov. Franklin D. Roosevelt, to work within New York State government, rather than against it

多了一个and 完全变了阿 没有and 不平行阿 原文明显多了一个AND

89#
发表于 2006-5-31 10:15:00 | 只看该作者

晕,竟然找到原文了

不过即使E中没有and,我觉得还是E好

C中的persistent到底修饰什么很模糊,不如E中清楚

90#
发表于 2006-6-10 14:01:00 | 只看该作者

其实大家知道这个语法点就可以了。

So + adj. + be + n., and so adj. (be) n., that ....

估计GWD的题目与现场有差别,漏个and实属正常。

E是正确选项。

但在做题时,我肯定会因为没有and把E排除,因为从语法角度上讲,C至少没错,虽然这里用独立结构不好。

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