2. (This is )A desire to throw over reality a light that never was might give away abruptly to the desire on the part of what we might consider a novelist-scientist to record exactly and concretely the structure and texture of a flower .(5++)
This is a desire (to throw over reality a light) that never was might given away abruptly to the desire (on the part of what we might consider) a novelist-scientist to record exactly and concretely (the structure and texture of a flower).
以下是引用joywzy在2003-5-30 11:31:00的发言: 2. (This is )A desire to throw over reality a light that never was might give away abruptly to the desire on the part of what we might consider a novelist-scientist to record exactly and concretely the structure and texture of a flower .(5++)
(A desire1) /to throw over reality a light that never was/ might give away abruptly to (the desire2) /on the part of /what we might consider /a novelist-scientist/ to record exactly and concretely the structure and texture of a flower .
1. 主句 Desire1 might give away to desire2. 2. What is desire1? --to throw a light over reality(now) that never was (before). 3. What is desire2?-- to record exactly...... and whose desire2?--- Got it ? ------------------ 1. No "This is " is needed here. Do you add it yourself ? Please tell me. 2. "give=>given " should be a big mistake, since "might given "is wrong.