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1/19 我先看整个句子意思,然后看结构完整不,然后主谓,然后再看他想考哪个语法点,还选不出来就看意思跟作者的意图对了么,还选不出来就看哪个简洁
Argument 9:52-9:22 因果less hospital visit-> 类比-tap water->its advantage 论据-vague
9:58 In this argument, the author concludes that people should drink bottled Saluda Natural Spring Water because it is good for health. The author believes that the causes of this action are two fact that a laboratory study shows is that this water contained minerals and was bacteria-free; people from Saluda are hospitalized less. However, the argument omits some important concerns that must be addressed to substantiate the argument.
First and most conspicuously, the argument assumes that drinking the water from Saluda is the main reason or source of people going to hospital less frequently. This cause-and-effect relationship is unproved-perhaps the correlation simplyimplies relation and not cause-and-effect. Furthermore, the eason for less hospital visiting to might have nothing to do with drinking Saluda water. For instance, awareness of good self-healthcare might be something that related to less hospital visiting. For that matter, people from Saluda pay close attention to their health, and take care of themselves before the sickness happens. Without ruling out other alternative explanations for the low hospital visites, the author cannot simpleconclude that drinking water will have any effect on people's health.
To summarize, the argument as it stands is unconvincing. If the author wants to strengthen the conclusion, he or she must provide evidence of the reliability of the esearch and boraden it range. To improve the argument, the autho should also povide evidenc if Saluda's less frequently hospital visiting has a clase relationship with dinking it water. (10:19)
ISSUE 11:13-11:43 决定先用中文写-把思路给理清了
working is a big portion of our lives; it includes the things we do, the people we contact and the kind of thinking we have on a daily basis. Does working influences our personal lives?It looks like a troublesome question at the first glance, but by thinking deeply about our growing experience and our surroundings, as a matter of fact, it did gradually influence our lives in various aspects, however, in a different levels.
工作对人的影响 同意不同意 三个方面
特别兴趣-我觉得这儿指的是对什么东西产生特别兴趣 是你原来没有的 打个比方, 学艺术设计的会对橱窗感兴趣 学市场的会对广告敢兴趣 有个很好的例子 我们教maketing的老师说她曾经做过一个很无聊的事情 就是在超市看工作人员如何装货卸货 这涉及到一个跟重要的marketing term-shelf space 很多公司为了争夺一个小小的shelf space投入大量的人力物力 最后成功与否却是掌握在一个小小的换货员手上 我们老师说自从她学了这个之后自己每次去超市就关注这些东西,这是她之前从来不会有的事情To begin with, working doescreate some special interests in person ,and these interests might have expand to one's personal live. For example, an art student will be interested in looking at department's window decreations and a marketing student like to watch advertisment more than others. Our marketing teachers shared a very interesting personal interest with us one day in class.
休闲娱乐-首先我觉得要讲明白一个事情 就是这里的休闲娱乐值的是除了工作之外的休闲娱乐 不把把工作带回家 或者是工作方面的 social算在内 我觉得这个首影响应该是比较小的 毕竟一个人在他自己想做什么的时候做什么是不需要经过别人同意包括 是自己从小喜欢的 比如说我吧 喜欢画画 这和我本科的专业 金融投资完全没关系 我只是觉得在我很累的时候我特别想画画 让自己的想法自然而然的通过画笔流露出来 做这个以来让我自己得到很好的放松, 二来这是我自己喜欢的事情 所以做这个我很开心 我会保持这个习惯 即使 以后工作了 而且我觉得这个受我工作的影响应该不大
外表-我觉得这里的外表指的是穿着 我觉得这个会受影响 从最源头的shopping来说 我买衣服一定会注重实用性 所以对我来说如果一件衣服能够既在工作的时候穿又在休息的时候穿是再好不过的拉 而且你买衣服的审美多多少少会受周围人影响而且你会需要周围的人给你不断地reinforment你才会觉得你买的特别有价值
总的来说 我觉得work will influence people's lives in gerneral. But this influence vries in different aspects, in different levels. (11:32)
数学: 75min 12:37-14:00 problem solving 24-OG 21-45 data sufficiency 13-OG 1-13
5 min
阅读理解 (ReadingComprehension)~4篇 14 题 OG 句子改错 (SentenceCorrecting)~16 题 OG77-79, 101-113 逻辑推理 (CriticalReasoning)~11题OG31-42
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1 B 00:02 2 A 00:16 3 B 02:01 4 D 00:28 5 D 00:23x 6 B 00:58 7 E 00:39 8 A 01:28x 9 C 00:16 10 B 01:15 11 B 00:31 12 B 01:37 13 C 00:28 14 A 00:27 15 B 00:46 16 A 02:02 17 A 00:13 18 B 00:16 19 D 03:06x 20 C 00:29 21 A 02:27 22 E 00:20 23 B 00:28 24 D 00:37 25 B 00:58 26 A 00:44x 27 E 01:30 28 A 00:47 29 E 01:53 30 E 00:50 31 D 01:05 32 A 03:29 33 C 01:54 34 A 01:07 35 B 01:30 36 A 00:32 37 B 00:21 38 d--我貌似多填了一道? 真奇怪。。 |
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