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[梦之队日记] 1/27 一战上海 静下心来好好看书。人可以失败一次,但不能次次失败。

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发表于 2011-1-18 14:16:10 | 只看该作者
LZ真的好有计划哦~好懂得总结方法什么的~
哎...想想我自己实在是太瞎了...从决定考试到报名就一天,从报名到考试就剩20天...
但是因为种种原因就成这样了...我纠结啊...
没去报班也没看大家的方法论,就闷头自己做题跟整理总结,看来是不行的~决定从今天开始跟跟楼主的帖也逛逛论坛取经~
这几天在家复习,效率也真够低下的了,离考试只有10多天,是时候该拼搏了!~
楼主也加油,祝有好成绩~
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-19 10:22:04 | 只看该作者
1/19
我先看整个句子意思,然后看结构完整不,然后主谓,然后再看他想考哪个语法点,还选不出来就看意思跟作者的意图对了么,还选不出来就看哪个简洁

Argument 9:52-9:22
因果less hospital visit->
类比-tap water->its advantage
论据-vague

9:58
In this argument, the author concludes that people should drink bottled Saluda Natural Spring Water because it is good for health. The author believes that the causes of this action are two fact that a laboratory study shows is that this water contained minerals and was bacteria-free; people from Saluda are hospitalized less. However, the argument omits some important concerns that must be addressed to substantiate the argument.

First and most conspicuously, the argument assumes that drinking the water from Saluda is the main reason or source of people going to hospital less frequently. This cause-and-effect relationship is unproved-perhaps the correlation simplyimplies relation and not cause-and-effect. Furthermore, the eason for less hospital visiting to might have nothing to do with drinking Saluda water. For instance, awareness of good self-healthcare might be something that related to less hospital visiting. For that matter, people from Saluda pay close attention to their health, and take care of themselves before the sickness happens. Without ruling out other alternative explanations for the low hospital visites, the author cannot simpleconclude that drinking water will have any effect on people's health.

To summarize, the argument as it stands is unconvincing. If the author wants to strengthen the conclusion, he or she must provide evidence of the reliability of the esearch and boraden it range. To improve the argument, the autho should also povide evidenc if Saluda's less frequently hospital visiting has a clase relationship with dinking it water. (10:19)

ISSUE 11:13-11:43
决定先用中文写-把思路给理清了

working is a big portion of our lives; it includes the things we do, the people we contact and the kind of thinking we have on a daily basis. Does working influences our personal lives?It looks like a troublesome question at the first glance, but by thinking deeply about our growing experience and our surroundings, as a matter of fact, it did gradually influence our lives in various aspects, however, in a different levels.



工作对人的影响 同意不同意 三个方面

特别兴趣-我觉得这儿指的是对什么东西产生特别兴趣 是你原来没有的  
打个比方, 学艺术设计的会对橱窗感兴趣 学市场的会对广告敢兴趣
有个很好的例子 我们教maketing的老师说她曾经做过一个很无聊的事情 就是在超市看工作人员如何装货卸货 这涉及到一个跟重要的marketing term-shelf space 很多公司为了争夺一个小小的shelf space投入大量的人力物力 最后成功与否却是掌握在一个小小的换货员手上
我们老师说自从她学了这个之后自己每次去超市就关注这些东西,这是她之前从来不会有的事情To begin with, working doescreate some special interests in person ,and these interests might have expand to one's personal live.
For example, an art student will be interested in looking at department's window decreations and a marketing student like to watch advertisment more than others. Our marketing teachers shared a very interesting personal interest with us one day in class.



休闲娱乐-首先我觉得要讲明白一个事情 就是这里的休闲娱乐值的是除了工作之外的休闲娱乐 不把把工作带回家 或者是工作方面的 social算在内 我觉得这个首影响应该是比较小的 毕竟一个人在他自己想做什么的时候做什么是不需要经过别人同意包括 是自己从小喜欢的 比如说我吧 喜欢画画 这和我本科的专业 金融投资完全没关系 我只是觉得在我很累的时候我特别想画画 让自己的想法自然而然的通过画笔流露出来 做这个以来让我自己得到很好的放松, 二来这是我自己喜欢的事情 所以做这个我很开心 我会保持这个习惯 即使 以后工作了 而且我觉得这个受我工作的影响应该不大

外表-我觉得这里的外表指的是穿着 我觉得这个会受影响 从最源头的shopping来说 我买衣服一定会注重实用性 所以对我来说如果一件衣服能够既在工作的时候穿又在休息的时候穿是再好不过的拉 而且你买衣服的审美多多少少会受周围人影响而且你会需要周围的人给你不断地reinforment你才会觉得你买的特别有价值

总的来说 我觉得work will influence people's lives in gerneral. But this influence vries in different aspects, in different levels. (11:32)

数学: 75min 12:37-14:00
problem solving 24-OG 21-45
data sufficiency 13-OG 1-13

5 min

阅读理解 (ReadingComprehension)~4篇 14 题 OG
句子改错 (SentenceCorrecting)~16 题 OG77-79,  101-113
逻辑推理 (CriticalReasoning)~11题OG31-42


bx bo,ex, c,b
1 D 03:45o
2 E 00:38o
3 D 00:20o
4 B 00:24x
5 C 01:10o
6 E 00:32x
7 D 02:01x
8 C 02:20o
9 C 03:13o
10 B 10:40o
11 B 00:57o
12 D 03:13x
13 D 03:15x
14 D 00:34o
15 E 00:56o
16 D 01:06o
17 A 01:12o(我悲剧了。。猜得居然比做的对的多)
18 E 02:25o
19 D 01:33o
20 B 00:40o
21 E 04:47o
22 D 01:23x
23 b 01:45o
24 D 01:35o
25 C 00:47o
26 E 02:07x
27 A 02:37o
28 E 02:38o
29 C 00:38o
30 C 00:11o
31 C 00:24o
32 E 01:53o
33 D 02:03o
34 A 00:57x
35 C 00:50o
36 A 01:14x
37 D 01:48x
38 B 01:20x
Data
1对AD
2对BD
12对 C
1,2对D
12错E

1 B 00:02
2 A 00:16
3 B 02:01
4 D 00:28
5 D 00:23x
6 B 00:58
7 E 00:39
8 A 01:28x
9 C 00:16
10 B 01:15
11 B 00:31
12 B 01:37
13 C 00:28
14 A 00:27
15 B 00:46
16 A 02:02
17 A 00:13
18 B 00:16
19 D 03:06x
20 C 00:29
21 A 02:27
22 E 00:20
23 B 00:28
24 D 00:37
25 B 00:58
26 A 00:44x
27 E 01:30
28 A 00:47
29 E 01:53
30 E 00:50
31 D 01:05
32 A 03:29
33 C 01:54
34 A 01:07
35 B 01:30
36 A 00:32
37 B 00:21
38 d--我貌似多填了一道? 真奇怪。。
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发表于 2011-1-19 12:07:25 | 只看该作者
坚持的不错,我今天SC的比较部分比较挫败,我专门在语法去找来大全比较题,有的组错的多的时候都快一半了,貌似句子一长,我就搞不清楚比较对象了
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-23 00:12:35 | 只看该作者
Whats the final objective of business? it is to make the obtaining of a living-the obtaining of food, clothing, shelter, and a minimum of luxuries-so mechanical and so little time consuming that people shall have time for other things." -A business leader, circa 1990

不同意观点
这个观点第一眼看来好像很有道理,the final objective of business is to make everything simple so that people can have time for other things. 可是细细看来。还有有很多问题的。以一个商学院的学生来说 ,business是我生活。一些文章中所举的例子。food,clothing 都是我们生活的一部分。最最坏的假设,就我个人而言很难想到other things what else i can do.
我可以理解说通过大量生产以及分工细化去生产商品。这是生产的一部分
business是更加细腻 更加需要投入的东西,而不是冷冰冰的生产
另外,我们说到的生产这只是business的一部分。 还有销售,设计等各个方面的事情,光是用而且有些business到后面越是要投入大量的时间和心思才能做的好。

0:21
Owning strong technological skills does not mean everything as a techonological worker. The world is changing and developing everyday, which means we will see different new things everyday. Some new technology is been created. And most of them aim to using less time to get more production. With this, even people with matural techonologu skill need to keep updated. And going to college and learn is one of the fastest and easist way to do it. Plus, most colleges have a varity of resources, which you can know what is going on worldwise.

More, learning skills is not the only reason to go to college. There are more things you can learn at college such as communication with others and building networking. From my personal experience, especial as a business students,these two things sometimes are more important than your study, same as the techonology skills.

The last reason I gave is money is not the only thing we should care about for our life, there are more importatants things than money.
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