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作文题目：       Some famous athletes earn millions each year. However, look at the other professor like surgeons or professors who earn much less than them. Do you think they deserve so much?  


      How much should one person deserve is not only depends on the ability, the contribution to the society, abut also the way that he earns. Different people earn their money in different ways, and the money they can get is also different. Athletes deserve money from their own efforts and personal ability. So it is reasonable for them to get much.
      May be you think athletes' work is much easier than professors', but actually being an athlete is very strenuous. They almost stay at training center train themselves everyday and seldom have time go back home especially there are some competitions. What's more, the emulation between athletes is extremely fierce, so it's difficult to win the prize. But once they succeed or break the record in the competition, they will get different medals according to their performance. Then both administration and their local government will award them, what's more the medal itself also worth a lot. Besides competitions, athletes can also earn money by advertising for companies or participating all kinds of activities. And the money they can deserve from the company and entertainment institution always much more higher and easier than from the competitions. In another side, they also make large contribution to the society. As you see now more and more famous people including athletes, stars,entrepreneur etc.   are join the procession of philanthropy. And they are willingly to donate their money to the Hope Project to help whose who are in trouble.
    As for professor, i think why they are paid less lies in several reasons. Firstly, professors like surgeons are always devote themselves to doing research, they have less time and ways to deserve money compare to athletes. Second, their funds is mainly from our government, while it cares not so much about this area, especially when compared with America and other western countries. Third, the public also care less about them, because a lot people will keep the view that our government will support their job and all kinds of research.
      In conclusion, even though professors' contribution is lager and their work seems much more harder and complicated than athletes, we can't say directly that athletes deserve so much because professors are paid less. Nowadays, it is very difficult to seek complete fair, what we can do is improve our ability, adjust our mind and adapt to the society.