第一篇 Independent writing 感觉写成AWA了 求高人指点

sheikh239

感觉走偏了，又似乎没偏，很困惑……

主要是这思路一开始就有点刹不住了，以后的文章肯定不会写成这样。太危险了……

大家能给建议就请不吝赐教，觉得积重难返的话就权当是好玩吧

TOPIC:It is only worth watching movies that can teach us something about real life, agree or disagree.


I totally agree that only worth watching movies can teach us something about real life.

At first, we should make clear what “worth watching movies” mean. Since “worth” is an abstract word that can’t be quantized, it can only be judged by our personal experiences and wisdoms. So it’s a little hard to make a perfect definition of “worth”. In order to simplify this problem, we might define the “worth watching movies” as some movies that mean something important to certain people or can make certain people really think. If we accept this definition, whether the movie is worth watching depends on the people who watch it. For example, a senior manager may think that some soap operas are ridiculous and aren’t worth watching at all. But to a housewife, the trivial incidents happen in the soap operas could occupy the majority of her everyday life and could awake her strong recognition. In this respect, the movies naturally teach us something about real life.

On contrary, the “not worth watching movies” can be defined as the opposite of the “worth watching movies” that mean nothing to anybody or can’t make anyone think of any valuable things. In fact, this kind of movies barely exists, since the billions of people all over the world have vast amount of taste. A movie that major people don’t like may really mean something to a small group of people. We cannot exclude this possibility. So, any movie is more or less worth watching to some degree. To say at least, the screenwriters, or the moviemakers of their movies think about real life during the making the movies or by watching them. How can people don’t think about real life during their own everyday works? In a word, the not worth watching movies don’t exist at all.

There also exists another situation. That is, to some people, all the movies are not worth watching. To this kind of people, no movies can teach them anything about real life. But this situation doesn’t conflict with the topic since it can be excluded.

In conclusion, since all of the movies are exact worth watching movies. We can say that only worth watching movies can teach us something about real life.

cuixl

我也觉得这篇容易写成ARGUMENT...我觉得应该没问题吧~反对观点不就是反驳麽~

cuixl

不好意思……我好像搞错LZ的中心大意了……