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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Most of people realized life is challenging and rigorous after they entered the real world, and sometimes people have no choices but to do something that is unpleasant for them in order to survive. Therefore, in my point of view, that people should not only do things that they enjoy to do. Among the numerous reasons and examples, I would list three primary ones to support my opinion in following paragraph.
First, for most of people, they have no power to control everything in their lives. Throughout our entire life time, we would encounter various kinds of harsh situations which force us to doing some awful things. For example to take my case, every time an exam is approaching, I would spend days and nights in library reviewing for exam in case I do not get a F. I am sure nobody likes arduous and tedious work of reviewing exam, but most of people have to do it, unless they do not care about their future and have a low standard for themselves.
Second, things that are enjoyable for people are not always right things that worth doing. If you measure how enjoyable the thing is according to how pleasant and exciting it makes you feel, I would have to say taking drugs will be one of the most enjoyable things to do in the whole world; however, not so many people would like to sacrifice their health and money for simply doing the most enjoyable things. Furthermore, sometimes people doing amusing things might hinder them to achieve success. For example, it is rare that student who spends tons of his time on video game could graduate from college.  
Finally, sometimes doing unpleasant things help people to see the truth. When I was in middle school, every 9th grade student had to spend a month to pick cottons in the field, the work was terribly hard for kids like us and the weather was awfully bad. But after we survived from the month of hard work, we realized lots of things we never thought about.  The bucolic life is not like what in the movie that people lying on a cozy couch and enjoying the sunset, and the truth we see is that farmers sweating all over the field and working under the burning sunshine.
Taking account of all the reasons I stated above, we may reach the conclusion that people are definitely needed to do things that are unpleasant, if they want to be success and want to see the truth of life through their own eyes.