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求教一篇JJissue思路

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楼主
发表于 2009-6-20 08:20:00 | 只看该作者

求教一篇JJissue思路

Portrayal of violence makes commercially success in television program, movies, songs, so those who make popular entertainment should incorporate 
more violence in their

    
entertainment products.
[此贴子已经被作者于2009-6-20 8:21:13编辑过]
沙发
发表于 2009-6-20 14:15:00 | 只看该作者

1. protrayal of violence is harmful to youth, especially to children. The violent scene will feed with these young people with unhealthy images of the society. For example , the crime rate of youth has rising dramatically recent years. Most of these crimes are caused by a mimic of the violent portrayal appeared in television program, movies and even songs.

2. Protrayal of violence does not benefit the society in general. The violence impact the harmony of the familiy by stimulating more and more family violence. For example...

3. Admittedly, the movies and television program that are full of violence are popular recent years. Some entertainment companies boost that these scene are not harmful at all because crime rate is always rising in recent decades. But this is not an excuse to hind the fact that protraral of violence accelerates the crime rate, especially that among the children ...

加上开头结尾,例子多写几句就差不多了

 


[此贴子已经被作者于2009-6-20 14:17:25编辑过]
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2009-6-20 15:39:00 | 只看该作者

多谢sunnebj

第三点写得太好了

我原来只想到1,2点,但感觉怎么像再批判所有television program, movies, songs,都不应该有violence,好像跟题目说的不太对上号

这第三点这么一加就豁然开朗了

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