以下是引用ilhht在2009-3-26 5:06:00的发言: GWD1-Q2: By merging its two publishing divisions, the company will increase their share of the country’s $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging from obscure textbooks to mass-market paperbacks. A. their share of the country’s $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging B. from 6 percent to 10 percent its share of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges C. to 10 percent from 6 percent in their share of the $21 billion book market in the country, a market ranging D. in its share, from 6 percent to 10 percent, of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges E. to 10 percent from 6 percent its share of the country’s $21 billion book market, which ranges step1:介词结构,主语,发现代词不对,应该用its排除AC同意 step2:逗号后面which,限定性定语从句就近修饰,只有E是修饰market的排除BD 在A介词B的结构中,[A介词B that]或者[A介词B,which] 定从也是可以跳跃修饰A的,很多时候当A是此短语的中心词时是可以跳跃修饰的。我觉得D不好在它用了个in its share,是不是错了我不敢说啊,但是不如B和E好,比较非主流~ step3:double check,应该忠实原文,原文提示最后一个分句用了ranging,现在分词后置定语修饰market,所以which必然要修饰market,而且结构应该是increase to…from…不要被from….to迷惑同意
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