时间状语位置更替改变句子意思 同类题目补充: GWD7-Q2: 逻辑主语 /平行的陷阱总结的很好 /代词指代/ 时间状语位置更替改变句子意思The first commercially successful drama to depict Black family life sympathetically and the first play by a Black woman to be produced on Broadway, it was Lorraine Hansberry’s A Raisin in the Sun that won the New York Drama Critics’ Circle Award in 1959, and was later made into both a film and a musical.
- it was Lorraine Hansberry’s A Raisin in the Sun that won the New York Drama Critics’ Circle Award in 1959, and was later made
- in 1959 A Raisin in the Sun, by Lorraine Hansberry, won the New York Drama Critics’ Circle Award and was later made
- Lorraine Hansberry won the New York Drama Critics’ Circle Award for A Raisin in the Sun in 1959, and it was later made
- Lorraine Hansberry’s A Raisin in the Sun won the New York Drama Critics’ Circle Award in 1959 and was later made
- A Raisin in the Sun, by Lorraine Hansberry, won the New York Drama Critics’ Circle Award in 1959, and later made it
A,it多余 B,in 1959插入位置不好,隔开了同位语 in 1959这个时间状语放在整个句子前或者句子后,变成了整个句子的时间状语,不好。这里只修饰won这个动作。 C,同位语不匹配(drama和人) D is the best E,made it主语不正确,不合逻辑。 E后面用了and,导致made在结构上与前面的won平行,那主语就都是A Raisin in the Sun了,逻辑含义错误,A Raisin in the Sun不可能发出made这个动作。 (注意下面老外总结的“and的平行结构”,注意and前出现逗号的用法!)
注意本题B和D的差别,同位语也存在匹配问题。
我在B,D之间徘徊,B为什么错?D里的所有格形式 sb’s sth 记得GMAC不倾向于这种结构啊? The first commercially successful drama to depict Black family life sympathetically and the first play by a Black woman to be produced on Broadway, it was Lorraine Hansberry’s A Raisin in the Sun that won the New York Drama Critics’ Circle Award in 1959, and was later made into both a film and a musical.
Lorraine Hansberry’s A Raisin in the Sun could be a contentious point in choice D.
Can somone confirm if 's is correct in this context? Difficult to reject use of possesive here.It does not create any modifier problem & is as good as "by Lorraine" in E B. in 1959 A Raisin in the Sun, by Lorraine Hansberry, won the New York Drama Critics’ Circle Award and was later made (phrase seems to modify 1959) in (B), the phrase in 1959 is causing a serious chaos. Never place such extra modifier before the subject of main clause. (B) is out. 我理解了,in 1959放在了整个句子的开头,导致后面的later这件事是发生在later in 1959,成了1959年这一年晚些时候发生的事情,与won the award成了同一年的发生的事情了。而题目的原意是获奖是在1959,这个戏剧被制作成电影和音乐是1959年之后的事情,不是同一年发生的。
D、E的区别: A major difference between the two choices is the PRESENCE of COMMA BEFORE "AND" IN E.This is precisely what it makes the choice E grammatically incorrect.Note that "A Raisin in the Sun" is the subject of the 1st clause as well as that of second one.In other words,the whole sentence is a simple sentence having two verbs.A COMMA BEFORE "AND" CAN ONLY BE USED TO JOIN TWO INDEPENDENT CLAUSES IN A COMPOUND SENTENCE.In E the absence of another subject after "and" invalidates the presence of comma before "and".This is precisely what the sentence is testing.View this for further illustration-
=>John went to the market and bought Official Guide. CORRECT =>John went to the market, and bought Official Guide. INCORRECT =>John went to the market, and he bought Official Guide. CORRECT (注意老外总结的对,如果and前面出现了逗号,那么”,and”后出现的必然是一个独立的句子,要有自己的主语!) E is the second case which is WRONG.
GWD-8-Q16: GWD-13-15 难题!时间状语位置变化 时态 记得查老外帖子Concerns about public health led to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems to serve metropolitan Boston. A. Concerns about public health led to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems to serve B. Concerns about public health have led to the construction of three separate sewer systems between 1876 and 1904 to serve C. Concerns about public health have led between 1876 and 1904 to the construction of three separate sewer systems for serving D. There were concerns about public health leading to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems serving E. There were concerns leading between 1876 and 1904 to the construction of three separate sewer systems for serving
时间状语位置变化 导致句子逻辑含义变化的题!
问题B 为什么错? A is clear.
'Between 1876 and 1904' suggests that you need either 'past perfect' or 'simple past'. Original senetence is correct.
Concerns about public health led to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems to serve metropolitan Boston.
There are three guiding principles to solve this Q- 1)Read the original sentence & test each choice, the meaning should not change.B definitely changes the meaning-placing between 1876 to 1904 after to denotes -concern led to the constructionbetween 1876 to 1904.There is a very minute difference.The original sentence wants to say-3 sewer systems were constructed between 1876 to 1904.The construction of 3 systems was because of concerns. However, B says-construction between 1876 to 1904 was due to... If there was a comma before leading in D,I would have given a second thought -use of participle phrase.Howeverr, that is not the case.health leading portion is wrong here.If it were,health that lead... it could have been correct.Moreover, it seems concerns were about (public health leading....)i.e construction & everything is getting included in concern. In E concerns seems to lead/leading which is definetely not what the sentence intends to convey. 2) Test for the tense;note that the sentence is talking about something a century back- definitely past tense.Eliminate B & C for 'have'. 3) U will rarely find a construction like There were/was correct in GMATLAND.
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