问GWD17-Q29

yuminjia

GWD17-Q29:

Mary Wollstonecraft’s A Vindication of the Rights of Woman (1792) was unprecedented in its firsthand accounts of the indignities suffered by women and because it was eloquent and passionate in exposing and criticizing these indignities.

 

A.      and because it was eloquent and passionate in exposing and criticizing

B.       and in that it was eloquent and passionate when exposing and criticizing

C.      as well as the eloquence and passion it had in exposing and criticizing

D.      and in the eloquence and passion with which it exposed and criticized

E.       but also its eloquent and passionate exposure and criticism of

答案是D

为什么C不对呢？请指点。。。

AlienX

C的as well as的平衡對象沒有D清楚

happydongxi

那D中with which, with是怎么回事?

yuminjia

以下是引用happydongxi在2009-1-8 16:12:00的发言：
那D中with which, with是怎么回事?

同问这里的with是接？D的顺序没有太搞明白

C里面as well as the eloquence and passion （it had ）in exposing and criticizing好象没有语法错误啊 这里不能用as well as连接吗？还是有其他的错误？

yuminjia

哪个好心的NN来解答下偶啊

AlienX

which指代the eloquence and passion, with是被前置...: it exposed and criticized these indignities with the eloquence and passion.

yuminjia

以下是引用AlienX在2009-1-9 10:36:00的发言：
which指代the eloquence and passion, with是被前置...: it exposed and criticized these indignities with the eloquence and passion.

o 明白了 关键是D中in。。。。和前面的in its firsthand accounts 对称吧？

AlienX

yes

hanheli

以下是引用yuminjia在2009-1-9 12:58:00的发言：

o 明白了 关键是D中in。。。。和前面的in its firsthand accounts 对称吧？

没错，c中和谁并列难以判断。

lydiar_020

Mary Wollstonecraft’s A Vindication of the Rights of Woman (1792) was unprecedented in its firsthand accounts of the indignities suffered by women and because it was eloquent and passionate in exposing and criticizing these indignities.

1. and because it was eloquent and passionate in exposing and criticizing
     
2. and in that it was eloquent and passionate when exposing and criticizing
     
3. as well as the eloquence and passion it had in exposing and criticizing
     
4. and in the eloquence and passion with which it exposed and criticized
     
5. but also its eloquent and passionate exposure and criticism of

   Answer: AD

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问，D为什么比A好，像介词短语那些需要严格对称？

难道D倒出来，正确的顺序是，

。。。。and in （its firsthand accounts ）  it exposed and criticized these indignities with the eloquence and passion 

D省略这么多，语序倒来倒去这么多，不会很容易就歧义吗？

这题中的and不可以理解为连接两个并列句吗？这种形式的对称又不重要的

。。。。and in （its firsthand accounts ）  it exposed and criticized these indignities with the eloquence and passion 

D省略这么多，语序倒来倒去这么多，不会很容易就歧义吗？

这题中的and不可以理解为连接两个并列句吗？这种形式的对称又不重要的

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