我的作文模板和一些提纲

joseyjosey

我有两个模板，一个用于agree/disagree，另一个用于多选一。只是第一段不一样，大家可以参考一下。
agree/disagree
......(抄题目). Before rendering my opinion, I think it is important to take a glance at the arguements on both sides. Many people who support this opinion may think that.... Others, on the other hand, might think that ..... The choice, nevertheless, is not easy to make. However, I shall agree that the later one is more reasonable. In the following discuss, I will reason and provide evdience to discuss my viewpoint.

No issue is more important than this one that .... Facts witness and present many examples as below: .... I think there are no better examples than these ones to demonstrate this point more clearly.

The fact that .... is another head and chief reason I have chosen to put here..... If you can see it, you can understand it more deeply.

Admittedly, there is no denying that (这里如果是agree/disagree就让步一下说一个小缺点；如果是多选一就在接着说优点) ---以下“--”以内的都用在agree/disagree里面 in certain circumstances. For example..... Thus this alone is too weak to sufficiently strengthen the point. When the advantages and disadvantages are carefully compared, the most striking conclusion is obvious.--

To sum up, given the reason discussed above, which sometimes intertwine to form an organic whole and thus become more prusuasive, we can safely arrive at .... In fact, not only I prefer to .... But also I perfer to ....

多选一的模版：
It seems, in so many items, very difficult for us to prefer one to another because all of them have their advantages and disadvantages to the extent that it is hard to distinguish. Yet that does not mean they are all the same to me. Which one I prefer depends on my own experience, life style and emotional concerns. To be frank, I would prefer   if personal quality is considered as a criterion to choose things. There are ...填数词...  advantages ...rendered below.

[此贴子已经被作者于2003-12-25 14:35:23编辑过]

redpassion

希望大家交流自己的作文模板

joseyjosey

这是我准备作文的时候写的一些提纲，希望对大家有用。其实，我现在也在等作文分数，因为我的分数是 24，11-28，26。 20*--260。我究竟要考多少才够250呢？我复习了2个月，实在不想在考一次了，而且时间也来不及了。请有经验的大虾帮我分析一下。

11. No. should give more fund to sports
because: a. Everything is based on a good health. if one student is not healthy, he can not even eat and walk, how can we imagine he study or go to the library to search for the knowledge he wants. For example, the famous scientist Chen JIngrun died from liver cancer and ended his pursue in scientific world at early as his 40's. If he had paid enough attention to his health, he would not have to pass away so early without complishing his study.
      b. with the development of internet, students can easily spot what they need by using a computer. for example, you can type "Canadian Universities" on the home page of the searching engine, www.google.ca and then press ENTER. Accordingly, all the information associated with Canadian univeristies would displaied on the screen of the computer. you don't need to waste a whole day wondering at the library.
      c. with time passing by, books and facilities in library would get old and need to spend large quantities of money to maintain them. Also the expenditures for employees of libraries is considerable. we can save the money for other important  things such as purchaing teaching equipment, increasing teachers' salaries and etc.



33. To compare jewelry with concert tickets is just like to compare orange with apple-it's hard for people to make a decision whether they should spend the money to purchase a piece of jewelry or buy concert tichets when they are bestowed certain amount of money. I would buy jewelry.
    a. we can store value by purchasing jewelry. In an inflation era, many items are easily to depreciate. For example, we might buy a 486 computer at the cost of $2,000 in 1995. But now, if you ask somebody if he would spend $200 on a 486 computer, the answer would be definitely no way. The price of a piece of jewelry, however, will not vibrate severely within a long period of time. That's the reason why many people collect golds, artifacts and jewelries. Moreover, the longer you keep the higher the value.
    b. internet. download each famous musician's product from the internet. for instance,....
    c. concert tichets are usually very expensive. we may save the money to buy some CDs. by this means, we can also enjoy the splendid music of those distinguished musicians.



66. yes. i agree.
    a. when they enroll in school, they spend more time with classmates than with their parents. thus they have more chance to communicate with their peers while they have less opportunity to talk with their parents after class. especially when today's parents are busily involved in their works.
    b. young people have common interest since they have the same age. For example, girls like to talk about their favorite movies stars while boys' topic would focus on sports such as NBA or DHL.
    c. Due to gap with their parents, children generally do not like to disclose their inner world to aged people. they would rather share their ideas with their peers, especially those related with privacy. for example, if a girl loves a boy, she would rather tell her story to her close friend rather than her parents.


73 make life easier and more convenient.
    a. save our time and make life easier. can you imagine, ten years ago, that we purchase a television from a shopping mall through e-commerce by simply using a computer; can you imagine that we tranfer our money to customers by merely clicking the mouse in stead of go to the bank; can you image that we buy and sell the stocks at home but don't need to ask the broker screaming at the stock exchange.
    b. save our money and make life convenient. emails in stead of letters and long distance calls, make the family member closer and business partners closer.
    C. computer technologies make life happier. with the development of technologies(broadband), we can transmit video programs through internet. we can watch them in front of a computer screen in stead of a television. we can also download our favorite music and movie without pay a lot of money.


108 family and friends. Although there is a saying "seeing is believing"
    a. individule's time, money and ability is limited. for instance, if we plan to start a small business, it's a good idea to get advices form friends, money from banks and help from family members. If we do it from scratch, it's easy to lose money.
    b. advices from others are based on many people's real experiences, which are valuable. why don't we make use of them. they are shortcuts which enables us to do things easier. for example, if one walks on a street of a new place, he may ask the local resident how to get to the place he wants to go, which definitely saves his time and makes his search easier. Conversely, if he looks for a place totally by himself....... for example, scientific reserach.....


111. large number of friends.
    a. the more friends one can have, the larger the relationship network he owns, which helps him a lot. for example, doing business.
    b. have more friends, get more advice when you are solving a problem
    c. each person has his own experience, some are successful, some are not. From their stories, you gain precious information which helps you to make correct decisions. and can enrich your mind and sharpen your ways of thinking.


144. house
    a. private space: don't need to live with so many people in the same building, maybe some of them you don't like. have onw parking lot and storage place
        b. healthy life: garden, flower, grass, fresh air, healthy life and relieve work stress
    c. safe: you don't need to worry about 911 or you are stuck in the middle of stories when elevators are out of control.


151. panda
    a. small number, according to statistics, there are only ....  on the edge of extinction, highly protected animal
    b. looks so lovely, every people love it. to educate people to protect natural resources including animals
    c. its value to scientific research


125. No
    a. high pressure of today's students. they should spend more time on other kind of knowledge. for example, computer science. internet, e-commerce it the future. another example: accounting. start one's small business or personal investment or declare taxation
    b. the need for artists is much less than that of other industries. according to a statistics, although the growth of IT industry is slowing down due to the sluggish world economy, there is still in great need of software engineers, database administrators ... in the coming 15 years.
    c. students still have opportunities to learn music and art when they enter into college or universities. In addition, those who have interest in this area may choose their general education specialized this area as they wish. There are plenty of such kind of courses provided in schools, full-time and part-time as well.


158.
    a.the difference between distinguished people and ordinary ones lies in that distinguished people are successful or they are experts in some spesific areas. so they have many successful experiences and advices that do provide assistance to others.  for example, bill gates' book "the Road to Success" introduces how he starts the software giant from scratch when he was teenager. we can learn a lot from Bill Gates by reading his stories.
    b.  distinguished people are ordinary people too. they may also make mistakes. They use their personal experinces to tell you what you can do, more important, what you can not do. those experiences are also valuable to us in the pursuit of our objectives. for example, the famous NBA star, Kobe Bryant, was recently involved in a lawsuit, in which he was accused of raping a lady. Acually it is not only a lesson for Kobe, but also a mirror for us. Men are eaqual in front of law, anybody, however outstanding he is, will gets in troubled, as long as he violates the law.



160. prefer to complain in writing
    a. writing can clearly express your dissatisfactory already. In the meanwhile, writing enables the services or goods enough time to evaluate your complaint and improve the quality. just like the a buffer in the computer, sometimes you can get the consequence you want.
    b. save your time and money. let assume that you complain in person, you have to ....



165. day care
    a. many people need to find some volunteers to take care of their children. for example, those couples, both busband and wife have to go to work.....
    b. although some couples are in great need of day care, they cannot afford the rate of this service, which usually would charges $XXX/hr. To be a volunteer of day care does make sense to those couples as a result they can concentrate on their work.
    c. provide the opportunity to get along with children, which i like very much since i intend to pursue my master degree in education in the future. what i learn in class is only theoretical knowledge. In the meanwhile, real world knowledge is also important for those who want to develop a career in education field. provide the chance for me to observe their behaviour, their ways of thinking and the changes of their inner psychological world


166.
    a. education. go to school is the milestone of a child. knowledge, classmates, teacher can exert influence on him/her.
    b. falling in love with somebody is another milestone of a youngster, because it indicates the maturity of one's emotional world. for example, a boy will learn a lot in the process of pursuing a girl. He gets to know that except to satisfy his desire for food and clothes, he still wants more joys to meet his psychological needs; he learns not only should he take care of himself, but also someone else; he also learns to confront competitions coming from the same sex. all of these will make him mature on the road of growing up.
    c. getting the first job is also important to young people.  although the pay check may not be enough to offset all their daily expenses, but it's important. this is an indicator which suggest that this is the first time that they depend on their own abilities to survive. they learns to be independent in the process of applying for a job, no matter it is decent or not.



183.
    a. different cultures. for example, the movie "The Mummy Returns" presents a unique scenario of ancient Egypt. We can see the golden desert, the tomb, the marvolous pryramid and the spendid ancient civilization.
    b. the photographies and selections of sceneries in certain movies, especially those getting Oscar Awards are pretty distinctive. I am an amateurish photographer and love to take pictures wherever i go. therefore those movie widen my views and tell me how to improve my skills.
    c. I am also a fun of some movie stars, such as Tom Hanks and Harrison Ford. Watching their performance is really a pleasure to me and make me relax after working for a whole day. Their positive attitudes toward life and ways of thinking showing on those movies really give pefect examples for the real world life.

joseyjosey

最后为这个贴子做个总结吧。我最后的作文分数是5.5。总分260。就是说虽然我的作文没有满分，可是总分并没有扣分呢。希望对大家估分有用。good luck

clary

噢？作文5.5居然也没从总分里扣？


我上次是1**—250（下线忘记了），作文写的一塌糊涂（都怪我平时练的少啊）


怕得不了237，就把成绩cancel了


谢谢楼主的总结，也祝贺你可以和ETS说拜拜了：P


我还得准备3月29再战啊，sigh~~~没信心的说啊~~~~

sony

thax for ur TWE ideas~~

ben95

非常感谢提供的你的资料!!!

xkfy0521

我也是3.29再战的,祝我们好运了

云弄月

THANKS..


为什么你们都可以考那么高啊.... 我的阅读什么的老是不行....


    

kevin2003dy

请教楼主大人!


本人正在准备模版,但不知道解释原因的题目如何用?