[求助]请RIO帮修改一下ISSUE模版

没股票的麦兜

要二战了,很头疼ISSUE的模版,实在记不住另一个新模版了,请帮忙修改一下我一战用的模版,好吗?

不好意思,原来的模版拼凑得不好,分数也不好.不要笑我.先谢谢了.

也欢迎大家提出意见,谢谢.   

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-6-12 1:49:50编辑过]

没股票的麦兜

To some extent, I agree with the author's assertion that_____. However, the author unnecessarily extends this broad assertion to an irreversible extreme while overlooks other essential factors that may affect the issue.`

 

On the one hand, I am in favor of the author's recommendation to some extent. The reason is that_____. Both common sense and personal experience have told us that it is almost impossible to ____ without ____. Thus, it is somewhat convincing that ______.

 

On the other hand, I disagree with the author's recommendation. The point for me to argue is that____.（the author overstate ___'s significance, and fail to take other compelling factors into account, such as____.）The reason is rather simple.______.

 

Coincidentally, a general research has been conducted by professors and institutes in my university, discovering that_____. Hence, my conclusion is not mere proverbial wisdom but a fact supported by research and academic authority.

 

Taking the above consideration into account, I feel quite comfortable to reach the conclusion that_____.

 

 

rio

以下是引用没股票的麦兜在2007-6-12 1:50:00的发言：

To some extent, I agree with the author's assertion that_____. However, the author unnecessarily extends this broad assertion to an irreversible extreme while overlooks other essential factors that may affect the issue.`

the author overlooks other essential factors such as... that may affect the issue, thus extending this broad assertion to an irreversible extreme.

On the one hand, I am in favor of the author's recommendation to some extent. The reason is that_____. Both common sense and personal experience have told us that it is almost impossible to ____ without ____. Thus, it is somewhat convincing that ______.

On the other hand, I disagree with the author's recommendation. The point for me to argue is that____.（the author overstate ___'s significance, and fail to take other compelling factors into account, such as____.）The reason is rather simple.______.

Coincidentally, a general research has been conducted by professors and institutes in my university, discovering that_____. Hence, my conclusion is not mere proverbial wisdom but a fact supported by research and academic authority.

Taking the above consideration(s) into account, I feel quite comfortable to reach the conclusion that_____.

我感觉没什么问题了，但注意每一段不能除了模板就没东西了，顺着自己的逻辑思维来写会比较顺畅也会写得比较多。

rio

另外，祝二战成功！

没股票的麦兜

谢谢RIO!!!

BTW,你说二战最好不用一战的模版,说会调出来看相似性.怕怕ING.老天保佑了.

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-6-12 3:24:10编辑过]

Zeldaw

没股票的麦兜，还没考完啊？我可是在你的指导下才逐渐进步的哈。

二战加油！

没股票的麦兜

以下是引用Zeldaw在2007-6-12 23:43:00的发言：

没股票的麦兜，还没考完啊？我可是在你的指导下才逐渐进步的哈。

二战加油！

别笑我啦,那次我好象看错名字了.一个跟你挺像的名字,在G语法区里狂发贴.曾经用了挺大劲跟那小家伙解释.

好了,好了,表笑我了.以后看到我的求救贴你可得回啊. 呵呵

 

 

happyapt2006

都用两分法，感觉怕怕，有些文章不会有强扭的感觉吗？

Zeldaw

一个跟你挺像的名字,在G语法区里狂发贴.曾经用了挺大劲跟那小家伙解释

的的确确就是我：）