［５８楼］盼指点6月2日独立写作：上大学前是不是应该找一年旅游或者工作，很多疑问－独立作文学习贴

seamoon8

做梦梦见作文得了２分，吓醒了

爬上来看看有没有给偶改作文的，没有回贴

顶．再睡去．

ＮＮ们帮偶改改作文啊．偶可想学好作文了．

谢谢．

seamoon8

顶一下．

seamoon8

顶

rio

以下是引用seamoon8在2007-6-4 16:58:00的发言：

rio斑斑，这个机经题偶在审题的时候的选择

第一种１）直接上大学２）旅游或者工作　这个像是agree的题型

第二种１）上大学２）去旅游，３）去工作，这个像是prefer的题型

感觉你上一楼的所说的　＂我写的内容是，要有工作经验，因为工作经历帮你选择专业并且帮你更好的学习你的专业。＂　　

是把旅游和工作分开谈呢，是像上面的第二种，这种题目的审题偶迷惑了．偶觉得是要么直接上大学，要么用一年先干点别的，旅游或者工作．

写的时候偶就奇怪，是不是偶把题审错了．

斑斑你再说说这个机经题的审题啊．

还有，帮偶改一下作文好吗．是不是太烂了，让你看着昏昏欲睡了，不好意思．

今天忙，不好意思，明天吧

seamoon8

好啊，谢谢rio斑斑，偶等着，

偶把许轶的书看完了前面解释的部分，后面有３０个例文，偶慢慢啃着．

想着还有一堆没弄．有些慌，这个不好．要调整心态.....

今天得练习口语了．不然考试一定死得很惨．

seamoon8

顶一下，现在在听听力．以前听会的，现在又不会了．怎么搞的啊．郁闷．．

seamoon8

顶

polo1478

听力建议下个SITMAN软件，听抄邱政政--听力二十大必背段子， 我感觉还不错。听力在质不在量。ANYWAY，LZ ＋U！

seamoon8

以下是引用polo1478在2007-6-6 12:44:00的发言：
听力建议下个SITMAN软件，听抄邱政政--听力二十大必背段子， 我感觉还不错。听力在质不在量。ANYWAY，LZ ＋U！

谢谢这个兄弟的鼓励，有在偶这里留言的，真是开心哦．

seamoon8

５８楼的作文，再贴一下，谁来帮改改啊．

斑斑们，牛牛们，兄弟姐妹们，帮帮改改啊．

6月2日机经：独立写作：上大学前是不是应该找一年旅游或者工作

Many people have a romantic idea of life in circular tutor. many living in the towns dream of living in a metropolis, of enjoying the porsperity of the city. Meanwhile, many living in  the cities would like to the historically famous sites far away from them. So, someone put forward a suggestion like this:  the high school student should spend one year on travelling or working. They think that without time, money and the experiences, the dream above will be a dream forever. It seems, to some degree, resonable. However, I strongly object it. In fact, It would be better for a high school student to immediately arrive at the college or university after graduating form the high school. 

First, it is obvious that being a college student younger than the classmates will improve the person’ competition. The earlier one enters the college or university, the earlier one begin to work. Accordingly, s/he will always has relatively higher energy which is such an essential factor in the modern society. And s/he could assimilate the up-to-date technology rapidly. Believe it or not, a friend of mine who is a successful general manager told me that according to him, his success in the career derives from that he is the youngest one of the people who came in the same company at the same time. Funny? But what he said is a true case.

Secondly, people can earn money as an undergraduate without the expense of sacrificing the study. There are a lot of job opportunities. Some post of the college are provided by the college office such as librarian, safeguard, cashier in the café, and even the cleaner. Meanwhile, because the college does not isolate form the society, the society also provide sorts of employments diversely. When I was student, I once engaged in the investigator, supermarket cashier, tutor and the sale promoter. Therefore, I afforded the fees myself and travelled to many places with the pay. As long as one manages her or his time effectively, s/he could do two job or even more. These post will all bring him or her money and the students can save the money to do what they want to do.

Finally, one can obtain the worthwhile experiences including both the study methods and the ability to personal communication. If one just graduate from the high school, s/he will confront many difficulties in dealing with the relationship. But if one enters the college or university, the situation is changed. The college or university normally offer a numerous courses excepted the major course. One can choose what s/he needs to take. Many people worry that lacking the personal skill will prohibit s/he make much progress in the future. Actually it is meaningless if s/he take part in some course such as organization behavior and social psychology. 

In a plural society, there will inevitably be different opinions. The key is to deal with them in such a way that they can play a constructive rather than destructive role. Entering into the college or university, in my opinion, is the former. One can enhance the competition, raises the money, and grasp the personal skills. In conclusion, I believe the choice I address above benefits for the people to develop their life happily and efficiently, Repeat it again, the choice like it is adapt to the people’s development.

请大家来帮忙改改啊，谢谢．