B Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
正确选项c. In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, B Potter
d:Carefully coordinated with her narratives, B Potter, in her book illustrations
原句很牵强地用了两个短语想来修饰 B Potter,却导致整个句意不够明确且不符合逻辑。在题干里,这两个修饰短语意思不够连贯,并且使主语 B Potter和动词 capitalized分离的太远。句子以 in her book illustration开头,然后接相关的从句which....保证了主语能和动词连在一起。
OG 对于D项的解释是:carefully coordinated修饰了B Potter,而不是 her illustration, 这是很荒谬的(也就是不合逻辑的)