我疯了~~鼓起很大勇气 发表12月8号考试时写的文章 请大家评分

fantasy06

518 words!!  N!

I heard 300 words is enough.   I really admire that you can write so much within 30 minutes!

Joypan

以下是引用dinno在2006-12-12 23:00:00的发言：

You have not a bad fundation for English. It will be better if you could read more English origins.

Your sentences are relatievly long, and there are grammar mistakes. You could choose to use simple sentences.

Anyway,you could expect a score of 4-4.5.

Good luck.

同意。感觉4分左右。