我疯了~~鼓起很大勇气 发表12月8号考试时写的文章 请大家评分

张紫汀

小女子在12月8号考了试，阅读很惨，听力和口语还行，就是作文心里没底。。本来想让新东方的老师帮我看一下，结果他直接甩我一句，没时间。。就来求助CD了，我爱你们，大侠们帮我看一下吧，估计一下分数。。对了，有三点注意一下

1.下面这篇文章，有一些拼写错误，为了与考试时的原文保持一致，我没有纠正最基本的拼写错误.

2.考试时那篇作文字数显示的是 518，现在这篇是450，不知怎么的..为了让大家看起来比较好受一点，我把字放大了，每段也空了一行

3.我最担心的是，本人有个坏习惯，每句开头从不大写，会不会扣分阿？？

topic:is it better to choose many academic classes or a specialization in a specific subject.

regard of is it better to choose many academic classes or a specialization in a specific subject, people have diverse opinions.if i had my way, i would fully side with the notion that specialization in a specific subject would bring great advantages to us,because of survival in the competition.

what is beyond a shadow of doubt is that we live in a world,where the knowledge is accumulated by multiplying, and at the same time , the more specialized it is, the highly it is regarded.thus, competition is a way of life in today's society,most notably the capitalists,which encourages competition.however, the competition as always contributes both benefits and detriments,and has been brought notices of us not only because its tremendous benefits but also widespread plagues.for instance,the individuals and companies alike, for sake of survival in the competiton,have to try their best to improve themselves and have a wealth of knowledge with specialization in certain area.as a result, the entire society prospers, at least economically.

so,what we could deduce from general principles is that the competition, which is continually mounting and shows no signs at the present of ceasing to rise,causes the importance and necessity of specialization.

however, if there is a view that people should choose many academic classes because they would obtain their miscellanious interersts,which i take leave to suspect,then it is the romantic and naive people who create it , not those who never fail to be with considerations of reality, in so far as it is universal acknowledged that the specialization is the most efficient way to achieve success, and it is the quality that shows the competitve edge.

to explain my meaning perfectly , let me give you a concrete example.due to the tempo of technology,which has never been such  rapid as it is today,a new generation of school start-ups have been spawned.Bill Gates, on behalf of this new,gives USA a jump on its rivals in software.however, if we assumed that Mr Gates choose medical classes in university as well as liberal arts,because of his allegedly various interests.all the americans would be shuddered at the thought, in so far as USA would fail to protect its competitive position in software,build and enhance its broadly based branches,and gain all the advantages of wide scale,just because of this awful imagination.

all things considered, if we deem specialization in a specific subject as a trivial thing and prefer to choose many academic classes, we would be with out any consideration of survival in the competition,with no regards of the reality,because the specialization,as i mentioned above,which shows the competitive edge to survive in the competition,is to some degree non-neglected or important.

张紫汀

自己先顶一个，由于我把字的大小改变了，每行结尾的单词分开了，对不起大众

Joypan

MM的文章口语化味道较重。光是第一段看下来感觉上不是很顺。比较怪。不过MM不用太在意，偶地评论只是片面之词。偶不善于估分。

[此贴子已经被作者于2006-12-12 14:50:19编辑过]

张紫汀

感谢楼上大侠，我也觉得我的作文怪，一直都是这样，连中文的作文也常被语文老师说怪~~~ 晕倒。。。

希望有更多人点评，估一下分，本人现在已经不怕丢脸了，大家随便说。。

张紫汀

顺便附上四川大学考点介绍

本人去考了两次，所以对四川大学考点较为熟悉

1。四川大学比较大，考试那栋楼在一个比较边僻的地方，要去那儿考试的人要记得从 磨子桥 那个门进去，然后再随便找个人问一下就可以了。或者如果迷路了就做个三轮车，学校里有三轮车。

2.证件。大家都已经知道了，相当重要！！还有就是手机，这点有点变态，进了那栋楼，只要手机一响就取消资格，意思就是，进那栋楼之前就要关机。

3。流程。大家不要去太早了，因为川大的规矩是，先在楼外等着，意思就是如果你去早了，就站在外面吹一会儿风吧。。然后排队由老师带入休息室，去了休息室之后，签保密协定，拿保险柜钥匙，然后把自己所有的东西锁进柜子（除了证件）。之后排队一个一个进考场，照相，考试。

4。环境。不错。可能因为隔板很高吧（我从没见过那么高的隔板）感觉不是那么受影响，如果有人还是很怕被影响，教大家一招，在包里装一张（不是一包，如果带一包的话监考老师不会让你带进去）卫生纸，入座后，塞进耳朵，再戴上耳机开始作阅读，就没什么了，听力时记得的取下来。。

   键盘有点高，它是直接放在桌上的，我当时考试的时候手就弄得好疼。有 空  调，而且相当暖和，有点过头了。

  监考官。有一两个（男的）有点烦，感觉像汉奸，好像自己为ETS卖命有多了不起似的。。其它的还不错。

  休息。休息时会有老师全程陪伴，你可以去柜子那里拿东西吃等等，四川大学要求你在还有二十秒休息结束时举手，然后老师过来帮你输入密码然后再次开始考试，但大家都知道，如果十分钟休息结束时不输入，它就不会开始。所以我在第二次考试的时候，就是把口语的模版都写完了再举手，老师过来后，看到我时间已经归0了也没有说什么。。

 结束。考完后，就可以直接走了，门口有一个老师会发你一个条子，上面写着什么时候领取成绩等等，蛮好的。

Joypan

句首如果不大写，我觉得应该会扣分的。因为这毕竟是基本常识。

Joypan

以下是引用张紫汀在2006-12-12 20:44:00的发言：

顺便附上四川大学考点介绍

本人去考了两次，所以对四川大学考点较为熟悉

1。四川大学比较大，考试那栋楼在一个比较边僻的地方，要去那儿考试的人要记得从 磨子桥 那个门进去，然后再随便找个人问一下就可以了。或者如果迷路了就做个三轮车，学校里有三轮车。

2.证件。大家都已经知道了，相当重要！！还有就是手机，这点有点变态，进了那栋楼，只要手机一响就取消资格，意思就是，进那栋楼之前就要关机。

3。流程。大家不要去太早了，因为川大的规矩是，先在楼外等着，意思就是如果你去早了，就站在外面吹一会儿风吧。。然后排队由老师带入休息室，去了休息室之后，签保密协定，拿保险柜钥匙，然后把自己所有的东西锁进柜子（除了证件）。之后排队一个一个进考场，照相，考试。

4。环境。不错。可能因为隔板很高吧（我从没见过那么高的隔板）感觉不是那么受影响，如果有人还是很怕被影响，教大家一招，在包里装一张（不是一包，如果带一包的话监考老师不会让你带进去）卫生纸，入座后，塞进耳朵，再戴上耳机开始作阅读，就没什么了，听力时记得的取下来。。

   键盘有点高，它是直接放在桌上的，我当时考试的时候手就弄得好疼。有 空  调，而且相当暖和，有点过头了。

  监考官。有一两个（男的）有点烦，感觉像汉奸，好像自己为ETS卖命有多了不起似的。。其它的还不错。

  休息。休息时会有老师全程陪伴，你可以去柜子那里拿东西吃等等，四川大学要求你在还有二十秒休息结束时举手，然后老师过来帮你输入密码然后再次开始考试，但大家都知道，如果十分钟休息结束时不输入，它就不会开始。所以我在第二次考试的时候，就是把口语的模版都写完了再举手，老师过来后，看到我时间已经归0了也没有说什么。。

 结束。考完后，就可以直接走了，门口有一个老师会发你一个条子，上面写着什么时候领取成绩等等，蛮好的。

谢谢分享~！

canalink

如果是6分的话，我给你5.5

joejo9

考完了就不要牵挂啦

dinno

You have not a bad fundation for English. It will be better if you could read more English origins.

Your sentences are relatievly long, and there are grammar mistakes. You could choose to use simple sentences.

Anyway,you could expect a score of 4-4.5.

Good luck.