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9月份第一次考时稀里糊涂的居然把ISSUE和ARGUMENT的摸板写颠倒了，导致作文只有4分。这次考时特别小心，先出来时是ARGUEMTN 后出来的是ISSUE，这个我应该记得清楚，因为考完回来CD上有人说他考时也是先AA后AI。这次摸板我背的很熟，打字也还可以，所以做的挺顺利。前天一查分数居然是3。5分。不知道问题出在哪里？有没有可能我用的摸板被大家用的太多了，所以一看见用这个摸板的人一律低分？先说说我的题目吧。 AA的原题我没找到，大致意思是一家公司经过调查发现约百分之七八十的人爱在电脑上看书，大多数人爱看古典文学。所以这家公司决定经营网上古典文学。 我用的模板是
（经典）开头段模板 The conclusion endorsed in this argument is that…. Several reasons are offered in support of this argument. First of all, the author points out that…. In addition, the author reasons（推论） that…
(What’s more, (而且)he also assumes that …) At first glance, the author’s argument appears to be somewhat convincing, but further reflection reveals that the conclusion is based on some dubious assumptions and the reasoning is biased due to the inadequacy and partiality in the nature of evidence provided to justify the conclusion. A careful examination would review（评论） how groundless（无根据） this conclusion is.
（经典）结尾段模板 To conclude, this argument is not persuasive as it stands. Accordingly,（因此） it is imprudent for the author to claim that…. ISSUE ：
“When someone achieves greatness in any field — such as the arts, science, politics, or business — that person’s achievements are more important than any of his or her personal faults.” Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above. Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations, or reading.
山峰各打50大板的摸板 把题目复述一下 ? To some extent, I agree with the author’s general assertion that if *** (即在作者的观点上，加上一些条件，有保留地赞同). However, the author unnecessarily extends this broad assertion to an irreversible extreme while overlooks other compelling factors that may affect this issue. On balance, my points of agreement and contention with the author involve the fundamental and deep analysis as discussed below.
On the one hand, I would like to admit that this statement, although suffers from some obvious drawbacks, has some merits primarily in some special cases in which the implicit rationale behind it accords with common sense and our experience in daily life. Hence, it is partially indisputable. After all, …..Even if, In other words .
Furthermore, . All these evidence demonstrates beyond any doubt that_____.
（以上两段要找两个理由，来说明作者观点如何对）
On the other hand, recognizing that a more applicable choice must incorporate different aspects of the issue as sufficient as possible, I have to point out that the author overstates ______’s comparative significance, and fail to take into account other essential factors. In short, this assertion is problematic in two aspects. The first argument —the one that I think the most compelling— is that the author overlooked , that is to say, . The second argument —it might have been noticed by others-- is that in some occasion, it is quite difficult to .
Accordingly, I tend to concede that when it comes to some certain circumstances it is partially appropriate
（这里找两个理由说明在一些场合下，作者观点还是不成立的，因为不管什么论点，成立还是会有条件的。此段模版字数已经很多，你只要列出不成立的观点即可，言简意赅，因为一般到这个时候，时间也不多了，容不得你写例子了。）
In conclusion, issue of ____________is a complex one, requiring subjective judgment, consequently, there are no easy or certain answers. So different are the personal experiences and emotional concerns among people with diverse culture that thousand individuals might hold thousand opinions. According to me, 把你开头的观点copy/paste上去.
ISSUE ：
“When someone achieves greatness in any field — such as the arts, science, politics, or business — that person’s achievements are more important than any of his or her personal faults.” Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above. Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations, or reading.
山峰各打50大板的摸板 把题目复述一下 ? To some extent, I agree with the author’s general assertion that if *** (即在作者的观点上，加上一些条件，有保留地赞同). However, the author unnecessarily extends this broad assertion to an irreversible extreme while overlooks other compelling factors that may affect this issue. On balance, my points of agreement and contention with the author involve the fundamental and deep analysis as discussed below.
On the one hand, I would like to admit that this statement, although suffers from some obvious drawbacks, has some merits primarily in some special cases in which the implicit rationale behind it accords with common sense and our experience in daily life. Hence, it is partially indisputable. After all, …..Even if, In other words .
Furthermore, . All these evidence demonstrates beyond any doubt that_____.
（以上两段要找两个理由，来说明作者观点如何对）
On the other hand, recognizing that a more applicable choice must incorporate different aspects of the issue as sufficient as possible, I have to point out that the author overstates ______’s comparative significance, and fail to take into account other essential factors. In short, this assertion is problematic in two aspects. The first argument —the one that I think the most compelling— is that the author overlooked , that is to say, . The second argument —it might have been noticed by others-- is that in some occasion, it is quite difficult to .
Accordingly, I tend to concede that when it comes to some certain circumstances it is partially appropriate
（这里找两个理由说明在一些场合下，作者观点还是不成立的，因为不管什么论点，成立还是会有条件的。此段模版字数已经很多，你只要列出不成立的观点即可，言简意赅，因为一般到这个时候，时间也不多了，容不得你写例子了。）
In conclusion, issue of ____________is a complex one, requiring subjective judgment, consequently, there are no easy or certain answers. So different are the personal experiences and emotional concerns among people with diverse culture that thousand individuals might hold thousand opinions. According to me, 把你开头的观点copy/paste上去. | 
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