【揽瓜阁语法打卡小分队】Day17（Practice 2开始）

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Day17（Practice 2开始）
1.(152)Unlike Schoenberg's twelve-tone system that dominated the music of the postwar period, Bartók founded no school and left behind only a handful of disciples.
A.Schoenberg's twelve-tone system that dominated
B.Schoenberg and his twelve-tone system which dominated
C.Schoenberg, whose twelve-tone system dominated
D.the twelve-tone system of Schoenberg that has dominated   
E.Schoenberg and the twelve-tone system, dominating

C* Unlike后面加名词，比较对象必须一致。

2.(153)For centuries, people on sea voyages washed their clothes by placing the dirty laundry in a strong cloth bag, then toss it overboard, and let the ship drag the bag for hours.
A.then toss it overboard, and let
B.then toss them overboard, and they let
C.tossing it overboard, and letting
D.tossing them overboard, and let        
E.tossing it overboard, and let

C* 完美平行，讲的是洗衣服的步骤。

3.(154)There is nowhere in early American literature where the influence of Jane Austen is so apparent as the novels of James Fenimore Cooper.
A.There is nowhere in early American literature where the influence of Jane Austen is so apparent as
B.In early American literature, nowhere is Jane Austin's influence so apparent than in
C.It is nowhere more apparent in early American literature that Jane Austen was an influence as in
D.Nowhere in early American literature is the influence of Jane Austen more apparent than in  
E.Nowhere in early American literature is it more apparent that Jane Austen had an influence than

D*
more后面不可以加as替代than，排除C。
A nowhere和后面的where比较redundant？最重要的是so…as…不可以表示比较。
For a comparison, you'd want "as apparent as...".
This kind of thing can be used to express the idea that something happens or is true to an extreme extent. E.g., This fact is so apparent as to be obvious.
so… than…错误，排除B。比较的是in …，选D。
翻译：在早期美国文学中，简-奥斯汀的影响最明显的莫过于詹姆斯-费尼莫尔-库珀的小说。

4.(155)With surface temperatures estimated at minus 230 degrees Fahrenheit, Jupiter's moon Europa has long been considered far too cold to support life, and with 60 square miles of water thought to be frozen from top to bottom.
A.Europa has long been considered far too cold to support life, and with
B.Europa has long been considered far too cold to support life, its
C.Europa has long been considered as far too cold to support life and has
D.Europa, long considered as far too cold to support life, and its     
E.Europa, long considered to be far too cold to support life, and to have

C*
DE使句子缺少主语，排除。C be considered as？不确定。 B its应该是修饰moon Europa，在这里修饰life，排除。A的and with太奇怪了。选C。
这道题选B。C be considered as …, unidiomatic
B的its…是在修饰claim: too cold to support life

5.(156)Deborah Aguiar-Velez, founder of Sistemas Corporation, has written a computer textbook in Spanish for people who speak Spanish and so then do not have to rely on translations from English.
A.for people who speak Spanish and so then
B.for people who speak Spanish, and then they
C.for people speaking Spanish who
D.so that people who speak Spanish         
E.so that people can speak Spanish and then

D* 根据句意，选D。
B的句意也对，但是一个句子里包括了两个完整的句子，不可以选。

6.(157)The striking differences between the semantic organization of Native American languages and that of European languages, in both grammar and vocabulary, have led scholars to think about the degree to which differences in language may be correlated with nonlinguistic differences.
A.that of European languages, in both grammar and vocabulary, have
B.that of European languages, including grammar and vocabulary, has
C.those of European languages, which include grammar and vocabulary, have
D.those of European languages, in grammar as well as vocabulary, has     
E.those of European languages, both in grammar and vocabulary, has

A*
应该是that，排除CDE。复数，排除B。

7.(158)Sales of wines declined in the late 1980s, but they began to grow again after the 1991 report that linked moderate consumption of alcohol, and particularly of red wine, with a reduced risk of heart disease
A.they began to grow again after the 1991 report that linked moderate consumption of alcohol, and particularly of red wine, with a reduced risk of heart disease
B.after the 1991 report that linked a reduced risk of heart disease with a moderate alcohol consumption, particularly red wine, they began growing again
C.in a 1991 report, moderate alcohol consumption, and particularly of red wine, which was linked with a reduced risk of heart disease, caused them to begin to grow again
D.with a reduced risk of heart disease linked in a 1991 report with moderate alcohol consumption, in particular red wine, they began growing again      
E.a reduced risk of heart disease linked to moderate alcohol consumption in a 1991 report, and in particular red wine, started them growing again

B*
A 不应该在particularly前面加and？存疑。A的and没有问题，表示平行，of alcohol, and of red wine，选A。
B对。B不对，red wine不可以修饰alcohol consumption。
C consumption caused them… 错。
D 错误太多。
E a reduced risk started them… 错。

8.(159)The first detailed study of magpie attacks in Australia indicates that by the time they had reached adulthood, 98 percent of men and 75 percent of women born in the country have been attacked by the birds.
A.by the time they had reached adulthood, 98 percent of men and 75 percent of women born in the country have been attacked by the birds
B.by the time they reach adulthood, 98 percent of men and 75 percent of women, who were born in the country, had been attacked by the birds
C.by the time they reached adulthood, 98 percent of men and 75 percent of women born in the country had been attacked by the birds
D.98 percent of men and 75 percent of women that were born in the country were attacked by the birds by the time they reach adulthood         
E.98 percent of men and 75 percent of women who were born in the country, by the time they reached adulthood had been attacked by the birds

C*
by the time，从句要完成时。
D语意模糊。E应adulthood后面加comma。
either of the following two constructions would be appropriate:
...by the time they reach adulthood, they have been attacked...
...by the time they reached adulthood, they had been attacked...
从句要比主句早一个时态？排除ABD。

9.(160)In a previous design, the weight of the discus used in track competition is concentrated in a metal center, but now it is lined with lead around the perimeter, thereby improving stability in flight and resulting in longer throws.
A.In a previous design, the weight of the discus used in track competition is concentrated in a metal center, but now it is
B.According to a previous design, the weight of the discus used in track competition was concentrated in a metal center, but now it is
C.Once designed with its weight concentrated in a metal center, the discus used in track competition is now
D.The discus used in track competition, once designed with its weight concentrated in a metal center, but now         
E.The discus used in track competition was once designed having its weight concentrated in a metal center and now

B* B的according to不对，according to后面必须加information source。
A时态不对，前面应该用was。C的with不对（C的with没有问题）。D缺少谓语动词。E不平行。选B。

10.(161)Deserts are inhabited with several distinct animal species, with each their own method of adapting to long periods of moisture shortage.
A.with several distinct animal species, with each their
B.with distinctly several animal species, each with its
C.by several distinct animal species, each with its
D.by several distinct animal species, having each its   
E.by several distinct animal species, that each has their

C*
be inhabited by，排除AB。
E的that each has their多了一个从句，不对。
C with表示伴随。D的having不知道是修饰什么。

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Day 17
1. C 考点比较 grammatical construction
未划线句子部分是Bartok，比较的是个人，因此排掉:
A 主语是S的tone system
B 主语是S和他的系统
D 主语是tone system， 另外D的时态has dominated，但是从句写了是postwar period这里时态错误
E 主语还是twelve-tone system主句接doing逻辑主语变成了S和他的系统统治了music of postwar period 逻辑有点不优，另外用doing从句没有主语，dominating也可以修饰Bartok 不好

2. C 考点平行
平行元素是by placing the dirty laundry... 可以接by tossing...by letting...或者省略by，tossing...letting
这道题险些被it带偏，意味tossing这块还是说的clothes，但看到了前面的strong cloth bag才惊醒梦中人
还是要读句意
应该选择C，只有C是完全平行的
AB的then没有必要，破坏平行，B的they有指代不清的趋势
D tossing 和and let不平行
E同D

3. D 考点比较 grammatical constructions
这道题比较的是简奥斯丁的影响在American literature的影响vs.在JFC小说里的影响
因此应该选择带in的选项
A 比较的是JFC的小说和影响 错误 so...as表转折 用在这里也不太对
B so...than比较型不对，in early American literature misplaced了
C 整个句子的表达awkward，more as比较结构错误，in early American literature还是misplaced
E had an influence改变句意，变成了有没有影响，但原句说的是影响大不大，没有In比较对象不对等


4. 错选B 考点grammatical construction
and后面要接完整句，接with是错误的，因此排掉A
DE and前面不是完整句，没有谓语排除
C的consider as累赘 逻辑上把has 60 square miles和consider并列，逻辑上不优

5. D 考点固定搭配 logical prediction
这里有一个固定搭配型是so...that...
A的and so then...表达有点啰嗦
B 用and连接表并列是不合理的，一个是因一个是果不可以用并列
C who后面接的do not have to rely...整个逻辑意思混乱
E and then没有必要用and的并列


6. A考点比较 grammatical construction 主谓一致
主语是striking differences，但比较对象是semantic organizaiton，因此比较型里要用that，而后面主句的动词要用have
根据这个原则排除掉BCDE
B的including表semantic orgnization包含grammar and vocabulary语义不对
C which修饰只带了those of Europe languages，后面又用了include，逻辑不正确
D as well as 表次要平行
E both and要求结构绝对的平行，in在both后面后面也要加in，没有in破坏平行


7. A 考点 平行 指代
C moderate alcohol consumption caused...语义逻辑错误排除; in a 1991 report misplaced
D IN A 1991 REPORT 错误的修饰了Linked, with主语变成了they(sales of wines)，逻辑错误且混乱
E in a 1991 report修饰了consumption? a reduced risk started them growing语义也不对
B began growing这个时态用在这里对嘛？ alcohol consumption和red wine层次不同这里不可以用同位语修饰

8. C 考点时态
by the time they reached... by其实可以作为过去完成时的标志词
这里应该是使用过去完成时
因此可以排掉A
B的reach adulthood变成了现在时态，和had been不匹配
D were attacked和reach时态错误
E who were可以省略 by the time 有misplaced的倾向


9. C 考点修饰 grammatical construction
C同位语修饰 结构比较清晰
A 后半句话it指代weight of the discus错误，前半句话如果是以前的design也该用was
B according to用在这里也有点奇怪 it指代问题同A
D 没有谓语动词
E HAVING错误 前半句话没有谓语动词

10. B 考点 grammatical construction
固定搭配 inhabited by，排除掉ab
独立主格each引领的从句在简洁性上要优于其他
having each错误
that非限定性定语从句，语义上不优

断了的弦

CCDBD AACCC
知识点：3.倒装：nowhere in xxx is sth more apparent than in xxx…。比较：nowher…than；any other places…than。D是地点状语的完全倒装结构，还原为：The influence of Jane Austin is more apparent nowhere in American literature than in the novels of James Fenimore Cooper.
8，89 percent of men and 75 percent of women born in the country had ，这句话不会有歧义吗？

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D17
1. ABDE的指代都不对等
2. 考平行，DE and前后不平行；AB的动词和placing 不平行
3. C
4. 错选C。A前后不对称；C把has 60 square miles和consider并列，逻辑上不是最合适的。consider as和consider to be都累赘
5. 本题是逻辑含义做题的典型代表，这5个句子在纯粹的语法上都是讲的通的，但是翻译成中文后，或者从句子逻辑意思的角度看，只有D选项的意思才符合逻辑。
6. semantic organization 单数，排除CDE those of；between两个东西，排除B has
7. 错选B。red wine与alcohol consumption概念不同，不能同位修饰，应该在red wine后面也补上consumption
8. 基本都是时态问题，A had reached; have been 混乱；B reach; were; had been 混乱；D were attacked; reach混乱；E.        who were可以省略；adulthood后面少了逗号，错误，独立的修饰成分必须用两个逗号隔开；把by the time插在句子中间，显得很awkward。
9. AB it指代错误；D无谓语；E design固定搭配，没有design doing的结构；having concentrated 完成时使用没必要；后半句没有谓语动词
10. AB idiom错误，inhabited by才对；(D) having现在分词短语做状语修饰谓语动词与主语deserts错误。(E) each对应复数their错误；that无法引导非限定性定从引导词；没有必要that each互成同位语，each型独立主格只需要直接跟在逗号后面即可。

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