【揽瓜阁语法打卡小分队】Day17（Practice 2开始）

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1.        C 31’’
2.        C 20’’
3.        B 1’44’’D
b. in early American literature是修饰nowhere的，这里变成了修饰整句使得逻辑错误； so…than搭配错误
3.        考点：倒装
4.        B 1’35’’
4.        consider A B：把A认为是B，中间不加as和to be，其中B为名词或形容词。
5.        D 48’’
6.        A 33’’
7.        B(D) 2’23’’A
a. and可放在插入语前，不影响逻辑—lcy19812000
7.        b. red wine与alcohol consumption概念不同，不能同位修饰，应该在red wine后面也补上 consumption；they离其所指代的slaes太远， 使得句子理解起来不清晰，awkward
8.        C 1’38’’
9.        C 2’21’’
10.        C(B) 1’11’’
10.        inhabit vt 居住于. 固定搭配：be inhabited by

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1.(152)Unlike Schoenberg's twelve-tone system that dominated the music of the postwar period, Bartók founded no school and left behind only a handful of disciples.
C
A.Schoenberg's twelve-tone system that dominated unlike不对称
B.Schoenberg and his twelve-tone system which dominated unlike不对称
C.Schoenberg, whose twelve-tone system dominated
D.the twelve-tone system of Schoenberg that has dominated   unlike不对称
E.Schoenberg and the twelve-tone system, dominating unlike不对称; dominating逻辑主语有歧义

2.(153)For centuries, people on sea voyages washed their clothes by placing the dirty laundry in a strong cloth bag, then toss it overboard, and let the ship drag the bag for hours.
C
A.then toss it overboard, and let toss和前面不平行
B.then toss them overboard, and they let 不平行
C.tossing it overboard, and letting
D.tossing them overboard, and let    and和wash并列不对   
E.tossing it overboard, and let and和wash并列不对

3.(154)There is nowhere in early American literature where the influence of Jane Austen is so apparent as the novels of James Fenimore Cooper.
D
A.There is nowhere in early American literature where the influence of Jane Austen is so apparent as  as前后内容不对称
B.In early American literature, nowhere is Jane Austin's influence so apparent than in as前后内容不对称
C.It is nowhere more apparent in early American literature that Jane Austen was an influence as in  more..as..as不连用； as前后内容不对称
D.Nowhere in early American literature is the influence of Jane Austen more apparent than in  
E.Nowhere in early American literature is it more apparent that Jane Austen had an influence than it指代？

4.(155)With surface temperatures estimated at minus 230 degrees Fahrenheit, Jupiter's moon Europa has long been considered far too cold to support life, and with 60 square miles of water thought to be frozen from top to bottom.
B错选C
A.Europa has long been considered far too cold to support life, and with and前后没有平行的东西，直接用with就可以
B.Europa has long been considered far too cold to support life, its
C.Europa has long been considered as far too cold to support life and has
D.Europa, long considered as far too cold to support life, and its     无svo
E.Europa, long considered to be far too cold to support life, and to have 无svo

5.(156)Deborah Aguiar-Velez, founder of Sistemas Corporation, has written a computer textbook in Spanish for people who speak Spanish and so then do not have to rely on translations from English.
D
A.for people who speak Spanish and so then and后面分句主语是DA，错误
B.for people who speak Spanish, and then they
C.for people speaking Spanish who 定语从句语意错误
D.so that people who speak Spanish         
E.so that people can speak Spanish and then can能够和不需要依赖英语翻译并列，语意错误

6.(157)The striking differences between the semantic organization of Native American languages and that of European languages, in both grammar and vocabulary, have led scholars to think about the degree to which differences in language may be correlated with nonlinguistic differences.
A
A.that of European languages, in both grammar and vocabulary, have
B.that of European languages, including grammar and vocabulary, has difference in固定搭配，has主谓不一致
C.those of European languages, which include grammar and vocabulary, have which指代有误
D.those of European languages, in grammar as well as vocabulary, has     has主谓不一致
E.those of European languages, both in grammar and vocabulary, has both。。and不平行；has主谓不一致

7.(158)Sales of wines declined in the late 1980s, but they began to grow again after the 1991 report that linked moderate consumption of alcohol, and particularly of red wine, with a reduced risk of heart disease
A
A.they began to grow again after the 1991 report that linked moderate consumption of alcohol, and particularly of red wine, with a reduced risk of heart disease
B.after the 1991 report that linked a reduced risk of heart disease with a moderate alcohol consumption, particularly red wine, they began growing again red wine和前面不能消费量不对应
C.in a 1991 report, moderate alcohol consumption, and particularly of red wine, which was linked with a reduced risk of heart disease, caused them to begin to grow again and不平行；which指代
D.with a reduced risk of heart disease linked in a 1991 report with moderate alcohol consumption, in particular red wine, they began growing again    in介词短语位置；with
E.a reduced risk of heart disease linked to moderate alcohol consumption in a 1991 report, and in particular red wine, started them growing again risk导致销量上涨，语意有误；and并列错误

8.(159)The first detailed study of magpie attacks in Australia indicates that by the time they had reached adulthood, 98 percent of men and 75 percent of women born in the country have been attacked by the birds.
C错选E
A.by the time they had reached adulthood, 98 percent of men and 75 percent of women born in the country have been attacked by the birds 过去完成时错误；they指代错误
B.by the time they reach adulthood, 98 percent of men and 75 percent of women, who were born in the country, had been attacked by the birds reach用一般过去时；who were累赘；they指代错误
C.by the time they reached adulthood, 98 percent of men and 75 percent of women born in the country had been attacked by the birdsthey指代错误
D.98 percent of men and 75 percent of women that were born in the country were attacked by the birds by the time they reach adulthood         指代人用who；
E.98 percent of men and 75 percent of women who were born in the country, by the time they reached adulthood had been attacked by the birds

9.(160)In a previous design, the weight of the discus used in track competition is concentrated in a metal center, but now it is lined with lead around the perimeter, thereby improving stability in flight and resulting in longer throws.
C错选E
A.In a previous design, the weight of the discus used in track competition is concentrated in a metal center, but now it is
B.According to a previous design, the weight of the discus used in track competition was concentrated in a metal center, but now it is
C.Once designed with its weight concentrated in a metal center, the discus used in track competition is now once语意
D.The discus used in track competition, once designed with its weight concentrated in a metal center, but now         
E.The discus used in track competition was once designed having its weight concentrated in a metal center and now

10.(161)Deserts are inhabited with several distinct animal species, with each their own method of adapting to long periods of moisture shortage.
C
A.with several distinct animal species, with each their each their不对
B.with distinctly several animal species, each with its distictly错误
C.by several distinct animal species, each with its
D.by several distinct animal species, having each its   having表结果，不对，逻辑主语也错了
E.by several distinct animal species, that each has their their主谓不一致

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1.C
2.C
3.D
4.C
5.D
6.A
7.A
8.C
9.E ❌ C (E错在，design固定搭配，没有design doing的结构；having concentrated 完成时使用没必要；后半句没有谓语动词，and now 应该为and now is 时态改变，因此不能直接 并列，前半句使用的是过去时态was ）
10.C

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