【揽瓜阁语法打卡小分队】Day17（Practice 2开始）

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3.(154)There isnowhere in early American literature where the influence of Jane Austen is soapparent as the novels of James Fenimore Cooper.
A.There is nowhere in early American literaturewhere the influence of Jane Austen is so apparent as
B.In early American literature, nowhere is JaneAustin's influence so apparent than in
C.It is nowhere more apparent in early American literaturethat Jane Austen was an influence as in
D.Nowhere in early American literature is the influence ofJane Austen more apparent than in  
E.Nowhere in early American literature is it moreapparent that Jane Austen had an influence than

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1.(152)Unlike Schoenberg's twelve-tone system that dominated the music of the postwar period, Bartók founded no school and left behind only a handful of disciples. C
A.Schoenberg's twelve-tone system that dominated—unlike比较对象错
B.Schoenberg and his twelve-tone system which dominated—unlike比较对象错；which只能引导非限
C.Schoenberg, whose twelve-tone system dominated
D.the twelve-tone system of Schoenberg that has dominated—unlike比较对象错
E.Schoenberg and the twelve-tone system, dominating—unlike比较对象错

2.(153)For centuries, people on sea voyages washed their clothes by placing the dirty laundry in a strong cloth bag, then toss it overboard, and let the ship drag the bag for hours. C
A.then toss it overboard, and let---placing,toss,let都是wash的动作，前三者平行
B.then toss them overboard, and they let--- them属于by后面的意群，不能指代前clothes，因此无所指；
C.tossing it overboard, and letting
D.tossing them overboard, and let
E.tossing it overboard, and let

3.(154)There is nowhere in early American literature where the influence of Jane Austen is so apparent as the novels of James Fenimore Cooper. D
在早期美国文学史上没有什么比简奥斯汀的影响更明显的。
简奥斯汀在美国文学的影响没有比James Fenimore Cooper的小说中更明显的地方。
A.There is nowhere in early American literature where the influence of Jane Austen is so apparent as----where代表in early American literature没问题；比较对象不平行：应该是where…so…as in the novels; nowhere为副词，there be句无主语
B.In early American literature, nowhere is Jane Austin's influence so apparent than in-- In early American literature变成修饰整句，应修饰nowhere；so than搭配错
C.It is nowhere more apparent in early American literature that Jane Austen was an influence as in ----In early American literature变成修饰整句，应修饰nowhere；more as搭配错
D.Nowhere in early American literature is the influence of Jane Austen more apparent than in地点状语完全倒装
E.Nowhere in early American literature is it more apparent that Jane Austen had an influence than比较对象不对等，than后缺in

4.(155)With surface temperatures estimated at minus 230 degrees Fahrenheit, Jupiter's moon Europa has long been considered far too cold to support life, and with 60 square miles of water thought to be frozen from top to bottom. B
A.Europa has long been considered far too cold to support life, and with---and前后不平行，前为句子，后为介词短语
B.Europa has long been considered far too cold to support life, its—独立主格结构，修饰整个句子，增加信息
C.Europa has long been considered as far too cold to support life and has---并列错；consider…as累赘
D.Europa, long considered as far too cold to support life, and its – and平行错，前后都不是完整句子
E.Europa, long considered to be far too cold to support life, and to have– and平行错

5.(156)Deborah Aguiar-Velez, founder of Sistemas Corporation, has written a computer textbook in Spanish for people who speak Spanish and so then do not have to rely on translations from English. D 逻辑含义做题典型
A.for people who speak Spanish and so then---逻辑意思错误
B.for people who speak Spanish, and then they---A and then B中，AB为按顺序发生的独立事物
C.for people speaking Spanish who--- speaking和who引导的定从并列修饰people，逻辑矛盾
D.so that people who speak Spanish 结果状语简洁有效
E.so that people can speak Spanish and then-- can speak Spanish改变了本就会说的意思

6.(157)The striking differences between the semantic organization of Native American languages and that of European languages, in both grammar and vocabulary, have led scholars to think about the degree to which differences in language may be correlated with nonlinguistic differences. A
A.that of European languages, in both grammar and vocabulary, have
B.that of European languages, including grammar and vocabulary, has---has主谓不一致
C.those of European languages, which include grammar and vocabulary, have—说的是differences 在两方面，which指代languages，逻辑语意错；those指代单数semantic organization错
D.those of European languages, in grammar as well as vocabulary, has ---has主谓不一致；those错；as well as有主次之分，不合适
E.those of European languages, both in grammar and vocabulary, has---has主谓不一致

7.(158)Sales of wines declined in the late 1980s, but they began to grow again after the 1991 report that linked moderate consumption of alcohol, and particularly of red wine, with a reduced risk of heart disease. C错 为A
A.they began to grow again after the 1991 report that linked moderate consumption of alcohol, and particularly of red wine, with a reduced risk of heart disease
只有A选项but前后才是平行对称的，S.V.O+介词短语做时间状语， but S.V.O.+介词短语做时间状语。如此平行的结构，应该在第一时间对A建立好感。 其次再用平行结构确认选项的排除；and particularly of red wine中and为加强语气，删去也不错
B.after the 1991 report that linked a reduced risk of heart disease with a moderate alcohol consumption, particularly red wine, they began growing again
red wine与alcohol consumption概念不同，不能同位修饰，应该在red wine后面也补上 consumption，因为“(特别是)red wine”不是“alcohol consumption”的例子。注意， 这是alcohol本身的一个例子，但不是酒精消费的一个例子；growing中的they离其指代对象sales过远
C.in a 1991 report, moderate alcohol consumption, and particularly of red wine, which was linked with a reduced risk of heart disease, caused them to begin to grow again---cause主语为consumption 正确应为report；and前后不平行
D.with a reduced risk of heart disease linked in a 1991 report with moderate alcohol consumption, in particular red wine, they began growing again     
E.a reduced risk of heart disease linked to moderate alcohol consumption in a 1991 report, and in particular red wine, started them growing again---- them

8.(159)The first detailed study of magpie attacks in Australia indicates that by the time they had reached adulthood, 98 percent of men and 75 percent of women born in the country have been attacked by the birds. C
A.by the time they had reached adulthood, 98 percent of men and 75 percent of women born in the country have been attacked by the birds---过去完成时发生时间应在前，错
B.by the time they reach adulthood, 98 percent of men and 75 percent of women, who were born in the country, had been attacked by the birds----一般现在时错
C.by the time they reached adulthood, 98 percent of men and 75 percent of women born in the country had been attacked by the birds
D.98 percent of men and 75 percent of women that were born in the country were attacked by the birds by the time they reach adulthood ----一般现在时错；that were可以省略，that指代非人类事物
E.98 percent of men and 75 percent of women who were born in the country, by the time they reached adulthood had been attacked by the birds --who were可省，adulthood前缺逗号，独立修饰成分用双逗号隔开

9.(160)In a previous design, the weight of the discus used in track competition is concentrated in a metal center, but now it is lined with lead around the perimeter, thereby improving stability in flight and resulting in longer throws. D
discus铁饼
design something to do something
be designed for somebody/something
be designed as something
be designed with sth
A.In a previous design, the weight of the discus used in track competition is concentrated in a metal center, but now it is---it指代the weight错
B.According to a previous design, the weight of the discus used in track competition was concentrated in a metal center, but now it is--- According to改变意思，原文只是陈述客观事实
according to一般要连更为具体的内容，当你说出某人或来源的时候，你可以用这个短 语来表达一些信息/观点等。通常放在句首，或者句中作插入语，根据目前的Gmat题， 不需要逻辑一致。
C.Once designed with its weight concentrated in a metal center, the discus used in track competition is now
D.The discus used in track competition, once designed with its weight concentrated in a metal center, but now –缺谓语
E.The discus used in track competition was once designed having its weight concentrated in a metal center and now

10.(161)Deserts are inhabited with several distinct animal species, with each their own method of adapting to long periods of moisture shortage. C
inhabit vt 居住于. 固定搭配：be inhabited by
e.g: The woods are inhabited by many wild animals.
A.with several distinct animal species, with each their--- each后单数代词
B.with distinctly several animal species, each with its—注意distinctly位置，修饰several错
C.by several distinct animal species, each with its—with修饰each
D.by several distinct animal species, having each its—现在分词做状语修饰谓动词
E.by several distinct animal species, that each has their---that不引导非限

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8.(159)The first detailed study of magpie attacks in Australia indicates that by the time they had reached adulthood, 98 percent of men and 75 percent of women born in the country have been attacked by the birds.
A.by the time they had reached adulthood, 98 percent of men and 75 percent of women born in the country have been attacked by the birds
B.by the time they reach adulthood, 98 percent of men and 75 percent of women, who were born in the country, had been attacked by the birds
C.by the time they reached adulthood, 98 percent of men and 75 percent of women born in the country had been attacked by the birds （correct)
D.98 percent of men and 75 percent of women that were born in the country were attacked by the birds by the time they reach adulthood         
E.98 percent of men and 75 percent of women who were born in the country, by the time they reached adulthood had been attacked by the birds

9.(160)In a previous design, the weight of the discus used in track competition is concentrated in a metal center, but now it is lined with lead around the perimeter, thereby improving stability in flight and resulting in longer throws.
A.In a previous design, the weight of the discus used in track competition is concentrated in a metal center, but now it is
B.According to a previous design, the weight of the discus used in track competition was concentrated in a metal center, but now it is
C.Once designed with its weight concentrated in a metal center, the discus used in track competition is now (correct)
D.The discus used in track competition, once designed with its weight concentrated in a metal center, but now         
E.The discus used in track competition was once designed having its weight concentrated in a metal center and now

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知识点：3.倒装：nowhere in xxx is sth more apparent than in xxx…。比较：nowher…than；any other places…than。D是地点状语的完全倒装结构，还原为：The influence of Jane Austin is more apparent nowhere in American literature than in the novels of James Fenimore Cooper.

9.选错，应选C。这句话的主语是the discus（铁饼），句子结构是：once designed with… the discus is now lined with…。AB的错误是主语变成了the weight，weight是不能lined with lead around the perimeter的。D主语对了，但是缺了谓语动词；E错在designed having，没有这个用法；另外having concentrated时态不对，不需要用完成时；And now没有谓语动词。