【揽瓜阁语法打卡小分队】Day12

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1.(209)In Scotland, the number of wild salmon have been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting, by pollution, and by various other threats to the fish’s habitat.
A.number of wild salmon have been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,
B.number of wild salmon is reduced because deep-sea and coastal netting is not controlled,
C.numbers of wild salmon has been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,
D.wild salmon’s numbers are reduced by deep-sea and coastal netting that is not controlled,（不优that is not controlled不如uncontrolled简洁）
E.wild salmon’s numbers have been reduced by uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,
答案：E
①主谓一致；②平行

2.(210)By merging its two publishing divisions, the company will increase their share of the country's $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging from obscure textbooks to mass-market paperbacks.
A.their share of the country's $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging（their无指代）
B.from 6 percent to 10 percent its share of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges（与E相比，which和market的指代相对不优）
C.to 10 percent from 6 percent in their share of the $21 billion book market in the country, a market ranging（their无指代）
D.in its share, from 6 percent to 10 percent, of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges（from 6 percent to 10 percent打断意群its share of）
E.to 10 percent from 6 percent its share of the country's $21 billion book market, which ranges
答案：E

3.(211)Whereas in mammals the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes form a random pattern.
A.Whereas in mammals the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes
B.Whereas the tiny tubes for the conveying of nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in mammals in parallel lines, birds have tubes that
C.Unlike mammals, where the tiny tubes for conveying nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, birds’ tubes
D.Unlike mammals, in whom the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, the tubes in birds
E.Unlike the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells, which in mammals are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes
答案：A
①Whereas，Unlike比较，比较对象对等

4.(212)According to a survey of graduating medical students conducted by the Association of American Medical Colleges, minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than are other graduates in planning to practice in socioeconomically deprived areas.
A.minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than are other graduates in planning to practice
B.minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than other graduates who plan on practicing
C.minority graduates are nearly four times as likely as other graduates to plan on practicing
D.it is nearly four times more likely that minority graduates rather than other graduates will plan to practice
E.it is nearly four times as likely for minority graduates than other graduates to plan to practice
答案C
①be likely to do、it is likely that②more than

5.(213)Shoppers in sporting goods stores, unlike in department stores, do very little impulse shopping, not buying a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but they leave with a basketball only
A.in department stores, do very little impulse shopping, not buying a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but they leave with a basketball only
B.in department stores, shop impulsively very little; someone who comes in for a basketball will leave with a basketball only and not also buy a pair of skis and a boomerang as well
C.those in department stores, do very little impulse shopping, do not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but leave with only a basketball
D.those in department stores, do very little impulse shopping; someone who comes in for a basketball will leave with a basketball only and not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang as well
E.department stores, shop impulsively very little; someone will not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball but will leave with only a basketball
答案：D
①unlike比较②not...but平行③Shoppers in sporting goods stores, unlike in department stores, do very little impulse shopping和not buying a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but they leave with a basketball only的句间关系

6.(214)Scholars who once thought Native American literatures were solely oral narratives recorded by missionaries or anthropologists now understand this body of work to consist of both oral literatures and the written works of Native American authors, who have been publishing since 1772.
A.Scholars who once thought Native American literatures were solely oral narratives
B.Scholars thinking of Native American literatures once solely as oral narratives, and
C.Scholars who once had thought of Native American literatures solely as oral narratives and
D.Native American literatures, which some scholars once thought were solely oral narratives
E.Native American literatures, which some scholars once, thinking they were solely oral narratives
答案A
①根据understand，主语一定是Scholars
②recorded的修饰对象是oral narratives

7.(215)A study by the Ocean Wildlife Campaign urged states to undertake a number of remedies to reverse a decline in the shark population, which includes the establishment of size limits for shark catches, closing state waters for shark fishing during pupping season, and requiring commercial fishers to have federal shark permits.
A.which includes the establishment of size limits for shark catches, closing
B.which includes establishing limits to the size of sharks that can be caught, closing
C.which include the establishment of size limits for shark catches, the closing of
D.including establishing size limits for shark catches, closing
E.including the establishing of limits to the size of sharks that are caught, the closing of
答案D
①which这里不能跳远修饰remedies②平行

8.(216)Plants are more efficient at acquiring carbon than are fungi, in the form of carbon dioxide, and converting it to energy-rich sugars.
A.Plants are more efficient at acquiring carbon than are fungi,
B.Plants are more efficient at acquiring carbon than fungi,
C.Plants are more efficient than fungi at acquiring carbon,
D.Plants, more efficient than fungi at acquiring carbon,(fragment)
E.Plants acquire carbon more efficiently than fungi,
答案：
intended meaning: plant和fungi在两件事上acquiring carbon和converting it to energy-rich sugars相比，plant更有效率
①acquiring和converting靠在一起，且平行
②in the form of carbon dioxide也要靠近carbon

9.(217)Not one of the potential investors is expected to make an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until a merger agreement is signed that includes a provision for penalties if the deal were not to be concluded.
A.is expected to make an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until a merger agreement is signed that includes a provision for penalties if the deal were
B.is expected to make an offer for buying First Interstate Bank until they sign a merger agreement including a provision for penalties if the deal was（for变成了修饰，这里用to表目的更好）
C.is expected to make an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until a merger agreement be signed by them with a provision for penalties if the deal were（be动词时态不好）
D.are expected to make an offer for buying First Interstate Bank until it signs a merger agreement with a provision for penalties included if the deal was
E.are expected to be making an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until they sign a merger agreement including a provision for penalties if the deal were
答案：A
①主谓一致，one of 用单数
②dea lnot to be concluded是一种假设，用虚拟时态

10.(218)Only seven people this century have been killed by the great white shark, the man-eater of the movies—less than those killed by bee stings.
A.movies—less than those（less不可数）
B.movies—fewer than have been
C.movies, which is less than those（less不可数）
D.movies, a number lower than the people（比较对象不对等）
E.movies, fewer than the ones（比较不平行）
答案：B

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1. E 考点平行 修饰
the number of 是单数
A number of 是复数
numbers of 的表达不正确 ->错了！ numbers of表大量的，动词永远跟复数
因此排除掉number of 用复数的A，numbers of 用单数的C
剩下的选项可以用平行和修饰排除
B前后不平行，未划线句子有by..by的结构排除
D和E之间用定语从句修饰不简洁，不优，E是更好的


2. E 考点主谓一致 修饰
句子主语是company，因此排掉用their的A和C
在BDE中，BD的which修饰到了country上，是不优的
另外：关于from..to倒用的合理性，在正确的句子里出现过，因此是可以的

3. A 考点比较
这一题可以靠比较对象来排除
B/C/D的比较对象完全错位
E的unlike结构后面只能接名词，in birds the tubes是错误的，结构不好


4. 错选A 考点比较 idiom 修饰
这道题可以靠修饰排除B(who plan on practicing修饰other graduates，错误）
另外more+adjective+rather than结构错误，排除D
E as+adjective+than也是结构错误 排除
A/C之间split在于more likely than vs. as likely as和in planning to vs. to plan on practicing
这两个点：
1. plan的用法: plan on doing somethine/plan something/plan to do something
2. be likely to do 只有这个句型是正确的用法
3. as likely as 和more likely than都是正确用法！这里不做区分
判断点归在more likely to do something,因此应该选C


5. 错选C 考点平行 grammatical construction 比较
比较对象应该是shoppers in sporting goods store和 shoppers in department stores，因此排除掉ABE的错误比较
D看到了and和as well就想排除，冗余 错误！ 这里and 和as well不属于重复，as well 修饰的是谓语动词的buy
在句子结构上do... do not... but属于是三个元素，没有and连接就变成了run-on sentence, 属于绝对的错误
因此应该选D


6. A 考点修饰 rhetorical construction
这句话后半句动词时understand，因此主语必须是一个可以发出understand的人，D/E的主语不符，排除
B和C用and连接recorded
B逗号and意思变成了scholars recorded by missionaries，语义错误且导致前半句话没有谓语
C的had thought时态没有必要用这个，表过去的过去，而这句话没有时间层次的标志语

7. D 考点平行 grammatical construction
which就近修饰了shark population排除ABC,另外C include也是主谓不一致的，就算which修饰到了a number of remedies也是单数形式，错误
E的平行结构the establishing of, the closing of和后半句话的requiring结构不平行不优
D是最好的

8. 错选A 考点比较 修饰
感觉我的比较真的是稀碎，一直错错错
先排除D，用逗号变插入语形式没有谓语动词错误
认为A的are结构没有歧义于是选了A
这里有一个重要的点是介词短语的placement，就近修饰是最优的，跳跃修饰容易有歧义
因此in the form of carbon dioxide在ABE里面错误的修饰了fungi，不由
C的结构是最优的


9. A 考点修饰 主谓一致
not one of the potential investors重点在one因此复数的谓语排除掉DE
补充读书笔记的一点：not one of = none of
Bhe Cthey无所指代
补充虚拟语气：
与现实相反，一律要用were to+动词原形

这里句子是：if the deal were not to be concluded

10. 错选E 考点idiom 比较
比较对象是seven people 因此不能用less，A/C排除掉
D的a number 和seven people不对等
E的the ones更加简洁 错误了！ the ones 没有数值的概念，无法语seven进行数值的比较
如果仔细观察还能看见B选项的have been和前面的have been平行，因此应该选B

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1.(209)In Scotland, the number of wild salmon have been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting, by pollution, and by various other threats to the fish’s habitat.
A.number of wild salmon have been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,
B.number of wild salmon is reduced because deep-sea and coastal netting is not controlled,
C.numbers of wild salmon has been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,
D.wild salmon’s numbers are reduced by deep-sea and coastal netting that is not controlled,  
E.wild salmon’s numbers have been reduced by uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,

E*
AC的单复数不对。B的because后面不平行。D的单复数不对，至少应该是that are，而且写得太复杂了。

2.(210)By merging its two publishing divisions, the company will increase their share of the country's $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging from obscure textbooks to mass-market paperbacks.
A.their share of the country's $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging
B.from 6 percent to 10 percent its share of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges
C.to 10 percent from 6 percent in their share of the $21 billion book market in the country, a market ranging
D.in its share, from 6 percent to 10 percent, of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges            
E.to 10 percent from 6 percent its share of the country's $21 billion book market, which ranges

E*
A不应该是 their，a market修饰也不对。
B的which距离market太远了，好像是在修饰country而非market。
C不应该加in。D不应该加in。不过更明显的错误是C不应该their，D的which不知道是在修饰market还是country。


3.(211)Whereas in mammals the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes form a random pattern.
A.Whereas in mammals the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes
B.Whereas the tiny tubes for the conveying of nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in mammals in parallel lines, birds have tubes that
C.Unlike mammals, where the tiny tubes for conveying nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, birds’ tubes
D.Unlike mammals, in whom the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, the tubes in birds      
E.Unlike the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells, which in mammals are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes

A* 比较对象合理。
B比较对象是tiny tubes和birds，不合理。
C比较对象不合理。
D比较对象不合理。
E说得太乱了。A完美。

4.(212)According to a survey of graduating medical students conducted by the Association of American Medical Colleges, minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than are other graduates in planning to practice in socioeconomically deprived areas.
A.minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than are other graduates in planning to practice
B.minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than other graduates who plan on practicing
C.minority graduates are nearly four times as likely as other graduates to plan on practicing
D.it is nearly four times more likely that minority graduates rather than other graduates will plan to practice            
E.it is nearly four times as likely for minority graduates than other graduates to plan to practice

C*
four times不可以和more than一起使用，排除ABD。其实可以一起用，不过要注意咋用。four times more likely that A will happen than that B will happen，或者A is four times more likely to happen than is B.
as和than不可以一起使用。排除E。
socioeconomically deprived areas 社会经济贫困的地区


5.(213)Shoppers in sporting goods stores, unlike in department stores, do very little impulse shopping, not buying a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but they leave with a basketball only
A.in department stores, do very little impulse shopping, not buying a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but they leave with a basketball only
B.in department stores, shop impulsively very little; someone who comes in for a basketball will leave with a basketball only and not also buy a pair of skis and a boomerang as well
C.those in department stores, do very little impulse shopping, do not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but leave with only a basketball
D.those in department stores, do very little impulse shopping; someone who comes in for a basketball will leave with a basketball only and not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang as well  
E.department stores, shop impulsively very little; someone will not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball but will leave with only a basketball

D*
unlike后面一定要加名词成分，排除AB。比较的是购物者而非商店，排除E。
C的前一个动作和后两个动作不对。选D。

6.(214)Scholars who once thought Native American literatures were solely oral narratives recorded by missionaries or anthropologists now understand this body of work to consist of both oral literatures and the written works of Native American authors, who have been publishing since 1772.
A.Scholars who once thought Native American literatures were solely oral narratives
B.Scholars thinking of Native American literatures once solely as oral narratives, and
C.Scholars who once had thought of Native American literatures solely as oral narratives and
D.Native American literatures, which some scholars once thought were solely oral narratives  
E.Native American literatures, which some scholars once, thinking they were solely oral narratives

A*
DE排除：understand应该是学者理解，而非literatures理解。
B的and不对。recorded by是在修饰narratives，C不对。选择A。



7.(215)A study by the Ocean Wildlife Campaign urged states to undertake a number of remedies to reverse a decline in the shark population, which includes the establishment of size limits for shark catches, closing state waters for shark fishing during pupping season, and requiring commercial fishers to have federal shark permits.
A.which includes the establishment of size limits for shark catches, closing
B.which includes establishing limits to the size of sharks that can be caught, closing
C.which include the establishment of size limits for shark catches, the closing of
D.including establishing size limits for shark catches, closing            
E.including the establishing of limits to the size of sharks that are caught, the closing of

D* 完美平行
ABC的which修饰shark population，不对。
E不平行。

8.(216)Plants are more efficient at acquiring carbon than are fungi, in the form of carbon dioxide, and converting it to energy-rich sugars.
A.Plants are more efficient at acquiring carbon than are fungi,
B.Plants are more efficient at acquiring carbon than fungi,
C.Plants are more efficient than fungi at acquiring carbon,
D.Plants, more efficient than fungi at acquiring carbon,      
E.Plants acquire carbon more efficiently than fungi,

C* 平行。
AB都不包括后面的converting
D没有主语
E不平行。

9.(217)Not one of the potential investors is expected to make an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until a merger agreement is signed that includes a provision for penalties if the deal were not to be concluded.
A.is expected to make an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until a merger agreement is signed that includes a provision for penalties if the deal were
B.is expected to make an offer for buying First Interstate Bank until they sign a merger agreement including a provision for penalties if the deal was
C.is expected to make an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until a merger agreement be signed by them with a provision for penalties if the deal were
D.are expected to make an offer for buying First Interstate Bank until it signs a merger agreement with a provision for penalties included if the deal was           
E.are expected to be making an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until they sign a merger agreement including a provision for penalties if the deal were

A*
not one of… 应该用is，排除DE。
BC的they和them都不知道是在指代谁。
A的if the deal were虚拟语气。

10.(218)Only seven people this century have been killed by the great white shark, the man-eater of the movies—less than those killed by bee stings.
A.movies—less than those
B.movies—fewer than have been
C.movies, which is less than those
D.movies, a number lower than the people     
E.movies, fewer than the ones

E*
形容人，应该用fewer而非less，排除AC。 D的a number离前面的seven太远了，排除。B没有说是谁have been killed？E没啥毛病。
这道题应该选择B。Ron说他99%确定我们不可以用ones指代人，以及“THE ones”意思是“其他的ones”。

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1.(209)In Scotland, the number of wild salmon have been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting, by pollution, and by various other threats to the fish’s habitat.
A.number of wild salmon have been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,
B.number of wild salmon is reduced because deep-sea and coastal netting is not controlled,
C.numbers of wild salmon has been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,
D.wild salmon’[url=]Url[/url]s numbers are reduced by deep-sea and coastal netting that is not controlled,  
E.wild salmon’s numbers have been reduced by uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,平行，排除ABC，D中is与deep-sea and coastal netting 不一致

10.(218)Only seven people this century have been killed by the great white shark, the man-eater of the movies—less than those killed by bee stings.
A.movies—less than those
B.movies—fewer than have been
修饰人用fewer, 排除AC；E 用the ones 无法进行数值比较，排除；B省略the people who;
C.movies, which is less than those
D.movies, a number lower than the people     
E.movies, fewer than the ones