【揽瓜阁语法打卡小分队】Day12

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1.(209)In Scotland, the number of wild salmon have been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting, by pollution, and by various other threats to the fish’s habitat.
A.number of wild salmon have been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,
B.number of wild salmon is reduced because deep-sea and coastal netting is not controlled,
C.numbers of wild salmon has been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,
D.wild salmon’s numbers are reduced by deep-sea and coastal netting that is not controlled,  
E.wild salmon’s numbers have been reduced by uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,

2.(210)By merging its two publishing divisions, the company will increase their share of the country's $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging from obscure textbooks to mass-market paperbacks.
A.their share of the country's $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging
B.from 6 percent to 10 percent its share of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges
C.to 10 percent from 6 percent in their share of the $21 billion book market in the country, a market ranging
D.in its share, from 6 percent to 10 percent, of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges            
E.to 10 percent from 6 percent its share of the country's $21 billion book market, which ranges

3.(211)Whereas in mammals the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes form a random pattern.
A.Whereas in mammals the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes
B.Whereas the tiny tubes for the conveying of nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in mammals in parallel lines, birds have tubes that
C.Unlike mammals, where the tiny tubes for conveying nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, birds’ tubes
D.Unlike mammals, in whom the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, the tubes in birds      
E.Unlike the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells, which in mammals are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes

4.(212)According to a survey of graduating medical students conducted by the Association of American Medical Colleges, minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than are other graduates in planning to practice in socioeconomically deprived areas.
A.minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than are other graduates in planning to practice
B.minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than other graduates who plan on practicing
C.minority graduates are nearly four times as likely as other graduates to plan on practicing
D.it is nearly four times more likely that minority graduates rather than other graduates will plan to practice            
E.it is nearly four times as likely for minority graduates than other graduates to plan to practice

5.(213)Shoppers in sporting goods stores, unlike in department stores, do very little impulse shopping, not buying a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but they leave with a basketball only
A.in department stores, do very little impulse shopping, not buying a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but they leave with a basketball only
B.in department stores, shop impulsively very little; someone who comes in for a basketball will leave with a basketball only and not also buy a pair of skis and a boomerang as well
C.those in department stores, do very little impulse shopping, do not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but leave with only a basketball
D.those in department stores, do very little impulse shopping; someone who comes in for a basketball will leave with a basketball only and not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang as well  
E.department stores, shop impulsively very little; someone will not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball but will leave with only a basketball

6.(214)Scholars who once thought Native American literatures were solely oral narratives recorded by missionaries or anthropologists now understand this body of work to consist of both oral literatures and the written works of Native American authors, who have been publishing since 1772.
A.Scholars who once thought Native American literatures were solely oral narratives
B.Scholars thinking of Native American literatures once solely as oral narratives, and
C.Scholars who once had thought of Native American literatures solely as oral narratives and
D.Native American literatures, which some scholars once thought were solely oral narratives  
E.Native American literatures, which some scholars once, thinking they were solely oral narratives

7.(215)A study by the Ocean Wildlife Campaign urged states to undertake a number of remedies to reverse a decline in the shark population, which includes the establishment of size limits for shark catches, closing state waters for shark fishing during pupping season, and requiring commercial fishers to have federal shark permits.
A.which includes the establishment of size limits for shark catches, closing
B.which includes establishing limits to the size of sharks that can be caught, closing
C.which include the establishment of size limits for shark catches, the closing of
D.including establishing size limits for shark catches, closing            
E.including the establishing of limits to the size of sharks that are caught, the closing of

8.(216)Plants are more efficient at acquiring carbon than are fungi, in the form of carbon dioxide, and converting it to energy-rich sugars.
A.Plants are more efficient at acquiring carbon than are fungi,
B.Plants are more efficient at acquiring carbon than fungi,
C.Plants are more efficient than fungi at acquiring carbon,
D.Plants, more efficient than fungi at acquiring carbon,      
E.Plants acquire carbon more efficiently than fungi,

9.(217)Not one of the potential investors is expected to make an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until a merger agreement is signed that includes a provision for penalties if the deal were not to be concluded.
A.is expected to make an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until a merger agreement is signed that includes a provision for penalties if the deal were
B.is expected to make an offer for buying First Interstate Bank until they sign a merger agreement including a provision for penalties if the deal was
C.is expected to make an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until a merger agreement be signed by them with a provision for penalties if the deal were
D.are expected to make an offer for buying First Interstate Bank until it signs a merger agreement with a provision for penalties included if the deal was
E.are expected to be making an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until they sign a merger agreement including a provision for penalties if the deal were

10.(218)Only seven people this century have been killed by the great white shark, the man-eater of the movies—less than those killed by bee stings.
A.movies—less than those
B.movies—fewer than have been
C.movies, which is less than those
D.movies, a number lower than the people     
E.movies, fewer than the ones

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1. E 平行结构by
2. E range修饰market越近越好
3. A unlike需要严格平行
4. C
5. D
6. A
7. D
8. C
9. A
10. B

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Day12
1.(209)In Scotland, the number of wild salmon have been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting, by pollution, and by various other threats to the fish’s habitat.
A.number of wild salmon have been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,
B.number of wild salmon is reduced because deep-sea and coastal netting is not controlled,
C.numbers of wild salmon has been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,
D.wild salmon’s numbers are reduced by deep-sea and coastal netting that is not controlled,  
E.wild salmon’s numbers have been reduced by uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,
E
A: The number of + 单三，A错误
B: 应该用现在完成时，B错误
C: 与___后的by by不平行，C错误；
D: 应该用现在完成时，D错误；
E: 正确
A number of 一些
Numbers of 大量
The number of …的数量

2.(210)By merging its two publishing divisions, the company will increase their share of the country's $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging from obscure textbooks to mass-market paperbacks.
A.their share of the country's $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging
B.from 6 percent to 10 percent its share of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges
C.to 10 percent from 6 percent in their share of the $21 billion book market in the country, a market ranging
D.in its share, from 6 percent to 10 percent, of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges            
E.to 10 percent from 6 percent its share of the country's $21 billion book market, which ranges
C✖  E✔
A: a market没有接着 book market，A错误；
B: which前接的是country，应该描述的是book market，B错误
C: 错选；
D:  which前接的是country，应该描述的是book market；increase in后面接名词，increase这里做了名词，D错误；
E: 正确

3.(211)Whereas in mammals the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes form a random pattern.
A.Whereas in mammals the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes
B.Whereas the tiny tubes for the conveying of nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in mammals in parallel lines, birds have tubes that
C.Unlike mammals, where the tiny tubes for conveying nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, birds’ tubes
D.Unlike mammals, in whom the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, the tubes in birds      
E.Unlike the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells, which in mammals are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes
A
A: 正确
B: tiny tubes和birds平行了，B错误；

C: mammals和tubes平行了，C错误；the tiny tubes for the conveying of nutrients to bone cells表达不清晰同B
D:  mammals和tubes平行了，D错误；
E: which修饰了bone cells，应该要修饰tubes，E错误；

4.(212)According to a survey of graduating medical students conducted by the Association of American Medical Colleges, minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than are other graduates in planning to practice in socioeconomically deprived areas.
A.minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than are other graduates in planning to practice
B.minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than other graduates who plan on practicing
C.minority graduates are nearly four times as likely as other graduates to plan on practicing
D.it is nearly four times more likely that minority graduates rather than other graduates will plan to practice            
E.it is nearly four times as likely for minority graduates than other graduates to plan to practice
C
句意：少数族裔毕业生打算去社会经济不发达地区实践的可能性是其他毕业生的4倍
A: A错误；
B: 缺少谓语动词，B错误
C: 正确
D: rather than用法错误，D错误；
E: 应该是as likely as，E错误

5.(213)Shoppers in sporting goods stores, unlike in department stores, do very little impulse shopping, not buying a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but they leave with a basketball only
A.in department stores, do very little impulse shopping, not buying a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but they leave with a basketball only
B.in department stores, shop impulsively very little; someone who comes in for a basketball will leave with a basketball only and not also buy a pair of skis and a boomerang as well
C.those in department stores, do very little impulse shopping, do not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but leave with only a basketball
D.those in department stores, do very little impulse shopping; someone who comes in for a basketball will leave with a basketball only and not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang as well  
E.department stores, shop impulsively very little; someone will not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball but will leave with only a basketball
D
句意是：在运动商店购物的人更少进行冲动消费，不像在百货商场购物的人；当他们进入商店买一个篮球的时候，不会买一组滑雪板和回力标，而是只拿着一个篮球离开
A: unlike比较的对象是百货商场里购物的人，是2个比较对象；not buying和but they leave不平行，A错误；
B: unlike比较的对象是百货商场里购物的人，是2个比较对象；not also错误，B错误；
C: do, do, but leave，结构不对，C错误；
D: D正确
E: unlike比较的对象是百货商场里购物的人，是2个比较对象，E错误；

6.(214)Scholars who once thought Native American literatures were solely oral narratives recorded by missionaries or anthropologists now understand this body of work to consist of both oral literatures and the written works of Native American authors, who have been publishing since 1772.
A.Scholars who once thought Native American literatures were solely oral narratives
B.Scholars thinking of Native American literatures once solely as oral narratives, and
C.Scholars who once had thought of Native American literatures solely as oral narratives and
D.Native American literatures, which some scholars once thought were solely oral narratives  
E.Native American literatures, which some scholars once, thinking they were solely oral narratives
A
A: 正确
B: 前半句没有谓语，and recorded by错误，B错误；
C: 主句now understand是一般现在时，从句应该用过去时，C错误；
D: 谓语动词是understand，主语不能是literature，D错误
E: 谓语动词是understand，主语不能是literature，D错误；

7.(215)A study by the Ocean Wildlife Campaign urged states to undertake a number of remedies to reverse a decline in the shark population, which includes the establishment of size limits for shark catches, closing state waters for shark fishing during pupping season, and requiring commercial fishers to have federal shark permits.
A.which includes the establishment of size limits for shark catches, closing
B.which includes establishing limits to the size of sharks that can be caught, closing
C.which include the establishment of size limits for shark catches, the closing of
D.including establishing size limits for shark catches, closing            
E.including the establishing of limits to the size of sharks that are caught, the closing of
D
A: which remedies，用inlcude；划线句子应与____句子后平行，应为动名词结构，A错误；
B:  which remedies，用inlcude，B错误；
C: 划线句子应与____句子后平行，应为动名词结构，C错误；
D: 正确
E: 划线句子应与____句子后平行，应为动名词结构，E错误

8.(216)Plants are more efficient at acquiring carbon than are fungi, in the form of carbon dioxide, and converting it to energy-rich sugars.
A.Plants are more efficient at acquiring carbon than are fungi,
B.Plants are more efficient at acquiring carbon than fungi,
C.Plants are more efficient than fungi at acquiring carbon,
D.Plants, more efficient than fungi at acquiring carbon,      
E.Plants acquire carbon more efficiently than fungi,
B✖  C✔
句意：植物获取碳，以二氧化碳的形式，并把它转化为富含能量的糖比真菌更有效率
A: 有歧义，可能理解为植物获取碳比获取真菌更有效率，A错误；
B: 有歧义，可能理解为植物获取碳比获取真菌更有效率，B错误；
C: 正确；in the form of carbon dioxide修饰carbon
D: 没有谓语动词，D错误
E: acquire, 和and converting不平行，E错误；

9.(217)Not one of the potential investors is expected to make an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until a merger agreement is signed that includes a provision for penalties if the deal were not to be concluded.
A.is expected to make an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until a merger agreement is signed that includes a provision for penalties if the deal were
B.is expected to make an offer for buying First Interstate Bank until they sign a merger agreement including a provision for penalties if the deal was
C.is expected to make an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until a merger agreement be signed by them with a provision for penalties if the deal were
D.are expected to make an offer for buying First Interstate Bank until it signs a merger agreement with a provision for penalties included if the deal was           
E.are expected to be making an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until they sign a merger agreement including a provision for penalties if the deal were
句意：没有一个投资者被期望去买FIB直到FIB签署了一个并购合同，并购合同包括如果交易没有完成就有处罚的条款
B✖   A✔
A: A正确；
B: they指代不明，one of the investors也不应该用they；was是过去时，使用错误，这里要用虚拟语气were，B错误；
C: them指代不明，C错误；
D: are错误，one of the investors应该用单三；it指代不明；was是过去时，使用错误，这里要用虚拟语气were，D错误；
E: are错误，one of the investors应该用单三；to be making冗余；they指代不明，E错误

10.(218)Only seven people this century have been killed by the great white shark, the man-eater of the movies—less than those killed by bee stings.
A.movies—less than those
B.movies—fewer than have been
C.movies, which is less than those
D.movies, a number lower than the people     
E.movies, fewer than the ones
B
句意：在这个世纪只有7个人被大白鲨杀死，（大白鲨是电影中的食人动物），比被蜜蜂蛰死的人少
A: less修饰不可数名词，people是复数概念，A错误；
B: 正确，have been也和前面平行；
C: which修饰movies，less修饰不可数名词，C错误；
D: a number和people不平行，D错误；
E: 感觉the ones不对，但不知道哪里错误，E错误；

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2. E（错选A）
AC its share错误！company，如同之前做的白宫，都要用单数it指代！
BD which用错
E把to颠倒到from前面也不能说错，选项是比较出来的

4. C（错选E）
记住！！four times as likely as…和four times more likely than…都是可以的
首先根据more likely to排ABD，然后E是as likely for…不对，排除

5. D（错选C）
do very little impules shopping和do not buy a pair of skis一个是概括，一个是细化，功能不同无法平行，而且but不能连接三个并列成分！！！！，不像and一样有A, B, and C的结构，只能连接两个，所以即便不考虑逻辑上的层次，do not buy之前也要加上and

10. B（错选A）
首先人是可数的，用fewer而不是less，排AC；D这个modifier不对，排；E，the ones没有数值概念，且killed和前面have been killed不平行
当时看到A就觉得than后面一定要加个those，但其实than前后比较的是两种人的死因，成分，没有名词跟在than后面结构也平行

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