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Day9
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1.(193)New equipment and other improvements reduced the amount of time—from eleven hours in 1982 to six in 1988—needed by workers so that they could produce a ton of steel.
D
A.needed by workers so that they could produce(主语清晰 主动比被动好)
B.needed when workers are producing(当workers在producing时时间减少?)
C.workers need in producing (感觉现在时过去时好像都可以 in producing不好)
D.workers needed to produce
E.workers need for their producing of(名词没有动词好 producing)
2.(194)Whereas the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed and cannot be retracted from the skin, because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used again.
E
A.because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used (it 指代不清)
B.the comparative smoothness of the yellow jacket’s stinger allows them to pull it out and then can therefore use it (them指代)
C.the yellow jacket’s stinger is comparatively smooth, and can therefore be pulled out and used(and前的逗号没必要 但是这句话好像很对..)
D.in comparison, the yellow jacket’s stinger is smooth, and thus able to be pulled out and used(and前的逗号没必要)
E.in comparison, the yellow jacket has a smooth stinger, thus allowing it to be pulled out and used
3.(195)Like the grassy fields and old pastures that the upland sandpiper needs for feeding and nesting when it returns in May after wintering in the Argentine Pampas, the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in farming practices.
B
A.the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in(比较不对 前面是field 后面是sandpipers vanishing)
B.the bird itself is vanishing in the northeastern United States as a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in
C.that the birds themselves are vanishing in the northeastern United States is due to residential and industrial development and changes to(名词和从句没法比较 后面的平行不清晰 changes in somewhere)
D.in the northeastern United States, sandpipers’ vanishing is due to residential and industrial development and to changes in (due to 能直接带to吗)(比较前加介词短语有点掐断了比较)
E.in the northeastern United States, the sandpipers’ vanishing, a result of residential and industrial development and changing(比较前加介词短语有点掐断了比较)(没有主句)
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