【揽瓜阁语法打卡小分队】Day9

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1.        D 57’’
a.         逻辑：time needed by workers 错误，工人”做什么”需要的时间没有写明
b.        前后时态不一；when 扭曲了句子原本要表达的意思，成了时间状语表示特定时间下才 need
c.        时态；need sth. in doing 搭配错
d.        Correct
e.        时态；their producing of冗余

2.        C 1’31’’
a.        Because、therefore冗余；cannot和be able to 不呼应
b.        为平行结构应以yellow jacket’s stinger为主语；them指代不明
c.        Correct
d.        In comparison和whereas语义重复
e.        同bd

3.        B 1’28’’
a.        Sandpipers和后面is不一致
b.        Correct
c.        不对称
d.        不对称
e.        主句成分缺失

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1.D 选项C need与主句时态不一致；need sth. in doing 搭配错误
2.C 本题技巧：形合意合
DE In comparison 和whereas 语义重复（关键错误）
前面未划线是heavily、cannot，后面用comparatively、cannot最好
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1.（193）New equipment and other improvements reduced the amount of time—from eleven hours in 1982 to six in 1988—needed by workers so that they could produce a ton of steel.
选D错选B
A.needed by workers so that they could produce 奇怪的因果关系
B.needed when workers are producing  when 扭曲了句子原本要表达的意思，成了时间状语表示特定时间下才 need；时态和主句不一致
C.workers need in producing 定语从句省略了that，时态要与主句保持一致，应该是needed；need in doing❌
D.workers needed to produce     定语从句省略了that  
E.workers need for their producing of for their多余；时态不一致

2.（194）Whereas the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed and cannot be retracted from the skin, because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used again.
选C
A.because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used 主句和whereas引导从句之间逻辑关系错误；be able to be done❌；it指代错误，应该是yellow jacket
B.the comparative smoothness of the yellow jacket’s stinger allows them to pull it out and then can therefore use it 不对称；smoothness用词复杂，adj优于n；them无指代；use逻辑主语错误
C.the yellow jacket’s stinger is comparatively smooth, and can therefore be pulled out and used
D.in comparison, the yellow jacket’s stinger is smooth, and thus able to be pulled out and used in comparison重复；用can更好，对称
E.in comparison, the yellow jacket has a smooth stinger, thus allowing it to be pulled out and used in comparison重复；不对称

3.（195）Like the grassy fields and old pastures that the upland sandpiper needs for feeding and nesting when it returns in May after wintering in the Argentine Pampas, the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in farming practices.
选B
A.the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in sanpiper不是结果；主谓不一致is
B.the bird itself is vanishing in the northeastern United States as a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in
C.that the birds themselves are vanishing in the northeastern United States is due to residential and industrial development and changes to 没有主句，不对等
D.in the northeastern United States, sandpipers’ vanishing is due to residential and industrial development and to changes in    不平行 ；由 于 like/unlike的比较相对严格，所以比较对象应尽可能接近，所以把in the northeastern United States放在中间很awkward
E.in the northeastern United States, the sandpipers’ vanishing, a result of residential and industrial development and changing 不平行，缺少svo

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