【揽瓜阁语法打卡小分队】Day9

Ak777

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第三题错了  pasture记成名词形式的放牧了，没找到合适的对比，应该是草地和牧场都在消失，跟赖其生存的鸟一样

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Day 9 打卡
1.（193）New equipment and other improvements reduced the amount of time—from eleven hours in 1982 to six in 1988—needed by workers so that they could produce a ton of steel.
A.needed by workers so that they could produce【so that因果关系不是很直接】
B.needed when workers are producing【主语变成了状语；而且现在进行时不正确】
C.workers need in producing【现在时不优；in producing不如不定式好】【need sth. for sth/ need sth to do】
D.workers needed to produce【正确】         
E.workers need for their producing of【their多余；现在时不好；for producing不如不定式好】

2.（194）Whereas the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed and cannot be retracted from the skin, because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used again.
A.because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used【therefore多余】【be able to be done错误；[size=14.7333px]whereas表示对比，但前后分句逻辑上无法形成对比】
B.the comparative smoothness of the yellow jacket’s stinger allows them to pull it out and then can therefore use it【them没有指代】【use的动作发出者为smoothness错误】
C.the yellow jacket’s stinger is comparatively smooth, and can therefore be pulled out and used【正确】
D.in comparison, the yellow jacket’s stinger is smooth, and thus able to be pulled out and used【in comparison多余】
E.in comparison, the yellow jacket has a smooth stinger, thus allowing it to be pulled out and used【in comparison多余】

3.（195）Like the grassy fields and old pastures that the upland sandpiper needs for feeding and nesting when it returns in May after wintering in the Argentine Pampas, the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in farming practices.
A.the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in【主干不对，鸟是结果】【且sandipipers与后面的is主谓不一致】
B.the bird itself is vanishing in the northeastern United States as a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in【正确】
C.that the birds themselves are vanishing in the northeastern United States is due to residential and industrial development and changes to【鸟在消失这件事和草地牧场不可比】
D.in the northeastern United States, sandpipers’ vanishing is due to residential and industrial development and to changes in【消失和草地牧场不可比】         
E.in the northeastern United States, the sandpipers’ vanishing, a result of residential and industrial development and changing【没有谓语】

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1.（193）New equipment and other improvements reduced the amount of time—from eleven hours in 1982 to six in 1988—needed by workers so that they could produce a ton of steel.
A.needed by workers so that they could produce
B.needed when workers are producing
C.workers need in producing
D.workers needed to produce         
E.workers need for their producing of
D：their producing错，排E；BC时态错，排；so that有无：行动+so that+ 目的，time不是行动，排
2.（194）Whereas the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed and cannot be retracted from the skin, because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used again.
A.because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used
B.the comparative smoothness of the yellow jacket’s stinger allows them to pull it out and then can therefore use it
C.the yellow jacket’s stinger is comparatively smooth, and can therefore be pulled out and used
D.in comparison, the yellow jacket’s stinger is smooth, and thus able to be pulled out and used
E.in comparison, the yellow jacket has a smooth stinger, thus allowing it to be pulled out and used
C：缺主句排A；比较对象错排BE；in comparison有无，重复排D
3.（195）Like the grassy fields and old pastures that the upland sandpiper needs for feeding and nesting when it returns in May after wintering in the Argentine Pampas, the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in farming practices.
A.the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in
B.the bird itself is vanishing in the northeastern United States as a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in
C.that the birds themselves are vanishing in the northeastern United States is due to residential and industrial development and changes to
D.in the northeastern United States, sandpipers’ vanishing is due to residential and industrial development and to changes in         
E.in the northeastern United States, the sandpipers’ vanishing, a result of residential and industrial development and changing
B：比较对象

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Day9
1.（193）New equipment and other improvements reduced the amount of time—from eleven hours in 1982 to six in 1988—needed by workers so that they could produce a ton of steel.
A.needed by workers so that they could produce
B.needed when workers are producing
C.workers need in producing      时态不对
D.workers needed to produce     
E.workers need for their producing of    时态+用法不对
  
2.（194）Whereas the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed and cannot be retracted from the skin, because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used again.
A.because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used        because错误
B.the comparative smoothness of the yellow jacket’s stinger allows them to pull it out and then can therefore use it       stinger allow错误
C.the yellow jacket’s stinger is comparatively smooth, and can therefore be pulled out and used         符合句意
D.in comparison, the yellow jacket’s stinger is smooth, and thus able to be pulled out and used            对比重复
E.in comparison, the yellow jacket has a smooth stinger, thus allowing it to be pulled out and used       对比重复

3.（195）Like the grassy fields and old pastures that the upland sandpiper needs for feeding and nesting when it returns in May after wintering in the Argentine Pampas, the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in farming practices.
A.the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in    ----IS A RESULT OF×
B.the bird itself is vanishing in the northeastern United States as a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in
C.that the birds themselves are vanishing in the northeastern United States is due to residential and industrial development and changes to  ---LIKED.in the northeastern United States, sandpipers’ vanishing is due to residential and industrial development and to changes in         ----LIKE
E.in the northeastern United States, the sandpipers’ vanishing, a result of residential and industrial development and changing      ----LIKE

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同意！               

秋桂红

C 选错因为没注意时态的变化
C
B

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Day9
1.（193）New equipment and other improvements reduced the amount of time—from eleven hours in 1982 to six in 1988—needed by workers so that they could produce a ton of steel. D
A.needed by workers so that they could produce
B.needed when workers are producing—时态不对
C.workers need in producing--时态不对
D.workers needed to produce         
E.workers need for their producing of时态不对，表示目的用for不优

2.（194）Whereas the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed and cannot be retracted from the skin, because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used again. C
A.because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used—because夹心修饰错
B.the comparative smoothness of the yellow jacket’s stinger allows them to pull it out and then can therefore use it—比较对象错
C.the yellow jacket’s stinger is comparatively smooth, and can therefore be pulled out and used
D.in comparison, the yellow jacket’s stinger is smooth, and thus able to be pulled out and used 有连词表示对比，in comparison多余
E.in comparison, the yellow jacket has a smooth stinger, thus allowing it to be pulled out and used –伴随状语错

3.（195）Like the grassy fields and old pastures that the upland sandpiper needs for feeding and nesting when it returns in May after wintering in the Argentine Pampas, the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in farming practices. B
A.the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in主谓不一致；核心词为sandpipers，语意不对，不是说鸟是一个结果
B.the bird itself is vanishing in the northeastern United States as a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in
C.that the birds themselves are vanishing in the northeastern United States is due to residential and industrial development and changes to句子没主语，错
D.in the northeastern United States, sandpipers’ vanishing is due to residential and industrial development and to changes in 比较对象不对等，错
E.in the northeastern United States, the sandpipers’ vanishing, a result of residential and industrial development and changing 比较对象不对等，错

SteveKim83

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ElodieZHU

同意！