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7.23 USA考的，今天收到成绩， 作文6.0 因为别的考的不好，总分253， 险过250的分数线。考前一直在CD潜水，得到不少帮助，万分感谢！！！附上我的作文模板，以表感谢， 也希望给后来的XDJM一点启发。
My model：
Today, our (school, government, people...)confronts two options ne is to do A;the other is to do B. those who prefer the former choice hold the opinion that doing A is instrumental to …;those who advocate the latter choice, on the other hand, argue that doing B is conducive to …. Personally, I prefer the latter one, and I will reason and provide concrete evidence to support my viewpoint as follows.
The first plain reason, I am presenting here, is that A is instrumental to XXX today, no issue is more important than XXX, and on no account can we ignore the importance of A. A man without..., most of us believe, is an unfortunate victim of adversary environment, deprived of a wide assortment of twentieth-century opportunities. Accordingly, so great is people's passion for..., that they are becoming more willingly to do A. For example, convinced of the paromount value of XXX, I devoted myself to doing..., and got back... in the form of .... A fairy proportion of people, however, have not done... and consequently, has not enjoyed the same level of success as I have. suppose what if all of us do...? how can we...?
In addition, behind my preference lies an equally important fact that...is conducive to YYY. YYY is one of the key word in modern life, and it is hard to find an area that cannot trace back to YYY in some way. Statistical reports from USA have demostrated that those who do A always receive far more money than /gain a higher status than /developed better than those who don't. In orde to do so, we have no alternative but to do A. take me as an example. In my hometown ...has done and has brought significant wealth to our... we should follow the example and achieve.... Morever, by using the money we earn from A, we can spend some on doing B. Only in this way can we do effectively and satisfy both needs.
Last but not least, doing A is also beneficial to some other areas. For example...
Admittedly, doing B has its undeniable merits, such as.... nevertheless, the advantages of A carry more weight than those of B. so the most striking conclusion is obvious.
To sum up, given the reasons discussed above, which sometimes intertwine to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive, we can safely and wisely reach the conclusion that … In fact, not only do I prefer to A, but also prefer to do A as soon as possible.
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