GWD-26-Q17我的一点看法

stacey1207

GWD-26-Q17

Responding to thepublic’s fascination with-and sometimes undue alarm over-possible threats fromasteroids, a scale developed by astronomers rates the likelihood that aparticular asteroid or comet may collide with Earth.

[url=]A.   a scale[/url][CH1]  developed by astronomers rates thelikelihood

that a particular asteroid or comet may

B.   ascale that astronomers have developed [CH2] rateshow

likely it is for a particular asteroid or comet to

C.  astronomershave developed a scale to rate how likely

a particular asteroid or comet will be to

D.  astronomershave developed a scale [url=]for rating[/url][CH3]  the

likelihood that a particular asteroid or comet will

E.   astronomershave developed a scale that rates the

likelihood of aparticular asteroid or comet that may.[CH4]

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[CH1]不能做主语

[CH2]That…developed罗嗦，错

[CH3]for不能表目的

[CH4]Of的使用由整体变成了从属，改变了句子结构，错

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关于D选项的错误我觉得for表目的有些不合适，但是我觉得错的地方是在that从句。因为这个从句不是定语从句，that没有在从句中可充当的成分，同时如果做同位语从句，是否也是不太合适呢？

lesliezhu

前两天做GWD，做到这题，和LZ的想法差不多，但是实在觉得不通。今天做PREP，看到这题，毫不犹豫的把大家倾向的答案写上，结果答案是D... 供大家参考。