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Werneria tourism declined for past five years, because the pollution make their national parks become less attractive than before. They find a huge mineral deposit at the national park area, so the advisor indicate that let the mining company to explore the deposit. ...... Permitting the mining of the deposit is the best way to thrive economically.

这题找三个逻辑漏洞貌似有点困难啊。。。谁有思路提供下

1 Permitting the mining of the deposit is the best way to thrive economically和the pollution make their national parks become less attractive 无因果关系

2They find a huge mineral deposit at the national park area不能充分证明tourism declined for past five years

3 调查的精确性有问题。没有时间，调查人员，怎样取证等等。

1.the mining of the deposit 不一定可行

2.the mining of the deposit 即使可行,不一定可以产生有价值的MINERAL

3.即使产生有价值的MINERAL,不一定没有他因使经济效益反而下降,比如说成本很高

1、tourism下降，为什么一定是pollution？犯了causal oversimplification的错误。

2、mining的负面效果有考虑进去了吗，可行吗？

3、错误假设mining is the best way to thrive economy，有evidence吗？maybe, thrive economy的最好的办法还是振兴tourism。tourism和mining之间权衡过了吗？也许还有其他出路呢。。。

-。-。。。。个人意见，还请作文NN帮忙。

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再加一条：there is no casual relationship between the less attractive national park and the delined tourism in the whole city.