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[分享]知音托福高分写作 如何造句part 1 p15~26

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楼主
发表于 2008-7-15 17:31:00 | 只看该作者

[分享]知音托福高分写作 如何造句part 1 p15~26

终于有机会回馈大家!!

近日阅读此书时,边将书上的英文打在计算机上(仅有英文)

目前只打了模仿对象1(于书上共十一页)

希望对大家有些帮助!!

若大家喜欢,我日后打完再放上来

 

 

模仿对象1

Computers provide entertainment and information to/ for people.

变化一:SVO

Noun:

*        the Internet

*        machines

*        modern technology

*        studying abroad

*        conveniences

*        efficiency

*        benefits

*        quality of life

*        advantages

*        shortcomings/ drawbacks

*        the bright side/ the upside

*        the negative side/ the dark side/ the down side

*        applications

*        high speed

*        fast analysis

*        precise computation

*        capacity to store huge data

*        time and effort

*        educational resources

*        a sea of information

*        advances/ advancements/ progress

*        robot

*        genetic engineering

*        the technology to clone humans

*        a panacea/ cure-all

*        a love-hate relationship

*        trouble/ problems/ hassels

*        disaster/ hazards

*        acid rain

*        pollution

*        industrial wastes

*        car emissions

*        the burning of fossil fuels
                

*        the greenhouse effect

*        global warning

*        the extinction of species

*        the destruction of ecology

*        the ecological balance

*        deforestation

*        desertification

*        garbage mountains

*        mudslides

*        life expectancy

*        penicillin

*        vaccines

*        organ transplant

*        freedoms

*        mobility

*        leisure activities
                

*        recreation

*        SUV (sports utility vehicle)

*        lifestyles

For example:

1.     The Internet provides all kinds of entertainment and information for people.

2.     Machines provide efficiency and safety for workers.

3.     Modern technology has its bright side.

4.     People have a love-hate relationship with modern technology.

5.     Machines have greatly changed our lifestyles.


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沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2008-7-15 17:37:00 | 只看该作者

Verb:

*        give
            

*        bring

*        help

*        make

*        improve

*        keep

*        build

*        serve as/ serve as a mean for

*        play an important role in
            

*        enjoy

*        own

*        have

*        are pampered with

*        are available to/ have access to

*        people will benefit from X

*        X has greatly benefited people

*        depend on/ rely on

*        resort to

*        increase

*        enhance

*        regard X as/ see X as/ view X as/ look upon X as

*        is helpful to

*        is effective in

*        produce/ yield/ generate

*        contribute to

*        lead to/ result in/ cause

*        affect

*        have negative effects on

*        take advantage of

*        make the best of/ make the most of/ make good use of

*        make good and prudent use of

*        enrich

*        expand

*        extend

*        damage

*        hurt

*        undermine

*        endanger

*        meet/ fulfill/ satisfy

For example:

1.     Computers give us access to a sea of information.

2.     Technology brings us great conveniences.

3.     Computer can improve our efficiency.

4.     Technology plays an important role in our life.

5.     Computers have greatly benefited people.

板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2008-7-15 17:37:00 | 只看该作者

变化二:主词或受词后加上介词词组

*        the advances of science and technology

*        the benefits of modern technology

*        the drawbacks of computer technology

*        an integral tool for conducting research

*        efficiency at work/ work efficiency/ working efficiency

*        the problem with modern technology

*        an environment without industrial pollution

*        people throughout the world

*        people in most modern societies

*        a new generation of students

*        the number of students with personal computers

*        a member of the town council

*        patients with respiratory illness

*        the price of milk at the local groceries

*        a popular choice for many students in modern society

*        concerns about safety

*        all passengers in either vans or trucks

For example:

1.     The advances of science and technology have significantly changed our life.

2.     The benefits of modern technology are obvious.

3.     We cannot ignore the drawbacks of computer technology.

4.     Computers have become an integral tool for conducting research.

5.     We need to understand the impact of societal forces on organizations.

变化三:受词后加上不定词结构

For example:

1.     I have a lot of work to do.

2.     There is nothing to be done.

3.     Nobody was to blame for the accident.

4.     It is a costly, complicated place to do business.

5.     It doesn’t affect its ability to compete in free markets overseas.

6.     Public transit provides us a way to move large numbers of people while consuming fewer resources.

变化四:动名词结构

For example:

1.     I don’t mind my neighbor’s making all those noises.

2.     I really appreciate having time to relax after a long day.

3.     I remember growing up in the south.

4.     I have considered going to Canada for a vacation.

5.     I was thing about moving to a warmer place.

地板
 楼主| 发表于 2008-7-15 17:38:00 | 只看该作者

变化五:原句后面加上副词子句

For example:

1.     Although technology has improved our lives, it also damages the earth.

2.     Governments should spend as much money as possible exploring outer space because the spin-offs of space exploration greatly enrich our lives.

3.     Since most people have easy access to modern telecommunications channels, the world seems to be shrinking.

4.     While some people regard modern technology as a curse, I think technology is a blessing for mankind.

5.     Whether we like it or not, computers have pervaded modern society and affected nearly every aspect of our lives.

6.     We can take a rest while riding a bus.

变化六:原句前加上其它子句

*        I think that

*        Some youngsters have the misguided belief that

*        Many people argue that

*        Studies have shown that

*        To tell the truth,

*        As a college student, I believe that

*        As I see it/ The way I see it

*        My main reason is that

*        The problem is that

*        Some experts contend that

*        Experts around the world agree that

*        Most scholars now agree that

*        It is clear that

*        One of the reason is that

*        No wonder

*        Small wonder

For example:

1.     Some people think that the automobile has caused serious problems.

2.     The problem is that we are overwhelmed by too much information.

3.     People in my country used to say, “It takes 10 years to grow a tree, but it takes 100 years to educate a man.”

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 楼主| 发表于 2008-7-15 17:38:00 | 只看该作者

变化七:原句适当位置加上副词词组

时间地点:

*        sometimes/ occasionally/ once in a while/ at times/ now and again/ every now and then/ from time to time

*        over the years

*        over the past 20 years

*        every time/ each time/
            

*        first of all/ to begin with

*        eventually/ finally

*        in the past

*        in the future

*        in today’s world

*        in modern society

*        in much of the world

*        in a country such as ours

*        in most big cities

状态:

*        above all

*        all in all/ taken together

*        as a result/ as a consequence

*        by far/ so far

*        by and large/ in general/ generally speaking/ as a general rule/ as a rule

*        in my opinion

*        in addition/ besides/ moreover/ furthermore/ in addition/ other than that/ apart from that/ aside from that/ as well as

*        such as/ like/ including

*        however/ nevertheless/ yet/ but

*        on the one hand

*        on the other hand

*        on the contrary/ in contrast/ by contrast

*        on the surface

*        on the whole/ over all

*        to conclude/ in conclusion/ in concluding/ in sum

*        under the circumstances/ under the conditions

*        so

*        in many cases

*        in most cases/ in some cases

*        as a matter of fact/ in fact

*        by doing so

*        having said so

*        for our future career

*        for the sake of

*        in order to succeed in our careers

*        for the reason/ for these reasons

*        on the basis of/ based on

*        in anger

*        in despair

*        in search of

*        in the long run

*        in terms of
            

*        under the circumstances/ in that case

*        with X

*        without X

*        with a little effort

*        without a doubt/ no doubt/ undoubtedly

*        despite the shortages of electricity

*        for all his skills/ despite his skills

*        in other word/ put another way

*        in short/ in brief/ in a nut shell/ in a word

*        in a way/ in a sense

*        thanks to

For example:

1.     By doing so, politicians can cover up their misdeeds.

2.     For this reason, scientists agree that objectivity is a practical impossibility.

3.     As a rule, I get up at 6’o clock.

4.     Modern people can enjoy many things at the touch of a button.

5.     Inside the car, we can eat, drink, listen to music and do many other things.

6.     Over the centuries of human history, technology has benefited people by increasing their production of goods and services.

7.     In order to write a paper, we had to bury ourselves in a library for several days.

8.     Thanks to science and technology, previously untreatable diseases are now treatable.

9.     You can go by bus.

10.  Let us begin by reviewing the last lesson.

11.  He made a living by selling souvenirs to the tourists.

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 楼主| 发表于 2008-7-15 17:39:00 | 只看该作者

变化八:改成被动态

For example:

1.     Our lives are filled with all kinds of machines.

2.     We are pampered with all kinds of modern gadgets (that) our ancestors never even dared dream of.

3.     Today people are better fed, clothed and housed than ever before in history.

变化九:改成问句

For example:

1.     Can students learn faster with the help of computers?

2.     Is the earth being damaged by human activity?

3.     What makes human beings live longer?

4.     Which is better - items made by hands or items made by machines?

5.     Has modern technology made our life better?

6.     Did the establishment help people stay healthy?

7.     If we are not happy with homework, why should we expect our children to be happy with homework?

8.     Think about it – if the purpose of attending class is to hear someone lecture, couldn’t you get the same thing at home out of a book or a tape, or distance learning?

变化十:主词变化为形容词子句who/ which/ that/ where/ when/ whose

For example:

1.     Those who can take advantage of computer technology will succeed in their careers.

2.     Anyone who wants to succeed in modern society must be equipped with computer skills.

变化十一:受词变化为形容词子句who/ which/ that/ where/ when/ whose

For example:

1.     There are two things (that) we must consider.

2.     There are the movies (that) they saw.

3.     This is the man (that) I was telling you about.

4.     This is one of the novels that have pleased me. (非正式用语This is one of the novels that has pleased me.)

5.     We assume that the drivers, for whom the light is red, will stop.

6.     He owns several luxury cars, the least expensive of which is worth a small fortune.

7.     The search engine Google provides us huge amounts of education resources which are usually free of charge.

8.     We can chat with our friend or strangers who live in a far-away place.

9.     A single bus can carry as many people as 50 cars which normally operate with fewer that 2 occupants.

10.  London began to charge a 5-pound congestion charge for each private car going downtown.

11.  The tool (that) I use most often in my daily life is my personal computer.

12.  Studying abroad can be an eye-opening adventure where learning extends beyond the classroom walls.

13.  I would get rear-ended by the cars following me.

14.  We are concerned about the amount of sugar added to our breakfast cereal.

15.  The Vatican clearly recognizes the damage done by the sex scandals.

16.  In a recent study conducted by the school, a majority of students said that they would be less likely to cheat with an honor code in place than without.

17.  It concludes music composed by Mozart.

18.  The majority of the money spent on education comes from taxes.

19.  The money invested in this effort will clearly be well spent.

20.  We will build a new expressway linking the outlying suburbs to the city center.

21.  This town is a top choice for anyone seeking a place for retire.

22.  The number of people choosing to live in this city has increased.

23.  His point, understood in a certain sense, provides a challenge to the old theory.

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 楼主| 发表于 2008-7-15 17:39:00 | 只看该作者

变化十二:原句前后加上名词子句

For example:

1.     This system may help us find out whether the teacher teaches well.

2.     I can’t imagine what life would be like if there were no electricity.

3.     What we need is in-depth knowledge of another culture.

4.     What we can do is to use the Internet for academic studies.

5.     Whether or not students can learn with effectiveness depends on their attitude, or on what that want from technology.

6.     The question is how to conduct education in the first place.

7.     The problem is, kids hate to sit endless exams.

变化十三:原句后用连接词或标点符号连接子句

For example:

1.     A computer can be as productive as a thousand workers, and the Internet enables us to get in touch with a great wealth of knowledge and information.

2.     The Internet allows us to read newspaper from any place in the world – and it is usually free of charge.

3.     I prefer to drive a car because it gives me important freedoms: to visit different places freely and to make trips at convenient time.
            

4.     By the time you return home, you may feel like a super hero; you can do anything.

5.     Working part-time makes a student tired physically and emotionally; moreover, his busy scheduling unquestionably takes a big bite out of family time.

变化十四:原句前后加上分词构句

For example:

1.     Trembling with fear, she opened the sinister door.

2.     Parents often do much of the homework for their children, thus undermining all efforts to promote self-reliance.

3.     Having accomplished the mission, the soldiers returned home.

4.     The sun having set, we decided to camp in the woods.

5.     Considered one of the most beautiful stones, diamond is women’s favorite jewelry.

6.     Little known in the U.S. until recently, acupuncture has become a subject of great interest.

7.     Nervous, the boy knocked on the door.

8.     Desperate, he worked all weekend calling investors.

9.     Anxious to know the result, he picked up the phone again.

10.  The worker was smoking, unaware of the danger.

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 楼主| 发表于 2008-7-15 17:41:00 | 只看该作者

Part 1  结束

我这档案不知为什么始终无法上传(说档案类型错误)

只好用贴的了

9#
发表于 2008-7-16 10:54:00 | 只看该作者

挺好的,有很多有用的短语及句式变化

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发表于 2008-7-16 13:05:00 | 只看该作者

辛苦了!!

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