[分享]知音托福高分写作 如何造句part 1 p15~26

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模仿对象1

Computers provide entertainment and information to/ for people.

变化一：SVO

Noun:

        the Internet

        machines

        modern technology

        studying abroad

        conveniences

        efficiency

        benefits

        quality of life

        advantages

        shortcomings/ drawbacks

        the bright side/ the upside

        the negative side/ the dark side/ the down side

        applications

        high speed

        fast analysis

        precise computation

        capacity to store huge data

        time and effort

        educational resources

        a sea of information

        advances/ advancements/ progress

        robot

        genetic engineering

        the technology to clone humans

        a panacea/ cure-all

        a love-hate relationship

        trouble/ problems/ hassels

        disaster/ hazards

        acid rain

        pollution

        industrial wastes

        car emissions

        the burning of fossil fuels
                

        the greenhouse effect

        global warning

        the extinction of species

        the destruction of ecology

        the ecological balance

        deforestation

        desertification

        garbage mountains

        mudslides

        life expectancy

        penicillin

        vaccines

        organ transplant

        freedoms

        mobility

        leisure activities
                

        recreation

        SUV (sports utility vehicle)

        lifestyles

For example:

1.     The Internet provides all kinds of entertainment and information for people.

2.     Machines provide efficiency and safety for workers.

3.     Modern technology has its bright side.

4.     People have a love-hate relationship with modern technology.

5.     Machines have greatly changed our lifestyles.

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Verb:

        give
            

        bring

        help

        make

        improve

        keep

        build

        serve as/ serve as a mean for

        play an important role in
            

        enjoy

        own

        have

        are pampered with

        are available to/ have access to

        people will benefit from X

        X has greatly benefited people

        depend on/ rely on

        resort to

        increase

        enhance

        regard X as/ see X as/ view X as/ look upon X as

        is helpful to

        is effective in

        produce/ yield/ generate

        contribute to

        lead to/ result in/ cause

        affect

        have negative effects on

        take advantage of

        make the best of/ make the most of/ make good use of

        make good and prudent use of

        enrich

        expand

        extend

        damage

        hurt

        undermine

        endanger

        meet/ fulfill/ satisfy

For example:

1.     Computers give us access to a sea of information.

2.     Technology brings us great conveniences.

3.     Computer can improve our efficiency.

4.     Technology plays an important role in our life.

5.     Computers have greatly benefited people.

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变化二：主词或受词后加上介词词组

        the advances of science and technology

        the benefits of modern technology

        the drawbacks of computer technology

        an integral tool for conducting research

        efficiency at work/ work efficiency/ working efficiency

        the problem with modern technology

        an environment without industrial pollution

        people throughout the world

        people in most modern societies

        a new generation of students

        the number of students with personal computers

        a member of the town council

        patients with respiratory illness

        the price of milk at the local groceries

        a popular choice for many students in modern society

        concerns about safety

        all passengers in either vans or trucks

For example:

1.     The advances of science and technology have significantly changed our life.

2.     The benefits of modern technology are obvious.

3.     We cannot ignore the drawbacks of computer technology.

4.     Computers have become an integral tool for conducting research.

5.     We need to understand the impact of societal forces on organizations.

变化三：受词后加上不定词结构

For example:

1.     I have a lot of work to do.

2.     There is nothing to be done.

3.     Nobody was to blame for the accident.

4.     It is a costly, complicated place to do business.

5.     It doesn’t affect its ability to compete in free markets overseas.

6.     Public transit provides us a way to move large numbers of people while consuming fewer resources.

变化四：动名词结构

For example:

1.     I don’t mind my neighbor’s making all those noises.

2.     I really appreciate having time to relax after a long day.

3.     I remember growing up in the south.

4.     I have considered going to Canada for a vacation.

5.     I was thing about moving to a warmer place.

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变化五：原句后面加上副词子句

For example:

1.     Although technology has improved our lives, it also damages the earth.

2.     Governments should spend as much money as possible exploring outer space because the spin-offs of space exploration greatly enrich our lives.

3.     Since most people have easy access to modern telecommunications channels, the world seems to be shrinking.

4.     While some people regard modern technology as a curse, I think technology is a blessing for mankind.

5.     Whether we like it or not, computers have pervaded modern society and affected nearly every aspect of our lives.

6.     We can take a rest while riding a bus.

变化六：原句前加上其它子句

        I think that

        Some youngsters have the misguided belief that

        Many people argue that

        Studies have shown that

        To tell the truth,

        As a college student, I believe that

        As I see it/ The way I see it

        My main reason is that

        The problem is that

        Some experts contend that

        Experts around the world agree that

        Most scholars now agree that

        It is clear that

        One of the reason is that

        No wonder

        Small wonder

For example:

1.     Some people think that the automobile has caused serious problems.

2.     The problem is that we are overwhelmed by too much information.

3.     People in my country used to say, “It takes 10 years to grow a tree, but it takes 100 years to educate a man.”

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变化七：原句适当位置加上副词词组

时间地点:

        sometimes/ occasionally/ once in a while/ at times/ now and again/ every now and then/ from time to time

        over the years

        over the past 20 years

        every time/ each time/
            

        first of all/ to begin with

        eventually/ finally

        in the past

        in the future

        in today’s world

        in modern society

        in much of the world

        in a country such as ours

        in most big cities

状态:

        above all

        all in all/ taken together

        as a result/ as a consequence

        by far/ so far

        by and large/ in general/ generally speaking/ as a general rule/ as a rule

        in my opinion

        in addition/ besides/ moreover/ furthermore/ in addition/ other than that/ apart from that/ aside from that/ as well as

        such as/ like/ including

        however/ nevertheless/ yet/ but

        on the one hand

        on the other hand

        on the contrary/ in contrast/ by contrast

        on the surface

        on the whole/ over all

        to conclude/ in conclusion/ in concluding/ in sum

        under the circumstances/ under the conditions

        so

        in many cases

        in most cases/ in some cases

        as a matter of fact/ in fact

        by doing so

        having said so

        for our future career

        for the sake of

        in order to succeed in our careers

        for the reason/ for these reasons

        on the basis of/ based on

        in anger

        in despair

        in search of

        in the long run

        in terms of
            

        under the circumstances/ in that case

        with X

        without X

        with a little effort

        without a doubt/ no doubt/ undoubtedly

        despite the shortages of electricity

        for all his skills/ despite his skills

        in other word/ put another way

        in short/ in brief/ in a nut shell/ in a word

        in a way/ in a sense

        thanks to

For example:

1.     By doing so, politicians can cover up their misdeeds.

2.     For this reason, scientists agree that objectivity is a practical impossibility.

3.     As a rule, I get up at 6’o clock.

4.     Modern people can enjoy many things at the touch of a button.

5.     Inside the car, we can eat, drink, listen to music and do many other things.

6.     Over the centuries of human history, technology has benefited people by increasing their production of goods and services.

7.     In order to write a paper, we had to bury ourselves in a library for several days.

8.     Thanks to science and technology, previously untreatable diseases are now treatable.

9.     You can go by bus.

10.  Let us begin by reviewing the last lesson.

11.  He made a living by selling souvenirs to the tourists.

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变化八：改成被动态

For example:

1.     Our lives are filled with all kinds of machines.

2.     We are pampered with all kinds of modern gadgets (that) our ancestors never even dared dream of.

3.     Today people are better fed, clothed and housed than ever before in history.

变化九：改成问句

For example:

1.     Can students learn faster with the help of computers?

2.     Is the earth being damaged by human activity?

3.     What makes human beings live longer?

4.     Which is better - items made by hands or items made by machines?

5.     Has modern technology made our life better?

6.     Did the establishment help people stay healthy?

7.     If we are not happy with homework, why should we expect our children to be happy with homework?

8.     Think about it – if the purpose of attending class is to hear someone lecture, couldn’t you get the same thing at home out of a book or a tape, or distance learning?

变化十：主词变化为形容词子句who/ which/ that/ where/ when/ whose

For example:

1.     Those who can take advantage of computer technology will succeed in their careers.

2.     Anyone who wants to succeed in modern society must be equipped with computer skills.

变化十一：受词变化为形容词子句who/ which/ that/ where/ when/ whose

For example:

1.     There are two things (that) we must consider.

2.     There are the movies (that) they saw.

3.     This is the man (that) I was telling you about.

4.     This is one of the novels that have pleased me. (非正式用语This is one of the novels that has pleased me.)

5.     We assume that the drivers, for whom the light is red, will stop.

6.     He owns several luxury cars, the least expensive of which is worth a small fortune.

7.     The search engine Google provides us huge amounts of education resources which are usually free of charge.

8.     We can chat with our friend or strangers who live in a far-away place.

9.     A single bus can carry as many people as 50 cars which normally operate with fewer that 2 occupants.

10.  London began to charge a 5-pound congestion charge for each private car going downtown.

11.  The tool (that) I use most often in my daily life is my personal computer.

12.  Studying abroad can be an eye-opening adventure where learning extends beyond the classroom walls.

13.  I would get rear-ended by the cars following me.

14.  We are concerned about the amount of sugar added to our breakfast cereal.

15.  The Vatican clearly recognizes the damage done by the sex scandals.

16.  In a recent study conducted by the school, a majority of students said that they would be less likely to cheat with an honor code in place than without.

17.  It concludes music composed by Mozart.

18.  The majority of the money spent on education comes from taxes.

19.  The money invested in this effort will clearly be well spent.

20.  We will build a new expressway linking the outlying suburbs to the city center.

21.  This town is a top choice for anyone seeking a place for retire.

22.  The number of people choosing to live in this city has increased.

23.  His point, understood in a certain sense, provides a challenge to the old theory.

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变化十二：原句前后加上名词子句

For example:

1.     This system may help us find out whether the teacher teaches well.

2.     I can’t imagine what life would be like if there were no electricity.

3.     What we need is in-depth knowledge of another culture.

4.     What we can do is to use the Internet for academic studies.

5.     Whether or not students can learn with effectiveness depends on their attitude, or on what that want from technology.

6.     The question is how to conduct education in the first place.

7.     The problem is, kids hate to sit endless exams.

变化十三：原句后用连接词或标点符号连接子句

For example:

1.     A computer can be as productive as a thousand workers, and the Internet enables us to get in touch with a great wealth of knowledge and information.

2.     The Internet allows us to read newspaper from any place in the world – and it is usually free of charge.

3.     I prefer to drive a car because it gives me important freedoms: to visit different places freely and to make trips at convenient time.
            

4.     By the time you return home, you may feel like a super hero; you can do anything.

5.     Working part-time makes a student tired physically and emotionally; moreover, his busy scheduling unquestionably takes a big bite out of family time.

变化十四：原句前后加上分词构句

For example:

1.     Trembling with fear, she opened the sinister door.

2.     Parents often do much of the homework for their children, thus undermining all efforts to promote self-reliance.

3.     Having accomplished the mission, the soldiers returned home.

4.     The sun having set, we decided to camp in the woods.

5.     Considered one of the most beautiful stones, diamond is women’s favorite jewelry.

6.     Little known in the U.S. until recently, acupuncture has become a subject of great interest.

7.     Nervous, the boy knocked on the door.

8.     Desperate, he worked all weekend calling investors.

9.     Anxious to know the result, he picked up the phone again.

10.  The worker was smoking, unaware of the danger.

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Part 1  结束

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只好用贴的了

christinawu

挺好的,有很多有用的短语及句式变化

scarlett1231

辛苦了！！