prep2中的一题，“介词+名词+V-ing”结构

葵connie

As the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed, staying where it is inserted, this results in the act of stinging causing the bee to sustain a fatal injury.


A. As the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed, staying where it is inserted, this results in the act of stinging causing
B. As the heavily barbed stinger of the honeybee stays where it is inserted, with the result that the act of stinging causes
C. The honeybee’s stinger, heavily barbed and staying where it is inserted, results in the fact that the act of stinging causes
D. The heavily barbed stinger of the honeybee stays where it is inserted, and results in the act of stinging causing
E. The honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed and stays where it is inserted, with the result that the act of stinging causes

在曼哈顿上搜了解答是这样的：

first off, the construction (preposition) + NOUN + VERBing is WRONG, unless the preposition refers directly to the NOUN. (that isn't usually the case, so, if you're in doubt, you should strike choices with this sort of construction.)

for instance:
i've never heard of bees stinging dogs
WRONG. this is not an issue of whether you've heard of bees themselves; it's an issue of whether you've heard of their stinging dogs.

...results in the act of stinging causing...
WRONG. this doesn't result in the act of stinging itself; it results in what is caused by the act of stinging.

i have a picture of my cousin playing hockey.
CORRECT. this time, the picture is actually of my cousin, so we're good.

therefore, (a) and (d) are wrong because of "...results in the act of stinging causing...".




不是很理解【名词+介词+名词+V-ing】错误的情况（上面的黑字部分）
the construction (preposition) + NOUN + VERBing is WRONG, unless the preposition refers directly to the NOUN

refers directly to the NOUN 到底是什么意思？是本质属性吗？

葵connie

发错版块了sorry，斑竹请删帖……

晓澜静荷

葵connie 发表于 2014-7-10 17:36
发错版块了sorry，斑竹请删帖……

错误的原因在于，介词后面加的【名词+动名词】从意思上来看，是个主谓短语，是不可以这么用的。

繁殖，如果ving是用来修饰名词的，作定语，那就是可以的啦！

也就是说，介词的宾语必须只是名词，不能使【名词+动名词】

不知道楼主懂没懂

有很多这样的题目，楼主可以把这样的题目收集起来统一理解。

这也是个重要考点的

Chloev

因为引起歧义了，题目意思应该是说the act of sting引起后面的结果，用ing变了sting引起了，修饰错误

葵connie

晓澜静荷 发表于 2014-7-10 18:20
错误的原因在于，介词后面加的【名词+动名词】从意思上来看，是个主谓短语，是不可以这么用的。

繁殖， ...

谢谢NN~~~么么哒

晓澜静荷

葵connie 发表于 2014-7-11 11:24
谢谢NN~~~么么哒

不客气~

葵connie

Chloev 发表于 2014-7-10 19:43
因为引起歧义了，题目意思应该是说the act of sting引起后面的结果，用ing变了sting引起了，修饰错误 ...

十分感谢！！

葵connie

晓澜静荷 发表于 2014-7-11 12:02
不客气~

再请教一下NN~~
今天看到一份解析说：,当一个代词可以指代多个对象时,它优先指代离它较近代的对象,如果就近指代会导致逻辑 意思的错误,则可以肯定该选项犯有指代不清的错误

但我记得代词一般优先指代主语啊……这句话应该怎么理解？

晓澜静荷

葵connie 发表于 2014-7-11 16:22
再请教一下NN~~
今天看到一份解析说：,当一个代词可以指代多个对象时,它优先指代离它较近代的对象,如果就 ...

额 首先，这句话我没有读通顺。但是你理解的是对的哦~特别是有并列关系的时候，代词优先认为指代主语。
代词指代歧义的问题，RON说过，最好不要用这个作为区分点，因为没有一个Hard rule。我后来做题的时候也发现，如果不考虑这个点，用别的点也是肯定能把题目做出来的~so why 为难自己呢？

葵connie

晓澜静荷 发表于 2014-7-12 18:00
额 首先，这句话我没有读通顺。但是你理解的是对的哦~特别是有并列关系的时候，代词优先认为指代主语。
...

谢谢NN~\(≧▽≦)/~啦啦啦