eleven 作文贴 么么哒 成长吧！~

yagiliang

不好意思，我的应该写不了了，因为我只有TPO 1-24的。所以我也只是大略的修改了一下你的语法，希望对你有帮助

elleven806

yagiliang 发表于 2014-6-11 11:10
hello，我是6.9和你互改综合的，我今天之内po上去和把你的改完哈，不好意思

okok
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超级无敌小鹤鹤

elleven806 发表于 2014-6-11 11:01
哈哈哈哈 企鹅 相当有帮助呀，特别是招搬句子， 每次感觉都不晓得怎么总结阅读，最后节约时间都是直接摘 ...

6.9的综合是你和别人互改呀，你再看看

elleven806

超级无敌小鹤鹤 发表于 2014-6-11 23:51
6.9的综合是你和别人互改呀，你再看看

嗯嗯 我和yagiliang互改综合  和你互改独立哒

Johnnyli

同学，
6.11
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你的作业呢？

超级无敌小鹤鹤

eleven童鞋，我是企鹅，不好意思上次跟你说作文要晚点改没想到晚那么久，还要提醒你一下的是你6.11的作业没有交啊，是不是什么事情耽误了，这种情况最好跟当天互改的小伙伴提前说一下

elleven806

6.24 综合！
Obviously, the professor totally disproves what is suggested in the reading passage that nowadays the trend in book reading has caused less literature reading. According to the Professor, the assertion of author is too absolute to get conclusion.

To start with, the author points that  a decline in literature reading is harm for people, they loss the chance to train imaginations and to improve comprehend of language. However, the professor argues that literature is not the only way to simulate intellect. People could read other books instead of literature such as history books...

What's more, according to the reading material, instead of reading, people in nowadyas are prefer to watch TV shows, listen to music, or search on Internet. The author believes those new entertainments already draw people's attention far from literature books. But, the speaker contends that becuase time is change,and culture is change, people also adapt our life ways. It not means the new nonliterature entertainment is useless for people. On contrast, the new entertianments such as the TV , musics  contribute a lot to our life.

Finally, indeed, it is may true that  many pubulishers would like to invest less in literature. However, this unfortunate phemenon because recent literature books are more and more difficult to understand for audience and normal people can not understand what writers want to express. Therefore, they lose lots of their fans.

elleven806

6.24 独立 Visiting museums is the best way to learn about a country

There are lots of ways that people could learn about a country  such as travelling to some certain rememerable cities and sites, or reading numerous different books which introduce a country by words or pictures. For my part, I believe that visting museum is the optimal way to learn about a country.

To begin with, the first advantage of museum is that everthings in museum are not abstract but easy to understand. Especially to children,it is the first choice for young child to cultivate their learning motivation. As we know, the child is always full with curiorty and want to recognize the world. However, they are not capable to reading words because they are too young. Comparing to boring picture or story telling, child could use their own eyes to learn about a city by visiting a museum. There are so many valuable events prevented in the museum. Child could try to understanding the backgroud of those authentic affairs to know more about a city.

What's more, visiting a museum is more objective to learn about a country. If people read books or wathcing TV or through other ways to learn about a country, there must exist some misunderstanding. Because like history of a country, the book or the TV shows all blend with authors' or TV editors' own opinions and comments. On contrast,visiting a museum by ourselves is much more object, there are no other voice to influence one's jugements. People could learn a country all by theirselves. There are thousand Hamlets in a thousand reader'seyes.

The last but not the least, almost every country has its own museum which exhibit numerous events about development of the city. For example, I visited Shanghai city museum in China. It so awesome. The museum devides to three parts. In the first part , it shows the history of  Shanghai. There are lot's of picture of different age of Shanghai, and mode of some specific and unique building in different time. It give me a great impression. And the second part of museume is about science techonology innovation which is created by Shanghai people. And third part is the future regulation of Shanghai. When I visited the museum, I got a direct impression of this city and want to lean more and deep.

Therefore, visiting a museum to learn about a city is not only make one feel interested but also get a well-round impression for the city.

Five_007

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Johnnyli

elleven806 发表于 2014-6-25 18:28
6.24 独立 Visiting museums is the best way to learn about a country

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