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题： Do you agree ordisagree: In modern times, parents learn more from children than children learnfrom parents.
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开头：同意这种情况在当前确实发生了，并给出两种情况。（话题引入+双方/某方观点+我的观点及过渡） With the remarkable progress of society, parentsare no longer unchallengeable power and influence to their children while children are gradually having more and more their own ideas and thoughts. This enormous change brings to the society an interesting discussion: in modern times, is it children who learn more from their parents or vice versa? Opinions are divided and personally speaking, I hold that albeit more knowledgeable, parents learn more from their kids in at least two aspects--language and Internet. My reasons and examples are given below.（88字）
中间段1：语言方面，特别是学英语方面，父母可以向孩子学。（主题句+解释+细节化展） The first aspect in which parents learnmore from their children is the language learning, for example, English learning. As is known to all, the capability of language learning is inversely proportional to the age of learners. In other words, when learning a foreign language, the younger, the better. For such a reason, children enjoy more advantages than their parents in learning English. For instance, children can memorize new words, master complex grammatical rules and pronounce correctly, while those tasks seem to be hard nuts to crack for parents whose mother language is deeply entrenched. In this sense, children certainly can be the teacher to their parents in terms of English learning. （112字）
中间段2：第二个父母可以向孩子学的地方是因特网。（主题句+解释+细节化展开） The Internet is also something that parentscan learn from their children. Ever since their birth, children have been exposed to the convenience that the computer science and the Internet bring to them so that children have much deeper understanding and affection of the Internet than that of their parents because it has become a part of theirlives. For example, they are adept in using the Internet to make new friends,to make purchase and to search for information, while their parents feel reluctant to leave the old-fashioned way of life. Thus, it should not be surprising tosee a parent turning to his kid in buying a new cellphone online. （112字）
让步段：当然，由于父母年长，阅历更丰富，所以孩子当然有很多地方需要向父母学习。比如为人处事、比如生活常识。但是社会和科技发展很快，孩子们在接受新知识方面的能力比父母强，所以父母肯定有很多地方需要向孩子学。 Admittedly, there is no denying that kidsshould always learn from their parents who have wider knowledge, more experiences and deeper insights. For instance, parents can pass on their know-hows to the irchildren in taking care of themselves or dealing with other people. However,the speed of social development always exceeds our expectation and kids are more adapt to new situations, which leads to a mounting aspects in which parents can learn from their children including English learning and the Internet. （82字）
结尾：重申观点，归纳理由/升华主题 From what has been discussed above, we can safely draw a conclusion that parents learn more from their children in modern times. Just like a proverb goes, “an old dog cannot learn new tricks”. Sometimes parents should feel free to turn to their kids for something they are good at. This way, I believe, not only improves the parent-children relationship, but also allows children to be more confident and independent. （70字）
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