blackjack的写作互改专贴

krystalgo

已经修改好，不好意思，我快要考试了，最近一直在找弄别的，改晚了，我的作文过会会上传到我的贴子里，谢谢修改~

blackjack201303

11月6号 综合写作

blackjack201303

11月8号 独立写作

blackjack201303

光棍节福利

求小伙伴狠批~~！！

carmensh

亲，之前没找到你的作文连接，就把改好的发到原来的占座贴里了~~我的作文也麻烦你啦！！！！

blackjack201303

11月12号独立写作

11月12号综合写作

reekychen

TPO 1 综合写作。第一次练习，我没怎么提passage的具体内容，这样可以吗？ 请指教！如果贴这不合适，还请指出，谢谢！

The lecture contradicts the passage's point that giving employee an option to work a 4-day week will benefit the individual companies, the country and the employees who take the option.

First, the 4-day work option can not increase company profit. The company has to hire more people to fill the workload gap of the 4-day works. The costs for hiring more people would be as below: training cost, medical and housing benefits, more office spaces and more computers. All these would increase the company cost and hence reduce company profit.

Second, the 4-day work option can not guarantee more jobs generated and benefit the country in return. Hiring is time-consuming. The company may request the 4-day worker to do overtime work in order to meet the project timeline. Moreover, some company may expect a 4-day worker to finish the 5 days work within 4-days so that there is no need to hire more employees. As a whole, no more jobs are created.

Third, the 4-day work option put the option taker in risky situation of their career. Compared to 5-day worker, the 4-day worker's work ability is reasonably weaker. Consequently the 4-day worker will probably have less promotion opportunities because the company would like to have a 5-day work manager to cover the full-time company operations.

blackjack201303

7月22号 综合写作

7月22号 独立写作

GJason

等你的作业

blackjack201303

GJason 发表于 2014-7-23 11:13
等你的作业

已在我的写作主页上和写作小分队大本营主页上更新，辛苦小伙伴啦，加油！