sherry的作文贴

sherryv

0911 独立
父母應該多陪孩子玩遊戲或體育運動，還是陪孩子做和學校學習有關的事情

Children are theapples in their parents' eye, so it is no wonder that parents always want thebest for their children. But the problem lies in what is the best for theirkids and what they can do to help their kids achieve the best. Tutoring theirchildren with their school assignments may be a wise choice, yet in my point ofview, parents should spend more time playing games and doing sports with theirchildren.
Admittedly,helping children with their homework would probably improve their performance.However, different teaching approaches between schools and home may confuse childrenon what they have learned. Specifically, teaching materials and methods attoday's schools are far more advanced and multiple than those in the past. Forexample, in order to learn the various kinds of plants, students today caneasily access to information of plants in intensive regions, ranging fromtropical Africa to extremely cold Alaska. Dozens of studying materials, such asvideo clips, scientific magazines, documentary movies and even fossils, enablestudents to board their horizons and thus learn the catagory better. On theother hand, what parents could do on the topic is rather limited. Hence it isbetter to let teachers do their job.
Moreover, byplaying games and doing sports activities together, parents are able to helptheir children relax from the heavy study load, enjoy family time and bondtogether. After a whole school day, children are already tired and exhausted. Itwould be cruel for their lean bodies to carry on extra study tasks. Not onlyshould parents relieve their children's pressure by not giving them additionalassignments, they should also teach their children how to balance work andlife. The importance of balance is rarely taught in schools, but is definitelyuseful and helpful in their children's future life. Besides, playing togetherallows the whole family to enjoy dressing up sportswear, driving to a land ofgreen grass, playing together and joking with each other during the breaks. Howenjoyable would it be!
Parents are themost intimate friends their children could have. If there is one thing parentscould do to help children become mature, helping them with homework would neverbe the first clue. In fact, teaching them a way of relaxation and theimportance of balance is more crucial in the long run. So to sum up, parentsshould spend more time playing and exercising with their children.

wanggang0411

sherryv 发表于 2013-9-9 22:54
0908综合
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改好了, 不好意思, 天天小分队, 漏了一个....多谢提醒

追梦CY

抱歉Sherry，最近事情有点多，心情也不好，所以耽误修改了。
看了你的文章后心情很好，向你学习！

sherryv

追梦CY 发表于 2013-9-12 20:16
抱歉Sherry，最近事情有点多，心情也不好，所以耽误修改了。
看了你的文章后心情很好，向你学习！ ...

多谢！感觉你的文章也写得很好耶~ 我后天就考试了，希望各种加油吧！每次看到你的鼓励我也心情很好

追梦CY

sherryv 发表于 2013-9-12 21:16
多谢！感觉你的文章也写得很好耶~ 我后天就考试了，希望各种加油吧！每次看到你的鼓励我也心情很好 ...

Sherry加油！希望我考前能够听到你W30的好消息哦，其他part也要更加给力，110+好不啦~~~ (o^^)oo(^^o)

sherryv

0916 独立
Agree/disagree: The purpose of television should be all educative, not entertaining.
In this media-intensive age, dozens of magazines and newspapers and thousands of radios and channels resound differing opinions, ranging from politician scandals to movie star gossips, from an assortment of talent shows to intelligence competition. With such multiple entertaining contents available, audience is confused about what to read and watch. Some people stand out and say "Media programs, especially television ones, should only be educative." Even though it is true that educative programs help the audience learn knowledge and skills, yet entertaining programs still have its merits.

To begin with, from the perspective of the television broadcasters, entertaining programs are credited with its subsequent generous sponsorship. Because a majority of audience favor programs that can make people laugh and relax, entertaining programs usually own a high viewing rate. Therefore, sponsorship providers are willing to spend considerable amount of money sponsoring those programs to advertise their brands. With such money support, television broadcasters are able to beat competitors and thus improve the quality of the program to attract more audience.

Another reason, from the view of the audience, is that entertaining programs enables people to relax from their hectic schedule and ease their nerves for a second. By watching "the Big Bang Theory", people could get a glance at the life of scientists and be amused on their funny joke. By watching "The Voice of China", the audience may be pleased with the beautiful voice of the singers. However, if all the television programs are educative, they could be boring and in order to stick to watching such programs, people need to pay much attention and become even more exhausted.  

Finally, entertaining programs on television contribute to the environment of society. They convey the idea of enjoying life, telling people there always exists an entertainment gene in human beings. In a world filled with money and power, such programs somehow bond people together with the same interest. Moreover, they become the hot topic when colleagues, friends and families gather together, making communication more smoothly.

In conclusion, television programs do not necessarily need to be all educative, since entertaining programs serve a lot in today's society.

kellyzhou0000

In this media-intensive age, dozens of magazines and newspapers and thousands of radios and channels resound differing opinions, ranging from politician scandals to movie star gossips, from an assortment of talent shows to intelligence competition. With such multiple entertaining contents available, audience is confused about what to read and watch. Some people stand out and say "Media programs, especially television ones, should only be educative." Even though it is true that educative programs help the audience learn knowledge and skills, yet entertaining programs still have its merits.（赞这句话！~学习一下，我写不出来...）

To begin with, from the perspective of the television broadcasters, entertaining programs are credited with its subsequent generous sponsorship. Because a majority of audience favor programs that can make people laugh and relax, entertaining programs usually own a high viewing rate. Therefore, sponsorship providers are willing to spend considerable amount of money sponsoring those programs to advertise their brands. With such money support, television broadcasters are able to beat competitors and thus improve the quality of the program to attract more audience（用thus连接 但是beat competitors 和 improve the quality 没有因果逻辑联系）.

Another reason, from the view of the audience, is that entertaining programs enables people to relax from their hectic schedule and ease their nerves（nervous？） for a second. By watching "the Big Bang Theory", people could get（have？） a glance at the life of scientists and be amused on their funny joke. By watching "The Voice of China", the audience may be pleased with the beautiful voice of the singers. However, if all the television programs are educative, they could be boring and in order to stick to watching such programs, people need to pay much attention and become even more exhausted.  

Finally, entertaining programs on television contribute to the （需不需要加个形容词？）environment of society. They convey the idea of enjoying life, telling people there always exists an entertainment gene in human beings. In a world filled with money and power, such programs somehow bond people together with the same interest. Moreover, they（个人认为这里不用代词代替，直接说entertaining programs） become the hot topic when colleagues, friends and families gather together, making communication more smoothly.

In conclusion, television programs do not necessarily need to be all educative, since entertaining programs serve a lot in today's society.

文章的有的句子很精彩，用词也不错~某些地方需要主意一下逻辑~还有个人觉得第三段需要点事例支撑吧~
向楼主学习精彩句子~

sherryv

kellyzhou0000 发表于 2013-9-17 19:28
In this media-intensive age, dozens of magazines and newspapers and thousands of radios and channels ...

谢谢kelly的建议，都很中肯呢。

PS:第三段是最后还剩5分钟写的，囧 = =，我的写作速度略慢呢，哈哈。