M酱的作文帖 {8.27已更新} 让砖块来的更猛烈些！！

vincytao

我来找你要作文~~作文
19号的哟

Mint静默

xiaxiaya 发表于 2013-8-19 23:47
。。。郁闷。。不让宣传竞争对手。。。就是share with u 啦~

今天的任务完成，碎觉去了~ ...

好吧~下次去看看
恩恩，我开始练口语了0.0闪~~

Mint静默

vincytao 发表于 2013-8-19 23:51
我来找你要作文~~作文
19号的哟

......我一般是第二天白天写，不好意思啊~~明天给你行不

vincytao

Mint静默 发表于 2013-8-19 23:52
......我一般是第二天白天写，不好意思啊~~明天给你行不

嗯嗯，好的，我就怕明天我耽误了。所以先看看你写好没有，没事啦。加油！

Mint静默

vincytao 发表于 2013-8-19 23:54
嗯嗯，好的，我就怕明天我耽误了。所以先看看你写好没有，没事啦。加油！ ...

恩恩~我写好在你帖子下留言

vincytao

Mint静默 发表于 2013-8-19 23:57
恩恩~我写好在你帖子下留言

ok
go to bed~

Mint静默

vincytao 发表于 2013-8-19 23:58
ok
go to bed~

8.19独立
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In order to succeed, you should be more like others than be different from everyone else.

[388 words] 我的作文什么时候才能突破400...55555555555
There is an adage of Harvard University that says, “Study when others are sleeping,” the implication being that difference makes you more excellent. I totally agree with the statement.

Admittedly, being like others brings us sense of belonging, and we usually tend to make friends with those who have something in common. A broad interpersonal relationship will definitely contribute to your success. However, suppose you are the chief executive officer of a company, it is no surprise that you will focus on the niche market rather than the highly-sought-after market. Take Jobs as an example. In the first few years after he became the CFO of Apple Co., he made great efforts to simplify the variety of productions. Unlike other companies, Apple Co. focused on developing specific kinds of products, such as iPod, iPhone etc. Also, those products afford consumers better user experience than those of competitors, which attracts customers a lot. Such differences make Apple Co. gain huge success. The same case can be also applied to countries. China is well known for its core competence: cheap labor and raw material. So it is not hard to imagine that Chinese production industries are very competitive in the international market.

Most of us are ordinary people, who have yearning for rich lives without endeavor. However, successful people are always the 20 percent. To be success, we should overcome deep-rooted bad characters and abandon such sort of thoughts, although it is difficult to be not ordinary. Kobe, the famous basketball player in NBA, is the idol of many people. At an interview, a journalist asked him the reason why he was so successful. He said that he knew what Los Angles looked like every day at four o’clock a.m. Not many people are able to get up so early every morning.

For centuries, people have evolved from the same genes. But it does not mean that we should be more like others than different form everyone else in order to succeed. A recent research has showed that successful people usually have some invaluable virtues that are different from others, such as tenacity and altruistic. These invaluable virtues contribute greatly to success.

For those reasons discussed above, we can safely conclude that, to succeed, we should be different from everyone else rather than be like to others.

Mint静默

TPO13 综合写作
[267 words]
The speaker argues that the negative consequences brought by private collectors have been exaggerated in the reading passage. The benefits of private trades outweigh those negative consequences.

First of all, the speaker points out that the public will be more exposed to fossils because fossils will be sold in the public auctions. Some institutions such as schools can routinely be able to purchase fossils from private collectors and exhibit them to the public. In contrast, the reading passage claims that it is harder for public to see fossils. So, the speaker totally disagrees with the view made in the reading.

In addition, the speaker argues that those fossils must pass through the hands of scientists first, although they will ultimately be sent to private collectors. Because private collectors have to employ professional people to make scientific identifications on fossils before sell them. Further, scientists are the only appropriate people to do those detailed examinations and tests. This is in direct contradiction with the reading passage that scientists are likely to lose access to some of the most important fossils.

Last but not least, the speaker raises the argument that it is better to discover more fossils than to document all the fossils. Whatever damage commercial fossils collectors have made to fossils, they have made great contributions to discoveries of many fossils. We should note that there are not so many fossils underground. So it is hard to uncover new ones for scientists. This point disagrees with the statement demonstrated in the passage that commercial fossil collectors often destroy valuable scientific evidence associated with the fossils they unearth.

vincytao

可能改的不好，见谅

我忘了。。。
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lyslj001

M酱姐姐是在规定时间里面完成的吗？ 这篇写的还是很不错的哟！学习之~