SC 这里是RON 讲如何review SC
http://www.beatthegmat.com/retaking-gmat-need-expert-advise-t109154.html#464164v
SENTENCE CORRECTION:读正确句子
* insert the correct answer choice into the sentence (thereby creating a totally correct sentence).
* take a look at EVERY modifier in the sentence. make sure that you can explain what EVERY modifier modifies.
* take a look at EVERY verb in the sentence. justify to yourself (a) the tense in which the verb appears, and (b) the subject of the verb.
* if there is any parallelism anywhere in the sentence, point it out.
etc.
you should do these things both inside and outside the underline. since under half of the sentence is usually underlined, these kinds of exercises should essentially more than double your learning.
今天我在prep07里看到了三个句子,都是我一下子看不出来结构的,在这里分享一下
1 In her later poems, Phyllis Wheatley's blending of solar imagery, Judeo Christian thought and figures, and images borrowed from ancient classicism suggests her range and depth of influences, not the least of which is her African heritage. 22 Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe, whose repertory, views on musical collaboration, and vocal style influenced generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from his own. 33 While they remove carbon dioxide from the air, conserve soil and water, and house thousands of species, forests also supply potentially valuable pharmaceuticals and, as sources of building material and firewood, provide employment for millions worldwide.
以上三个句子我用黄色记号标出来了主谓,和从句里的主谓,找到了主干句子就没有那么复杂了。我发现这三个句子有一个共性都有parallelism,主语谓语中间隔得远,插入语爱作怪,看到这些仿佛gmat要考我们什么好像都原形毕露了,这三个点也正是我们读题要注意抓G小尾巴的地方。
比如说第一个句子,中间的那一大串都是并列关系modify 主语的,真正的主语是PW's b. 并列,主谓结构的完整性,主谓的单复数一致问题都有可能是出题的对象。
SC .
这是一道我错的CR 题,分享一下
Tiger sharks are common in the waters surrounding Tenare Island. Usually tiger sharks feed on smaller sharks, but sometimes they have attacked tourists swimming and surfing at Tenare’s beaches. This has hurt Tenare’s tourism industry, which is second only to its fishing industry in annual revenues. In order to help the economy, therefore, the mayor of the island has proposed an ongoing program to kill any tiger sharks within a mile of the beaches. Which of the following, if true, most strongly calls into question the likelihood that implementation of the mayor’s proposal will have the desired consequences?
(A) Even if not all the tiger sharks that come close to the beaches are killed, the existence of the program would reassure tourists. (B) Business owners who depend on tourism are willing to pay most of the cost of implementing the program. (C) Tourists come to Tenare Island for its beaches, even though the island features a number of other tourist attractions. (D) The small sharks on which tiger sharks prey feed on fish that are commercially important to the island’s fisheries. (E) Not all tourists who come to Tenare Island enjoy swimming or surfing. 我错选了E, 我看完题目时,我的脑里先rephrase了一下可能的答案。我想既然题目中结论是,杀了这些吃游客的鲨鱼就有助于经济发展。中间的link是海滩旅游是经济发展的重要一份。我既然要削弱,那就要么是杀鲨鱼不可行,要么不会助于经济反而有害.>>游客不增多,反而减少,于是我 就猜想,会不会游客就喜欢看鲨鱼,杀了反而不来了。于是我在找选项时,很失望的发现,我没有我想象中的选项,觉得都不像是答案。只有C和E 提到了游客。但我没有看出C 有什么关系。 E 倒和我的YY 有点撞上,游客来不是为了swimming and surfing莫非就是来看鲨鱼的?或者他们不swiming and surfing那也不会被鲨鱼吃。嗯。。越想越有道理,结果就选了E。
正确答案是D。 当我看到时吃了一惊,好像都对这个答案没什么印象,没有想到吃小鲨鱼这个细节也能做文章。让我们再回顾一下题目, which is feed on fish that are commercially important to the island’s fisheries.its fishing industry in annual revenues 其实不是一句废话。 这句话和D 答案的 feed on fish that are commercially important to the island’s fisheries.简直是遥相呼应。 我看到了结论是要促进经济发展,但是在我心里却实际上把这个economy 给narrow down to beach tourism industry, 完全忽视了这个fishing indusrty- #1 。 另一个原因 我对second only to 这句话就没有很好的理解清意思,当看不懂一个句子时,很容易就想当然认为不重要,以至于当D答案中fisheries出现时,我也没有看出它殷切的暗示来。 事实上E 选项也是一个无关选项,in hindsight, Not all tourists ....只能说明是部分人怎么样,这部分人是多少也不知道,无法影响大局,况且就算只有一个人游泳,也有责任确保游客的安全。既然没有effect,对于strengthen, weaken题就是无关。
总结:1. 在扫描答案选项时,如果没有看到心仪的答案,一定要虚心回原文,审查一遍,我是不是漏掉什么,有时这一步效果做不到是因为自己心里已经有个先入为主的设想,当发现没有答案时,要学会先放下心里的那个固有想法,虚心地再听一听原文先生是怎么说的
2. 理智的判断无关选项,不可以用自己的逻辑去挠补,填充LINK。 忠实原文,说什么就是什么,不可以擅自扩大缩小其说的范围。
CRITICAL REASONING:RON 的造句法
http://www.beatthegmat.com/retaking-gmat-need-expert-advise-t109154.html#464164v
try to make your own analogies for the problems. in other words, try to create novel situations that use similar logic, but have completely different topic material.
for instance, consider critical reasoning problem 101 in the 12th edition official guide (i'm not allowed to reproduce the problem here). here's an analogy for that problem:
my sister says that she wants to date a guy who has a good job and lots of free time to spend with her. however, very few men with good jobs have much free time.
you can put these statements together to reach the conclusion that “very few men will be able to satisfy my sister's requirements” or “my sister will have a hard time finding a man”. this conclusion works in the same way as the correct answer to #101.
if you can make such analogies, then your brain is working in the right way. if you are fundamentally dependent on being handed passages by someone else, and can't create any of your own, then you have the wrong mentality
这个很好玩,大家也可以尝试一下, 我在这里也来analogy 一下:)
"My brother and his friends are very naughty. They like to make fun of guard of the school door when the guard naps. Sometimes he and his friends bully younger students in school, causing a threat which is second largest only to the threat from outside strangers' crimes to student security. In order to guarantee the security of students, school announce to not allow my brother and his friends go to school. "
A. Even if not all naughty boys will be fired, school's strong attitude will decrease the frequency of the school bully.--strenghen
B. Local law grants schools right to fire students who disobey the rules and threat the security of other students.--strengthen C. My brother and his friends keep bulling yonger students, although teachers have warn them several times.--make con justified
D. The outside strangers always take chances to come into school when the guard of the school door naps.--weaken E. Not all yonger students in school are bullied by my brother and his friends. ---no influence
You can weaken this conclusion---fire my brother> security of students, by " it's not justified to fire my brother" or " Firing my brother will worsen the security of students"
这是一个牛牛分享的经验
GMAT is all application of concepts and not a bunch of tricks: Most of us know this but I had not realized the meaning of application as late as December. However, once you realize this, it changes the way you study things. Things look different to you like you are wearing another set of glasses. For example, after understanding the various ways in which Verb tenses can be tested, I started to recognize and reason the usage while reading articles in nytimes.com. Similarly, I could reason out arguments in wsj or even tech blogs like engadget.
呵呵,我发现写这个post的过程又是另外一种学习的方式,乐在其中:)
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