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句子不多，作文练的太晚了，有点失误，最后几天一直混迹于这里的作文修改汇总那个贴，救命稻草，呵呵，建议新手可以到那里寻找句子，例子和灵感．这里从我以前练的里面摘几个： １.The tremendous improvements produced by scientific discoveries and technological advances have affected people in the world irrespective of cultural and physical boundaries ２.例子：计算机对学生的好处Next, the use of computers on education has greatly benefited the students. With the advent of computer-based tutors, the time constrain for studying has vanished. Due to such advantages students could take a class when he or she want to for it is not likely for everyone that one can be ready and willing to grasp for eight hours daily. In addition, because a computer is nonjudgmental, the learner doses not have to be afraid of humiliation when making errors. For instance, because the computer can repeat information over and over, the user could ask for many repetitions of a lesson without fearing a judgmental response about his or her ability to learn. And the beneficial effects of learning in a stress-free atmosphere are well documented. 对老师：Not only do computers benefit students, they also make the teacher’s job easier. One advantage lies in the preparation of instructional materials. Schools and colleges can purchase educational computer programs that can be adapted to any learning situation. The authoring system automatically incorporates these teaching points into its preplanned format and then is ready to be used by several students for a long time. Moreover, computers can help teachers keep student records and chart student progress, thereby cutting down on time-consuming paperwork ３.We live in a world where knowledge is accumulated by multiplying and at the same time becomes more and more specialized. Therefore, to be a professional in a certain field today takes much longer time than ever before. ４.父母的爱：Psychology studies have shown us that parents' love sometimes has astonishingly magic power to their children. Albert Einstein's mother and Forest Gump's mother are both good examples. On the other hand, parents might do their children harm more than do bad teachers as well. The natures of those children whose parents have divorced are often severely distorted. In a word, it is rather superficial to simply say that parents are the best teachers. ５.We all heard the proverb “Beauty is only skin-deep” meaning that the outward appearance is not a valuable way to judge person’s worth ６（.听力里面的）But too often, it seems to me we apply the term “invention” only to big important items like the car or the telephone, after all we can hardly imagine surviving without them. We don’t stop to think there are literally hundreds of inventions that make our lives a little easier, a little more convenient. Let’s take something as common as the paper bag on my desk here. ７. All different kinds of play, apparently it is important for children to experiment the different roles like pretending their parents instead of the child, also through the play they learned to adapt to the norms or the rules of social groups. ８. Poverty, hunger, disease and war are man’s greatest enemies and the world would be an infinitely better place if the powerful nations devoted half as much money and effort to these problems as they do to the space race. For the first time in his history, man has the overwhelming technological resources to combat human suffering, yet he squanders them on meaningless pursuits. ９. 大城市的坏处 也可用在人口，交通，环境等 原因一：人多，交通堵塞’Avoid the rush hour’ must be the slogan of large cities the world over. Wherever you look it is people, people, people. The trains which leave or arrive every few minutes are packed: an endless procession of human sardine tins. The streets are so crowded, there is hardly room to move on the pavements. The queues for buses reach staggering proportions. It takes ages for a bus to get to you because the traffic on the roads has virtually come to a standstill. Even when a bus does at last arrive, it is so full that it can not take any more passengers. 原因二：跟大自然接触机会少 Large modern cities are too big to control. They impose their own living conditions on the people who inhibit them. City-dwellers are obliged by their environment to adopt a wholly unnatural way of life. They lose touch with the land and rhythm of nature. It is possible to live such an air-conditioned existence in a large city that you are barely conscious of the seasons. A few flowers in a public park( if you have the time to visit it) may remind you that it is spring or summer. A few leaves clinging to the pavement may remind you that it is autumn. Beyond that, what is going on nature seems totally irrelevant. All the simple, good things of life like sunshine and fresh air are at a premium. Tall buildings blot out the sun. Traffic fumes pollute the atmosphere. Even the distinction between day and night is lost. The flow of traffic goes on unceasingly and the noise never stops. 原因三：房间又贵又小：The funny thing about it all is that you pay dearly for the ‘privilege’ of living in a city. The demand for accommodation is so great that it is often impossible for ordinary people to buy a house of their own. Exorbitant rents must be paid for tiny flats which even country hens would disdain to live in. Accommodation apart, the cost of living is very high. Just everything you buy is likely to be more expensive than it would be in the country. 原因四：不安全，犯罪In addition to all this, city-dwellers live under constant threat. The crime rate in most cities is very high. Houses are burgled with alarming frequency. Cities breed crime and violence and are full of places you would be afraid to visit at night. If you think about it, they are not really fit to live in at all. １０．减轻压力，例子：Exercise is effective as a tranquilizer. Tests have shown that a 15-minute walk can have a more tranquilizing effect than the most-used tranquilizer on the market today. It has been demonstrated that people who exercise physically suffer less from anxiety and are able to work harder. In a word, physical recreation can help toughen our competitive nature. １１.Studying in group offers good opportunities to cultivate various kinds of abilities and characteristics such as cooperation and regimental spirits, which are much needed in today’s competition world. １２.In conclusion, despite some minor drawbacks such as lack of private time in study, studying in group, compared with studying alone, is instrumental rather than detrimental for a student’s education, and thus will not fail to be a wise choice. １３.Movies are so popular because they are the most fascinating and easiest escape means from increasing pressure, which comes from family, school, work, society, and so many other directions. １４.the lecture often puts students in a passive rather than an active role. As is often the case, passivity can hinder learning. Sociologists have pointed out that the teacher-student relationship is asymmetrical or unbalanced, with the teacher being in position of authority and the student having little choice but to passively absorb the information provided by the teacher. In other words, in conventional classrooms there is little opportunity for the student to become actively involved in the learning process. On the other hand, students often develop strategies for undercutting the teacher’s authority: mentally withdrawing, interrupting, and the like. Hence, much current research assumes that students and teachers influence each other instead of assuming that the influence is always in a single direction. １５. 145、同意广告让我们买一些我们真正不需要的东西。 We read advertiser’s propaganda messages in newspapers and magazines; we watch their alluring images on television. Advertisers lean heavily on propaganda to sell their products, whether the products are a brand of toothpaste, a candidate for office, or a particular political viewpoint. Propaganda is a systematic effort to influence people’s opinions, to win them over to a certain view or side. Advertisements are not necessarily concerned with what is true or false, good or bad. On the contrary, they use subtle deceptions to sway people’s opinions.
（1）广告利用降价来引诱顾客买些自己不需要的东西:Advertisers surround their products with attractive and slippery words and phrases. They use vague terms that are difficult to define and that may have different meanings to different people such as freedom and justice which have strong and affirmative overtones. For instance, the slogan of General Electric is “brings good things to life”and joy liquid detergent. Target audiences accept the product without thinking very much about what the glittering generalities mean or whether they even apply to the product. After all, how can anyone oppose
（2）广告利用名人来让顾客买些自己不需要的东西:心里攀比:In the bandwagon technique, advertisers pressure, “everyone’s doing it. Why don not you? ” This kind of advertisement often succeeds because many people have a deep desire not to e different. Furthermore, clear thinking requires hard work: analyzing a claim, researching the facts, examining both sides of an issue, and using logic to see the flaws in an argument. Many of us would rather let the advertisements do our thinking for us.
（3）广告利用说明（WORDING AND DESCRIPTION）来吸引顾客买些自己不需要的东西。 Some advertising sends a truthful and worthwhile message, for instance, some urges us not to drive drunk, to become volunteers. １６.125、同意学生应当在中学学习艺术和音乐has an effect on the individual and on a particular culture in a society. Psychologically, art enhances life by adding beauty to our surroundings. It is a source of pleasure and relaxation from the stresses of life. Socially, art plays a number of different roles by virtue of its capacity to embody symbolic significance to its audience.
（1）艺术和音乐给人很多知识，这在工作中是需要的One of the social functions of art is the communication of status differences between individuals. Social class differences in complex societies also involve aesthetic markers such as the clothing people wear and the kinds of artworks they use as decorations of their homes. According to Sahlins, social and economic class, age, and gender differences are noticeable even in the kinds of fabrics people’s clothing made from. For instance, silks in most societies are predominantly worn by women, especially those who are part of the upper classes and those who are middle-aged.
（2）艺术和音乐给人很多乐趣。Much of the dramatic and emotional impact of religion derives from its use of art. Religious rituals everywhere include song and dance performances, and the visual arts function to heighten the emotional component of religious experience in all parts of the world, by portraying important scenes and symbols from religious history and mythology. In some cultures, art and religious ritual are inseparable. For instance, among the Abelam of Papua New Guinea, all art is produced for use in rituals.
（3）学习艺术和音乐，能够促进学习其他知识。实际上是一种很好的休息
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