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caichenha 发表于 2013-8-25 10:58 ![]()
今天看到曼哈顿上的一个idiom的例句
resulting from our work, our wealth grew. 这个resulting from是错 ...
我有一个关于这个的笔记:
来自ron
顺便关于resulting from的用法:
consensus is that you just can't have 'resulting from' after a comma.
you can have it as an adjective modifier, without a comma - as in the following sentence:
the flooding resulting from the abnormally strong storms had left six inches of standing water in the street.
note that the boldface is an adjective modifier, modifying 'flooding'. it appears that on the gmat, as well as in standard written english in general,
'resulting from' after a comma is generally considered unacceptable.
我觉得,你那句话应该改成: the increasing wealth resulting from our hard work. ^^
不过,我觉得首先那句话应该改成: because of our hard work, the wealth grew. |
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