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runhongkim 发表于 2013-5-19 10:38
就差一点点了！！！！！！！！加油！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！

↖(^ω^)↗！！！加油！！！！

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楼主，我看到你的作文里用到个词toehold，请问下是原文里的用词吗？我在argument的所有文章里搜了下关于organic关键词的文章，发现居然没有一篇是和你讲的内容是一样的！！为啥会这样呀？？照例说考试所有的文章都是在这给定的100多篇文章里选的呀。。。

我找到所有关于organic food的作文，就下面3篇，请问下楼主你的文章是其中的一篇吗？
1. “Many farmers who invested in the equipment needed to make the switch from synthetic to organic fertilizers and pesticides feel that it would be too expensive to resume synthetic farming at this point. But studies of farmers who switched to organic farming last year indicate that their current crop yields are lower. Hence their purchase of organic farming equipment, a relatively minor investment compared to the losses that would result from continued lower crop yields, cannot justify persisting on an unwise course. And the choice to farm organically is financially unwise, given that it was motivated by environmental rather than economic concerns.”

2. “Sales of organic food products in this country have tripled over the past five years. If Aurora is to profit from this continuing trend, we must diversify and start selling products such as organic orange juice and organic eggs in addition to our regular product line. With the recent increase of articles in health magazines questioning the safety of milk and other food products, customers are even more likely to buy our line of organic products. And to help ensure our successful expansion, we should hire the founder of a chain of health-food stores to serve as our vice president of marketing.”

3. “In general, people are not as concerned as they were a decade ago about regulating their intake of red meat and fatty cheeses. Walk into the Heart’s Delight, a store that started selling organic fruits and vegetables and whole-grain flours in the 1960’s, and you will also find a wide selection of cheeses made with high butterfat content. Next door, the owners of the Good Earth Café, an old vegetarian restaurant, are still making a modest living, but the owners of the new House of Beef across the street are millionaires.”

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popup 发表于 2013-5-19 11:21
楼主，我看到你的作文里用到个词toehold，请问下是原文里的用词吗？我在argument的所有文章里搜了下关于org ...

不是。。。我非常确定原文的行文思路和我讲的基本上是一样的。

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popup 发表于 2013-5-19 11:21
楼主，我看到你的作文里用到个词toehold，请问下是原文里的用词吗？我在argument的所有文章里搜了下关于org ...

至于toehold我印象中就是这个词。

fanofkaka

你的作文难道是传说中的新题？？

一会再google下。

修正一个月，750在像你招手

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fanofkaka 发表于 2013-5-19 13:43
你的作文难道是传说中的新题？？

一会再google下。

谢谢作文君！！我的作文JJ里面有大意基本类似的一个~~

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子图 发表于 2013-5-19 13:33
至于toehold我印象中就是这个词。

啊。。。那奇怪了，我在gmac官网给的所有作文题库里没有找到你的这边文章，怎么会这样。。。难道gmat这个月换新题了？？

wsywsywsy

同学回想一下阅读和逻辑关键词嘛！！！！！

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popup 发表于 2013-5-19 14:10
啊。。。那奇怪了，我在gmac官网给的所有作文题库里没有找到你的这边文章，怎么会这样。。。难道gmat这个 ...

你这么说的我也不确定了。。。那不是toehold就是toexxxx。。。

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wsywsywsy 发表于 2013-5-19 14:17
同学回想一下阅读和逻辑关键词嘛！！！！！

阅读就是那四篇哦，有啥不确定的我可以帮忙确认一下，一下子说要想起点儿啥还真想不起来。。。